When learning that Twilight won’t be able to spend Hearth’s Warming with her family, the Apple family plans to give the Princess of Friendship a Hearth’s Warming she will never forget.
Life is hard for Applejack, because she's a farm pony, because she's an earth pony, but mostly because her body is composed of enigmatic and mysterious dark matter.
I would appreciate it if you don't just leave hate comments, so lets lay down some rules.
1. no hate comments, you can leave constructive criticism and dislike story, but no hate comments. If you leave them I will just delete them when I see them.
2. I couldn't think of another rule.
3. at least make your hate comments funny or worth leaving up for a few days.
I think this story has potential. Normally I read stories in this part of the site for laughs but what I see her is something that with a bit of work, could be popular. It is hard to read in the state it is in but I like the story itself so I'll give you an upvote.
I would appreciate it if you don't just leave hate comments, so lets lay down some rules.
1. no hate comments, you can leave constructive criticism and dislike story, but no hate comments. If you leave them I will just delete them when I see them.
2. I couldn't think of another rule.
3. at least make your hate comments funny or worth leaving up for a few days.
4. obviously I can think of more rules now, soooooooo....
5. no inappropriate hate comments/rants. This is a site about my little pony, so there will probably be children on this site.
6. I get it, you don't like my story. could you please shut up about it?
7. and honestly people, if you leave a hate comment, I will go too your user page and explain how many ways you are a derp.
I think this story has potential. Normally I read stories in this part of the site for laughs but what I see her is something that with a bit of work, could be popular. It is hard to read in the state it is in but I like the story itself so I'll give you an upvote.