OH GOD THIS

I give my life,

Not for friendship, but for youuuuuuuuu

In my time there'll be noooooo one elseeeeeeeee

Crimeeeeeeee, it's the way I fly to you

I'm still in a dream of the daisy eater

BUM BUM BUM BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUM

>>135959135959

Enjoy it? I'm glad at least somepony is reading it now. The next chapter should be in a couple of days, so keep an eye out!

While I really do enjoy this story, so far the two encounter battles bother me.  Mainly in that it seems Twilight's friends are working with the one who caused the problem that made her run off in the first place.  I don't know, they seem to ignore the fact that Twilight's very first friend was just torn from her and are trying to get her to apologize for running off in grief for five years.  

On the plus side, I enjoy the parts in between.  The stealth portions are so nostalgic.  I remember that dock as well, gave me so much trouble trying to get past without alerting guards.  I look forward to seeing the rest of the adventure.

>>152324152324

There is a point to their hostility, and if you've noticed, Twilight isn't all there to begin with. All will be revealed later.

>>152354152354

Huh, I guess I missed that subtlety.  I guess I figured this version of her was very goal oriented.  I will wait until the end, although the situation that started Twi's grief still seems weird.  I look forward to finding out the answers.  Good luck with future chapters.

Well.

Now I'm self-conscious.

You should skip Daughters of Liberty as a title and just go with Substance.

Brilliant. Love it, Love the MGS series.

For the sequels I would love to see the deeper storyline of the MGS series appear in them (i.e la le lu li lo and Dr Clarke and Grey fox)

If you need help with MGS 4, I suggest watching a detailed play through on youtube

Cheers

Okay then... I just found this and I really hope this is gonna be as epic as it should be: straight to my to read list