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Expecting another chapter?
Well I thought about it for a while, and I've come to a small conclusion.
"Scourging of Equestria" is just a small buildup to show you what happens to Isan. I honestly messed up in many places, including plot and character development, but I'm not a pro at this, so forgive me on that half.
As you know by now from obvious circumstances, if there is a villain; there is a hero. I've thought hard on how I want this story to go down and I have to an idea of what must happen.
Many questions are asked. Such as what happened during the war against the dead? What of Twilight and the others? I will reveal those parts most likely during flashbacks of some sort, since I don't have the space nor time to write it.
Here's what I will leak: Equestria is weakened by the destruction of war against the dead, catching the attention of their infamous neighbors. With their devious beaks, they plan to rupture the hearts of their sister nation, ignoring the massive armies of the dead. However, that will be their final mistake, as they leave the defenses wide to the dead.
Equestria is in deep trouble, with not only the armies of their fallen comrades attacking them, but with the ruthless nation of Griffon attacking as well. Two new factions are born from the circumstances, but will they be able to settle old differences aside, to face the true threat?
As for the mysterious hero? You'll find him quite interesting, I'm sure.
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The story's interesting despite being very confusing at times. There's just a thing (along a few others) that's bugging me a shred more than anything else. The main villain's name is evidently Isan, but in chapter 1 where they apparently confronts him Pinkie said "I-Is that r-really you Martin?". Who is Martin? I read through the whole story and didn't find anything about a Martin.







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