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    tony1685's Stories (13)

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      29,394 words · 9,478 views · 499 likes · 29 dislikes
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      72,110 words · 1,092 views · 175 likes · 15 dislikes
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    Post Haste and Rainbow Dash have been with each other for three months and life has been great. Then, every coltfriend's worst nightmare happens. No, not an angry ex, how is that even possible?

    The sequel to "New World, New Beginning." I suggest reading that first. Up to you, just saying...

    First Published
    8th Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    19th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 236 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh hey, it's the sequel that I was waiting fo :twilightsmile:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    J.K. Rowling arch-nemesis of Equestria she must be stopped! :pinkiegasp:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome, cant wait for more.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Have to love pinkie pie.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Hippogriff, town of ponies and griffons.

    Keyword: griffon.

    Only known griffon in brony terms: Gilda

    So Gilda's gonna make an appearance? Maybe not? :applejackunsure:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>117496

    I'd say not. But you never know...:pinkiecrazy:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    First reaction: YAY SEQUEL! :pinkiehappy:

    Second reaction: Hippogriff? What? :rainbowhuh:

    Third reaction: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR! :flutterrage:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    moar plz.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :yay: is what I must say,

    for I have been waiting for this sequel since I finished this story's first part yesterday.

    I pulled a Zecora.:trollestia:

    Great sequel so far.  I can hardly wait until the next chapter!  MOAR!  I mean, please, if, I mean, um, if that's O.K. with you.:fluttershysad::yay:

    I'm going to guess that the thing that Postie is going to have to face that is worse than an angry ex., is either Rainbow's Dad, or (as one myself,) an older brother of Rainbow Dash's.  Or it could be an angry former best friend of Rainbow's, who we all know by the name of Gilda.

    Anyway, please write more of this great story soon.:twilightsmile::eeyup:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>118571Off topic, but I just noticed that we can edit and even delete our own comments now.

    As a follow-up to my last comment, I'm even more confident that it is the Dad (and probably Mom) thing, based on the title of the story.

    A little off topic, but I originally thought that the "Parental" part in the title had to do with Dash getting pregnant, and her and Postie haveing trouble raising a foal.:twilightblush:  It could still be the case I guess, but I suppose probably not.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>117810

    I chose Hippogriff because...!

    As you no doubt know, the hippogriff is half eagle, half horse. Fitting, seeing that the town of Hippogriff has a population of about half ponies and half griffons.

    HOWEVER, there is another layer.

    In Greek mythology, the hippogriff was what would result when a griffon mated with a mare. Seeing as the town is a labour of both ponies and griffons, it was perfect, as distrubing as that may be.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Try adding a Felmeere.

    Basically a skeletal flaming horse from the twisting nether.

    JUST KIDDING! (that does sound badass tho...)

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>118868

    Exactly what I was worried about...

    So who sent the letter? A crazy Ex (worst nightmare) of dash *cough* Gilda *cough*, or some creepy hippogriff... :pinkiesick:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>125483

    ... :rainbowhuh:

    I was explaining my reasoning behind the town's name. Where the hell did you get the idea that I was gonna introduce a freaking hippogriff!?

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    FIRST!!!

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>127899

    Sweet Zombie Jesus!

    The chapter hasn't even been up for 5 minutes!

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    O.k, know for the serious buisness.

    What would "Post Haste" do if Dasies father knew he wasn't actually a member of there species??

    Answer: Hilarity Follows

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>127900

    Well...its cause Im a badass like that.:ajsmug:

    And also I got nothing to do early in the morning so might as well read some fan-fictions and comment on stories I like.:twilightsheepish:

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    why do i have the distinct impression that the next chapter will involve a scary dad with rusty hooks?:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I want moar, pleaze. I look forward to the "Meet the Parents" chapter. I'm not worried, b/c the tone of this fic and its predecessor is light, hilarious and fun. If the parents are anything like your other OC's then I expect to be very entertained. For some reason I can't explain i liked the fact the kitchen is now clean. idk why though.

    Peace Out.  

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    haha awesome and funny, funny and awesome.

    and AJ don't need no man! :ajsmug:

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>128428

    She will after her urges come up.....:ajsmug:

    If you get what I mean:raritywink:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i wouldnt have expected aj to swear:derpyderp2:

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>128992

    To be fair, she is pretty angry. I'd be pretty angry too if I were in her position...

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>129134 i just thought it was postie rubbing off on them

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>129155

    Nope. Besides, I'm pretty sure we've heard characters say 'damn' before in-show.

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>129158 in the show? i highly doubt it

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I look forward to reading what happens next in your story

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hah, but alright new chapter....finally,heh

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Still a great story.:twilightsmile:

    Hm.  I may just have to try making some of these baked goods next year or so.  Why next year or so?  Well, because I don't turn 21 until November 1st.:pinkiehappy:

    I also support FlutterMac.:yay::eeyup:

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    yay new chapter

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Fluttermac is best ship!  :eeyup::yay:

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    One moment, I need to kick myself in the pants. I accidentally deleted a comment. :facehoof:

    Anyway, it was asking about a ponified Russia.

    My response? We already have a Stalliongrad. We shall build from there.

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Excellent

    #37 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    No comment on the fact that Twilight appears to be pole-dancing at the end there?

    #38 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Its the quite ones you have to look out for.

    #39 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>149667

    Which has some worrying implications for Big Macintosh's relationship further down the line...

    #40 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I gotta say.... Good chapter:eeyup:

    #41 · Chapter 3 · 68w, 2h ago · · ·
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    I'd like to apologise to all my readers for the rather hefty delay.

    Kinda stuck with creating the town of Hippogriff and the first meeting with Rainbow's father.

    #43 · Chapter 4 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Nice.:pinkiehappy:

    #44 · Chapter 4 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I've seen "Tercel" used for male griffons in other stories (or at least one other) before too, so I think you're O.K. with using the term here.

    Also: Dat 'stache.:moustache:

    #45 · Chapter 4 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    great

    #46 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh dear... :twilightsheepish:

    #47 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    .........RD:This is totally what it looks like....:rainbowwild:

    #48 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yes! i finally found this story again! I read this awhile back before I started tracking all my stories, so glad i found it again.

    #49 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmph! Us 'stupid Americans' flew to Uranus! :rainbowdetermined2:

    #50 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>274742

    I'm just commenting on your stupid way of spelling stuff compared to the rest of the English-speaking world.

    You had no reason to butcher the English language.

    #51 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>274909

    'Merica.  Fuck yeah!

    #52 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>274909

    Wind them up. Revert to "Mum" in the next chapter. Just to keep things interesting.

    #53 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    America FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    i love this fic and it's predecessor so much, their just really well made, lighthearted, d'awww worthy, hilarious ship fics. I love how nothing gets too depressing and how you leave each chapter on a fairly high note. I'm just picturing Thunderhead with a Freddy Mercury style Mustache. Also he's like the best OC parent ever.

    Peace Out.  

    #54 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>274909 Haha chill man...

    Look, it all depends on where you were raised, right? To me, 'mum' sounds off(as do other English words excluded from American vocabulary), putting aside a general lack of exposure to it beforehand(resulting in its somewhat 'alien' or strange appearence, from my point of view), because of my accent. If I heard someone with a thick British accent pronounce 'mom', I'd probobly laugh because it would probobly be funny sounding. Just as it would be funny for me(with an American accent) to pronounce it 'mum'. I hope you know I was kidding, though! I'm really into this story, and would only rather you keep the American spelling for accuracy's sake. I mean, the ponies all have American accents, so it makes sense canonicaly to spell as such. But seriously, 'Butchering the English language'? Seems to be a bit of an extreme point of view, if you're serious. Can't we all just get along? In the end, it doesn't kill anybody. Or at least, as far as i'm aware it doesn't. Anywho! I hope the next chapter comes soon, but I'd say take your time if you need it. You can't rush perfection!

    :heart:

    #55 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “This isn’t what it looks like.”:rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

    >>274909 AaaAaaaww!  But butchering the English language is so much FUN!:trollestia::scootangel:  (Just kidding.)

    Hm, I can't believe no one's said this yet (O.K., I can.): Thank you for spelling "mom" as "mom".

    Both "mom" and "mum" are shortened versions of the word "mother", but "mother" has no "u's".:pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

    Yet another great chapter.:eeyup::yay:

    #56 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>276114

    Don't tempt me, bro,

    >>276472

    Historical fact: The United States considered using German as their national language to distance themselves even further from the British. In the end, they simply went and mangled the spelling of the language instead.

    #57 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>278485 Well. Ok. I guess my main problem is that its not actually a big deal and I dont care :rainbowlaugh: That pretty cool though, to imagine i might be speaking German right now...                        Did I say cool? I meant terrifying:twilightoops:

    #58 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>278704

    And I, as an Australian, could be speaking Dutch. Scary thoughts.

    Also, nothing on Tranquil Sky, Rainbow's mother and pervert?

    #59 · Chapter 5 · 63w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>281052 Rainbows pervy mother? I have no objections:rainbowwild: and her dads mustache is my hero. I noticed in there that Post Haste 'smiled sadly'( or something to that effect) when Rainbow hugged her mother. Im thinking we'll see something if Post's past in there. Really interested in whatll come next, and I loved RDs parents. Good Show on their characters, very unique and entertaining:twilightsmile:

    #60 · Chapter 6 · 62w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Now this is funny stuff with the parents.

    #61 · Chapter 6 · 62w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Tracking. That is all.

    ALLONS-Y!!!

    #62 · Chapter 6 · 62w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Damn Parents......:trollestia::trollestia:

    #63 · Chapter 6 · 62w, 1h ago · · ·
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    I've realised that the only time I get a significant number of comments on a chapter is when either something incredibly stupid or hilarious happens, or when I post something that gets a lot of peoples' attention in the Author's Notes.

    Therefore...

    Twilight is best pony. Discuss.

    #64 · Chapter 6 · 61w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I like the way you made Rain and Postie a direct parallel to Thunder and Tranquil. Also I think Thunder is now my favorite oc. The character is awesome and I like how you put a lot of Rainbow's personality into him as well as making him both scary and funny. Then again all the characters you've introduced us to are extremely likeable and distinct. I think this sequel is underrated  kinda like movie 2010: The Year we Made Contact.

    #65 · Chapter 6 · 61w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>328003

    It wasn't intended to be a direct parallel, just something eerily similar.

    But hey, I'll take all the praise you give me. My ego is fragile at the best of times...

    #66 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    She poured the tea...LIKE A BAWS!

    But in Reality, what is the deal with Postie and his mom....might have been something about it earlier but I guess I forgot:ajsleepy:

    #67 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Perhaps your next move should be to have Tranquil give Postie an open invitation to cry on her shoulder if he ever wants to talk about it? She's like his mom now, and it's a Mom's job to be there for their children when they're hurting.

    #68 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>360441 Yes. This.

    #69 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>360441 because he now part of the family, but considering all things said, maybe his mother was abusive in his previous life? And his father was a drunkard and aggressive?

    #70 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Just write this thing in German, that way no spelling issues! Also it will sound revolting! Also, excited for next chap, even if you don't know where to go

    #71 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>361088 the site doesnt accept non-english stories

    #72 · Chapter 7 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Again, :yay: for our stupid American spelling.

    #73 · Chapter 7 · 59w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hm.... I am interested! Onward, with the story!

    ~Parajack :twilightsheepish:

    #74 · Chapter 8 · 58w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Also, an apology for how late this is. I just got very stuck.

    #75 · Chapter 8 · 58w, 7h ago · · ·
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    We will consider forgiving you for being this late.

    Maybe.

    #76 · Chapter 8 · 58w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>432988 consider yourself forgiven Tony :derpytongue2:

    #77 · Chapter 8 · 58w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>432559

    You now can has forgiveness :pinkiehappy:

    #78 · Chapter 8 · 57w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I forgive you.

    Wow, this chapter was deep.  It also added more to the character of Post Haste.

    This chapter was sad, but it was also a good one.

    #79 · Chapter 8 · 57w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>443301

    OH THANK CELESTIA!

    I was really worried that I was being too... I can't think of the word at the moment, but it certainly isn't a good one. I'm just glad that Postie's past doesn't come across as, well, over the top.

    #80 · Chapter 8 · 57w, 5d ago · · ·
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    It is really sad, but it's also sadly believeable.  I mean, stuff like that really does happen on Earth sometimes, unfortunately.  Everyone grieves differently, and losing your mother at an ealy aged is very sad and can be traumatising, such as is this case.

    Please keep up the really good work.

    #81 · Chapter 8 · 57w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>443354

    Actually, I never really specify his age. Just realised that... :twilightsheepish:

    I've always thought of Post Haste as being in his early 20s, around 21, maybe. So not that young. Still, to have the only one who was there at all for you to take their own life...

    Yeah, traumatizing.

    #82 · Chapter 8 · 57w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>443375 I may have been identifying with Postie.  I lost my Mom 8 years ago when I was 12, so I guess that I was just projecting part of my life as a part of his life when I was reading this.  It was different for me: There were plenty of other people there for me, and Mom didn't take her own life, she was murdered.  It was still traumatizing anyway.

    #83 · Chapter 9 · 57w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Parents *sigh* haha.

    #84 · Chapter 9 · 57w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Awesome, an update! Great chapter, keep up the amazing work!

    #85 · Chapter 9 · 57w, 13h ago · · ·
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    How do you start a fire with tomato juice, an onion, and a spatula?

    My answer: very carefully.:ajsmug:

    #86 · Chapter 9 · 57w, 11h ago · · ·
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    I'm not even kidding when I say Tranquil and Thunder are awesome. They're the cool middle aged people you actually want to talk to.  I like your oc's.

    >>461359

    You'd be surprised. There are people that can't boil an egg.

    #87 · Chapter 9 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>462028

    Actually, the kitchen fire was meant to be a mix of Epic Fail, Achievements In Ignorance, Noodle Incident and Beyond the Impossible. After all, she set fire to a cloud house. Something made entirely of water vapour. That's special, even for a place like Equestria.

    #88 · Chapter 9 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I was enjoying this story too much, now I have to wait for the next chapter in order to continue reading :fluttercry:

    I shall wait until then :U

    #89 · Chapter 10 · 56w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Fist...

    Author, Y U NO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS FASTERS?!?!

    I know that your tring your best though if you can't. If you could though that would be nice. I added the meme just as a finishing touch.

    #90 · Chapter 10 · 56w, 1d ago · · ·
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    “I bet that won’t be the only thing,”

    ...What a charming comeback, wow.

    And... Oh shit, Gilda!

    The plot thickens.

    Short, but sweet chapter, Tony. Thanks for the update.

    #91 · Chapter 9 · 55w, 6d ago · · ·
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    “She started that fire with a bottle of tomato juice, an onion and a spatula.":rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    Awesome line.  Can anypony say, "MaGuiver"?

    #92 · Chapter 10 · 52w, 5d ago · · ·
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    where be update!?!?:flutterrage:

    #93 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Wow, that took courage.

    Or stupidity.

    #94 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>625216

    He's not sure, and HE DID IT!

    #95 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 22h ago · · ·
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    You should work to make your chapters longer. As I begin reading I start to remember why I liked this story so much, but I ends before that feeling reaches its peak. A thousand words doesn't fare well for an engaging read.

    #96 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>625237

    I know! I know and it saddens me!

    I do try, it's just... I can't see how to make the chapters longer without it seeming completely unnecessary.

    #97 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>625246

    Try "Two in One" chapters. Take what normally would be two separate chapters and combine them in.

    #98 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>625246

    Aside from the obvious extention of the chapter from a single conversation? Don't expand what you've got, continue it a bit further.

    #99 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>625284

    >>625295

    Now I feel stupid. I hope you're both happy. :fluttercry:

    #100 · Chapter 11 · 52w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>625309

    If making you feel stupid equals larger, better chapters, I'll critize the shit out of you.

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