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LysanderasD


For them, a dream. Like thousands of other dreams. For you, a story. Like thousands of other stories.

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Equestria and its allies, including the newly reintroduced Crystal Kingdom, have pushed back their aggressors and won a short but brutal war against the extremist gryphon empire... but it has come at a price--Celestia, the divine, the unkillable, struck down in the dark by a toxin none save the gryphons even knew existed.

Now the responsibility of rebuilding and ruling Equestria falls straight onto Luna's back--or it would have. She has a more immediate problem in dealing with a power-hungry, dominating unicorn known as Trine, who has stolen her throne and locked her in her own dungeon. Now she has to get out and get even--but if she can't trust her own little ponies, who can she trust? And what about Trine's shifty second-in-command, singer-turned-swordfighter Sole Star?

Meanwhile, Canterlot is being blasted by a massive storm, and Blaze Bright thinks she knows who's behind it. She's going to put a stop to it, and so help her, Sole Star's sister Solemn is going to come along for the ride!

Co-authored by Apolline Allura. Will feature OCxOC, so don't worry, Luna is safe.

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Lysander: Massive thank you to AestheticB, whose amazing story The Immortal Game was the primary impetus for crafting this tale. Also a sincere thank you to Diomedes, and by extension the Canterlot dot com writing staff, for allowing us to work within a context they have proposed.

I acknowledge that this is a rather sharp starting point and yes, it would do well for us at some point to go back and write out exactly the events that have led to this point. I cannot say for certain whether anything will ever come of that; let us finish this story first, and then we'll talk about others.

This story was proposed and most of the chapter was written before the premiere of season three; that said, we will still attempt to take season three's premiere into account. However, any events that happen in any episodes past S03E02 will be summarily ignored for purposes of continuity.

Also, to assuage those of you who saw the romance tag and panicked, don't, because Luna is not involved in the romance.

Allura: Okay, so Chapter 1: Moonset is complete. All things said and done, it looks like something I’d love to have ready at any given time. Granted, I have standards when it comes to ponyfics. Anyway. We’re doing great. ... Though there are maybe a few things in flux with at least one character, I’m glad at how we’re also taking S3 stuff into account. The brainstorm sessions really do the trick, and in that respect, I think I’m able to pull my own weight a little better. This was a great beginning and I really hope the readers love it. (IMAGINE IF WE GOT FEATURED) All things said, I’ll do better come chapter two.

Nice concept and writing style. Looking forward to Chapt 2 :twilightsmile:

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