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Spike wants to confess to Twilight about how he feels about her on Mother's Day, but the fact that he's a dragon makes this difficult and he wants her to understand. But unfortunately, the Wishing Bone got to him first...

This is a story that I found on Derpiboo.ru in the form of a synopsis (merely replaced Poison Joke with Wishing Bone), and I would like to flesh it out.

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Comments ( 30 )

Author's notes:

1. Why make this? To emulate an episode of FiM as best I can! And also to find that link I lost, unfortunately.
2. Why a Wishing Bone and not a Poison Joke? I feel that the Poison Joke angle would be a bit random, so I made a more deliberate effect with the Bone, so now it really is Spike's fault.
3. Why the cover image? 'cos it's beautiful. Even fits well with the story! Great job NyonHyon! 감사합니다!
4. Why did you put a stick a lightbulb on Sweetie's horn, you freak!? 'cos it's funny. Next stop, a potato cannon.
5. Why is Derpy there? It fits the scene, simple as that.
6. How would this take, huh!? 3 chapters max. Episode emulation after all.
7. Are you a brony? 1 to the square root.

I like where this is going

I stopped reading after so many "he said/she said" endings to dialogue. Look on the internet on how to write without falling into "said bookisums"

I like the premise. This is the only story I have seen with Twilight in this situation, so I'll be following this.

This story is the kind of one that makes you want to laugh, but at the same time kinda wants to make you kick a puppy...
I'm conflicted.

Sucker for a good Twilight is Spike's mom story.

Twilight is best dragon! I really liked this first chapter, can't wait to read some more :twilightsmile:

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Not really as that would mean that Spike would become a pony/becomes the boss of Twi.
It´s more of a family story with the means of different races = pony mom and dragon son in a pony domianted society which we all know is VERY different from the brutish dragon one.

It will be interesting to see how Twi as a dragon (how big is she anyway, does she have wings, or a horn???) will cope with it, how Spike will feel about it, how Twi´s mom gonna handle that and ofc how her friends who are all busy with their moms will try to help her to get this situation under control.
I bet their first thought will be fighting Twi (depends on her size and if she breaths fire) cause they see her as a threat.

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With #2 ... poison joke can be cleared up with a bath. A wishbone could make things permanent. :trollestia:
Twilight + Spike make best dragon team up :twilightsmile: :heart: :moustache:

1. Twilight's mom name is Twilight Velvet, and b. Celestia is Spike's mom.

My imagination of how Twilight acted upon seeing her new form:

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1692954 Really? I'm all for accuracy, so is there any evidence to back it?

Ask Lauren Faust.

Pleez continue with story?:fluttershysad: I need MOAR

I remember reading the first chapter and thinking it was really cute, would be great if you could continue the story at some point.

BTW, that derpibooru post was likely [url=derpibooru.org/11053]this.

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Haven't read this story yet, but Since Spike was hatched by Twilight, I am agreeing that Twilight is Spikes mom. Tia might've trained him in the Scroll spell, but Twilight is the reason he was born.

Are you ever going to be working on this fic? I don't want to read it if it's a dead story, but if it's being worked on I'll give this fic a go.

I'm cleaning out the stories that I have been keeping track of starting with the oldest. Could you please tell me if this story is still active?

4553238 yes, but updates on this will be purposefully slow.

And you guys got it trending! Really appreciate it!

To be honest, I forgot all about this story :twilightsheepish: So I just decided to read the first chapter again.
Loving it so far, Dragon Twilight is best Twilight :moustache:

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Lemme quote you

Loving it so far, Dragon Twilight is best Twilight :moustache:

5001507 Your not the only one who had to reread the first chapter.

Nice to see this isn't dead. This is shaping up to be quite a tale.

Nice, it is actually better than i thought it would be.

Interesting chapter, a few grammar errors... but I'm still reading. :pinkiecrazy:

YAY! I totally forgot about this Story, but now it's back and I still LOVE IT!

Wished this continued
It's really interesting

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