"Pinkie, though, was not going to have ANYPONY say she could not have that cupcake, no matter WHAT. But, the only way she would be able to obtain that amazing confectionery now, was to TAKE IT."
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This isn't exactly a good story, but it's not bad either. The ending where you had the long string of letters was unneeded and always ruins everything. I didn't like or dislike this, nor favorite. It could've been longer, better paced, and the color texts are very annoying. The pink at the very beginning was extremely hard to see. I was literally squinting.
i.imgur.com/Y3zJi.jpg
Could be better, but it was nice.
You get a score of Q/5
Wait......what did that cupcake make Pinkie do?
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Destroy the fourth wall and end the universe.
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Dang I didn't see how light the pink was either till now!
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It looks ok if you set it to dark, but then Twi's words don't show up quite as well either
This story was short and sweet.