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I'll give this a read tomorrow for sure. *nods*
This looks interesting! Reading time!
Edit: Okay read it! It was awesome and it's always nice when other sentient species get in on the action.
I'm not much of one to check for errors but I spotted this:
'to hear the unicorn in complete subion was'
I do believe you were aiming for 'submission', not 'subion'.
And addressing any potential haters... Saying that (Talking bull)X(Pony) is bad
is like saying that (Human)X(Pony) is bad. So if you like the human stuff, then there
is no real excuse to hate on the bull.
I'm not a big fan of Rarity being shipped with anyone otherthan spike, but this was hawt. Rarity with large, quivering mammaries? I can't get the image out of my head now. Kinda sucks though that Applejack is fine letting Samual get in on the action but not Spike. I like to think Twilight is similarly dominating her assistant over at the library while this is happening...but without another guy.
Let me guess:
Did Milky Way inspired his?
Another question: this does set in the same universe as Suck and your other fics, rigth?
1631174 Yeah, MW was what inspired me, but naw, this is just a one-shot.
1630704 Well, if I'm hit with another bit of inspiration, maybe Spike'll be next on the Rarity ride.
1630672 thanks for the correction. Though I could have sworn I'd written "submission." Ah well, happens. Glad you like.
This:
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And This:
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my brain just....
and then I 
I mean with Rarity 
and Applejack 
Its so hot but so 
I was like
I don't know, I mean sure it has a loving relationship between two mares but why the bull? Comments as admin of Fillyfoolers.
Now as a reader. It was funny, breast enlargements in Equestria, slap the knee kind of funny. Although I don't really get how AJ would be alright for Rarity to get mated to a bull and I didn't like the dildos, it's just a personal thing. So I liked it, if another fic were to take that idea further I would read it. Also you get a thumbs up for mentioning Lunashy
Well, it was somewhat/pretty interesting, though maybe too short to fully appreciate.
Short and....apple flavored? Apples are sweet, right?
Sequal Please?
Rarity likes being dominated? that's not something I would have expected.
Ahh, you read my mind. :P After seeing all of Milky Way's stuff, I was highly inclined to write a huge-udder pony fic as well. But I was already working on other stuff, and of course, incredibly lazy as usual.
With people seeming to enjoy it, we should definitely work together to make some more huge-teated pony goodness!
I only have one way to describe this:
THE ARISTOCRATS!
1658322 Huh?
1658819 This
1658322 hellsing ultimate abridged episode 3 reference?
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I guess this story is udderly ridiculous
In the immortal words of the all knowing and all powerful Tobuscus:
Ot-hot-hot-hot-hot-hot-hot.
Come on! this NEEDS more chapters.
AND a sequel showing Fluttershy's reaction to Luna's little "gift"
Love it, but wished it had more AJ on Raritits action
Really fun idea, I just wished you hadn't taken it so far. I think Applejack wouldn't try to push Rarity so hard. If she pushes Rarity beyond her limit she'll get and Applejack will get nothing. She would be a little more cautious.
Hello! Good Grammar Directory prereader here again to deliver a long-awaited assessment of your writing. Three instances of commas instead of semicolons as well as one instance of a period followed by a conjunction and and unnecessary comma. This story is in need of a similar punctuation editing pass as the one I reviewed previously.
You may resubmit after editing if you wish.