Greetings people.  Just a heads up.  This is indeed my first attempt at writing a fan fic.  As such, I want anybody who feels like being brutally honest with me to be brutally honest with me.  Even if you have to track me down to beat me for writing such filth...well, I won't tell you where I live, but I'm sure that if you're angry enough you can find out.  Only way I'd improve is if I learn what I did wrong.  Anyways, that's all.

Meh, there are a few mistakes but it's a good concept.

I am left wondering how is twilight going to destroy/get the town destroyed.

Oh boy, this should be good.  Twilight, what are you getting yourself into??

This is excellent, especially for a first fic!

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This fic is very amusing, please update soon!

Hilarious. Moar!!!

This is great, I loved the Rarity2 line.

Can't wait for more 5/5 :D

Poor zecora

lol

Heh, Go Twilight, you show 'em!

Excellent

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

haha this is some funny stuff especially medusa sparkle!

Another hilarious chapter! Really, I can just picture the absurdity of a bunch of snakes trying to hoist a Grizzy bear into a tree. Sounds like something Discord would come up with.

DOOM!!!

The town will get destroyed by epic battle between Twilight's inventions and Angel's army.

Excellent

Sun'Tzoof! That is just hilarious!

great

@_@ Poor, poor Twilight ;w;