A strange stallion wakes up in the middle of the Everfree Forest.
A new talking orange weasel-like creature arrives at Fluttershy's Cottage
How will ponyville cope with these creatures from haven city? (hint)
Will the princesses face the wrath of his inner darkness or the purity of his inner light?( HINT)
How did they even get to this world?
An most importantly, will the weasel ever get his pants back(If you haven't gotten the crossover by now read the story)
I do not own the cover pic, nor My Little Pony nor *Spoilers*Jak and Daxter
First Story
Chapters (2)
What??? A Jak and Daxter crossover?! Must read.
Edit: After reading, good story in general. Wall of text though, you need to break up your paragraphs. Saw some grammar issues, I'd recommend getting a proofreader and/or editor. Good job otherwise, I'll be following this.
Excellent work. Been waiting for a Jak and Daxter crossover, this is probably the first.
You need to break up the paragraphs though as the guy above mentioned, and keep a look out for grammar mistakes. Otherwise, good job!
1628374 1626674 it is As far as I know Thanks for the Tips this is my first fic so don't be to critical also please tell me if i stray from Jak and Daxter's personality. I don't have a lot of free time but I will try to update soon.
Lastly I'm given out an adorable derpy
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oh derpy, you so adorable!
Ok got a couple new ideas for stories that i will also write but need help deciding.
1. Adam Jenson and Corvo Attano in Equestria
2. Gaige the Mechromancer In Equestria
3. Ichigo Kurasaki in Equestria
4. Scott Pilgrim and Ramona Flowers in Equestria
*all are ponified because this is funny
These will all eventuall be writen and i probably will update each at random depending on what i feel like. Let the voting commence
1630575 Do want derpy or do want story?
1626674>>1628374>>1630575>>1633797 Read This story now
Faith and Doubt and its sequel (in the works) the Abundance
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Pretty good. I was a fan of Jak 2. It was my favorite actually.
1811695 same here it was much harder than 1 or 3
1811759 I just liked to go driving and use that one vehicle that jumped and while in the air turn the boost on so I would go farther. It was also fun to just go on the hover-board and taunt the raiders.
You should put Pecker in this story
1828933 no, this is gonna be a jak and daxter only story maybe for a non canon troll chapter but not in the main story and only if i feel like it though thanks for the feed back
need you to hurry this is an awsome story so far
Dude, I am a DIE HARD J&D fan, so I am very into this already, I'll be watchin you, chilli pepper.
I am sorry if you feel i stole this story idea from you. I assure you i did not. If it makes you feel better i had actually started mine back in october before temporarily giving it up as a bad job
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no i don't feel that way at all. the more the merrier.
It just that the comment that i replied to on your story replied to another comment that claimed that yours was the only one and my compulsion riddled brain drove me to correct this perceived mistake. So for our shared love of Jak and Daxter and in the spirit of Tolerance i gift unto you a cuteness coma
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I love this story its so awesome!!!!!
1879835Um... That filly has some VERY soulless eyes. -shudders-
Anyway, why isn't this fic updated?! It's good, and I need more!
2028777 i have a shit ton of schoolwork but i will update relatively soon and for your patience and to speed up your wait i give you a cuteness coma
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2028788D'awwww cute derpy.
I was wondering why you haven't updated man. This story came out before mine and i have like almost 20 more chapters now. take your time though,
2125957 i dont have much free time with school and such but i do have a detailed plan for next chapter all thats left to do is write it.
im also making a dark fic along side this to vent some hatred so bear with me plz
*musical tone* I will folllow you....
And now, let the Reference Guessing Games begin!!!
2028788 *falls into coma*
This is pretty good. I'm not really a fan of human's or anything that was humanoid turning into a pony, but this is pretty damn good. Have been a fan of the Jak and Daxter series for as long as I can remember.
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'Seems a bit rushed, kinda short, and has a few grammatical errors, but otherwise pretty good. I hope this pans out well.*hints at wanting to help correct errors*
A bit too short, but much better grammar! Maybe if you could find an unconfusing way to mesh these chapters together.
need..............mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore
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Not sure if that is an insult?
Great story. Nice choice in gaming characters jak And daxter is a good set of games.