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Pony-Berserker


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A classical tragedy. A travelling salespony returns to Ponyville but nopony actually wants to buy anything from him. Nopony even wants to see him. Out of anger, Twilight casts a gravity-reversing spell on him while he is outdoors, and he begins to fly towards the outer space. Will she be able to save him?

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My first tragedy fic (with some humorous scenes, though).

The reference in the title is probably obvious but if, for some reason, someone doesn't get it, read this article.

Remember to rate the story ;)

Sooo Baumgartner is like Rainbow Dash
First person to break the sound barrier without any help :rainbowderp:

The title is so much win. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait...what? :derpyderp1:
*read later*

Anti-gravity spell?
Like in this comic? Written as a tragedy instead of comedy? Seems like a fresh idea to me. Cool. :twilightsmile:
equestria.fadri.org/comics/052-GravityRises.jpg

1632870>>1633034
Thank you :raritywink:

1633050
Thanks :raritywink:
And, I've seen this comic yesterday (I had the story written a few days ago) but it's disturbing because... it's not pseudo-physically correct - Twilight wouldn't be able to hit the moon as it has it's own gravitational force and reversing it would result in twilight deflecting off it or something like that (over-analyzing is fun, fun, fun :twilightsheepish: )

1633072 If you're starting to apply physics to this, she should have died long before she reached the moon from lack of oxygen, and her huge acceleration would have caused her to catch fire quickly. Also, if you like overanalyzing things, take a look at this page.

1633112

Oh, oxygen is different story (and I took it into consideration in this fic, btw). But her dead body wouldn't hit the moon anyway :twistnerd:
And she wouldn't catch fire while leaving the atmosphere. You can catch fire while entering it. :twistnerd: :twistnerd:
And thanks for the link. Looks interesting :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

1633171 Yeah, you're probably right. Rather would she freeze to ice, what with the temperatures in space.

SPAAAAAAAACE!!!

(pretend AJ is the dead guy from the book)
:ajsmug: how about a...
:twilightangry2: GET AWAY
:applejackconfused: wha...?
ZOOM
:twilightsmile: heheh...
:moustache: uhh... twilight?
:twilightoops: oops.

LATER...
:ajbemused: WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME?!

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