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Stories about Immortality327 stories ·289 members

One Last Immortal Night

The ending of a May-Eternity romance. A moment destined to come yet unspoken of. A life dwindling and dying away, but a love shining brighter than ever. This is a one-shot written on a whim.

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kyle131996

kyle131996 #1 · Nov 20th, 2012 · · ·

i don't think she is immortal but still good story

Regidar

Regidar #2 · Nov 20th, 2012 · · ·

Goodnight, goodnight.

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #3 · Nov 20th, 2012 · · ·

One small detail. You said SA fell out of the bed. And then said the mattress was around him.

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #4 · Nov 20th, 2012 · · 1 ·

Beautiful. Painful but beautiful. Silently. Direct. To the point. Concise. Everything it should be.

Reminds me of the story where Spike had to deal with Twilight dying of old age FIRST of the mane six.

The Tyrannical

The Tyrannical #5 · Nov 20th, 2012 · · ·

Short, but effective.

You get a B/10

Thithle Candytufth

Thithle Candytufth #6 · Nov 20th, 2012 · · ·

1648653 No, sorry, that's a little misread on your part, it says the edges of the comforter fell on the floor. But thanks a lot for the favorable review!