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That ending... I love it
Awesome work! As always!
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Decent story. Could have been a tiny bit longer. It was mildly confusing.
Wonderful.
Reminded me of this picture.
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So Sad!
This us touching. Though, an army passing by and a woman (or mare in this case) waiting for one. Reminds me of that Twilight Zone Episode, in which troops pass by this women's house,though, turns out that they,and she, are all ghosts
All the feels D:
0 Dislikes? Good, i Don't have to do genocide again this week.
So... in a nutshell, he dies and then she waits with neither food nor form of nourishment and dies as well and then he sees her again?
1670970 Now 1 dislike. Might need to reconsider that.
Not that it's not me; I liked this. The simplicity of the story and the emotions Twilight portrays are very personal, strong, and saddening. The ending really got me, too. Not great, but certainly strong enough to deserve some likes.
1671101
Yeah, its a very good story.
*Sheathes Katana*
Now, where's my AK..?
i liked this story, but if it hadn't been so long since he disappeared and she had a sadder tone it would've probably helped the story as a whole, it also had the potential to be the next my lil' dashie, maybe if it was longer, with writing the scene and doing the journal days/months/years after, couldn't help to have more character developement to help the reader connect with the characters
6.5-7/10 nifty story, but too short and undescriptive, and this is personally just me, but I think the ending fell short, but ive noticed everypony in the comments saying otherwise, so make of that what you willdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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you mean the one with RDS and extended mags? i think i left it at sugarcube corner after i heard that loud noise yesterday... oh wait dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png
pinky said she'd hold it for me until i got back, but i forgot to go get it, now pinky has it... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
1671358
Oh, great. We alls gunna die.
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no, I will defeat pinky with a normal solution for I zm a normal pony, and i will die a normal death, which will likely include the sacrefice of children,puppies,crayons, and a picture of twilight in hea-er a normal pony family. because I am a normal pony
1671496
Perfectly normal.
1671065 I don't think he died, but I think he knew he'd likely never return from his mission.