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  • T The Bounty of a Wish

    What is the price for a simple wish to come true?
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  • 106w, 3d
    Hmm, This should be interesting.

    Ive submitted a story. Not much else from that. I hope its received well. It you wish to look at it before it is accepted or not here is the link, Reviews are highly encouraged!

    4 comments · 76 views
  • 136w, 4h
    Suddenly messages.

    Yay! i am finally getting a decent amount of request to read peoples stories!

    so far here are the stories i am about to or have reviewed.

    Red-Heart: Ive already done the first review on the first chapter and soon the others will be done within the next hour.

    Well this is new...: Arrrgh I just finished this story (up to chapter 14) and ill tell you what. My soon to be review on that one is not going to be pretty. I was so frustrated reading it after about chapter 5-6.

    How equestria became filthy: A comedy about Derpy! What could go wrong? Well a number of things but this was a decent story for a good giggle or two.

    Missing Pieces: A young writers first attempt on romance and I shamefully destroyed it. Its cute but nothing serious, to get the full rant go look for yourself.

    Everfire: One of the first reviews i have done on this site. This was back during the February write off. Review says it all.

    The Equestrian Resistance: (Warning! Crossover about Starcraft!) This is possibly the best crossover for Starcraft and i reviewed the shit out of this story. Seriously i think I rewrote half of his main parts. To see me go full nerd click on it and check it out.

    Spread Your Wings and Fly: A short and sweet review.

    Where the Land Meets the Sky: Another short story with a short review.


    Everyday Adventures! Season 1: Soon to be read and reviewed.

    A Daring Do and Epsilon Hoof Tale: The Teardrop Keystone: Also soon to be read and reviewed.

    And I think that's all of the reviews I did? I am pretty sure I did more but until I can find them.. here you go to pass time!

    10 comments · 103 views
  • 136w, 6d
    Thank you Youtube!

    1 comments · 126 views
  • 137w, 2d
    Surprise Story!

    Surprise! Just submitted it and I am looking forward to how well it does. (Or fails)

    0 comments · 58 views
  • 137w, 4d
    Time to go outside.

    Woo. 16 million words read. Woo.

    Anyone know how many words are in This story? Took me a long time to finally finish it.

    Also i have ran out of things to read, Send me stories!

    4 comments · 103 views
  • ...

The Heart of stone had finally showed up when all was lost, and the city was saved. Its power cleansed the land of which everypony stood upon. What it didn't clean though, were the ponies themselves. Dark shards seen growing from the ground are starting to show up on some of the crystal ponies. The battle was won that day, but not the war.

Note: For the best results please read on a computer in Serif, Small, Dark. This story is NOT phone friendly.

First Published
14th Nov 2012
Last Modified
15th Nov 2012
#2 · 106w, 2d ago · · · The Sneeze ·

The Devil - Dawnbringer

#3 · 106w, 1d ago · · · The Sneeze ·

What the hell is this!? I dont get a single reviw from you and then you show up out of the blue with a fucking story!? Why do you hate me :fluttercry:?

#4 · 104w, 1d ago · · · Black Mind ·

Absolutely wonderful! :pinkiehappy: I love all of the effects in use throughout this story, they add to the feeling of this world, as well as the emotional and mental state of the characters. The premise itself is also very sound in the show's fiction, which is always great to see in a story of this nature, and you're splendid writing and character development make this a more than interesting story! This coupled with your fantastic vocabulary (which I have praised before) have me absolutely BEGGING for more! :rainbowkiss:

I had high expectations, and so far, you have gone beyond meeting them

Can't wait for more!:scootangel:


#5 · 104w, 12h ago · · · Black Mind ·


Thanks. I needed that. Perhaps I'll get out of the corner I wrote myself into.

#6 · 104w, 1h ago · · · Black Mind ·

Great story so far... you have a few spelling mistakes here and there (mostly your/you're mix-ups) but nothing that I can't forgive.  Can't wait for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:  

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