Equestria has driven off several horrors to keep the beautiful pony way of life alive. The agent of chaos known as Discord, the demon that infected a Princess' heart known as Night Mare Moon, other and sundry lesser threats.
The Princess-goddesses Luna and Celestia have long been loving protectors of the ponies and the land, both directly and through the careful choosing of those among the ponies who are just a bit special. Those ponies who felt the True Courage.
Now Equestria faces something new. Something not even Night Mare Moon could be called. Something truly evil, and so powerful that there is doubt that even the Elements of Harmony will be of any use in defending ponykind.
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Wow. I'm tracking this.
Mwhwhaaa great, humanity is the eldtircth abomination :D
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That ain't no human. It has eight arms!!
Very intriguing, I shall track at once!
Ponies and eldritch horrors oh my.
The story seems interesting, but a great deal of the wording is awkward. Try reading it aloud to yourself if you haven't already and make revisions where necessary.
Good job brony. I luv this already and im can't wait until the next chapter!!
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The reading aloud thing has never worked for me. Would you mind pointing out one of the more pernicious sentences?
Thanks for the kind comments, everypony! Hope to have the next chapter up forthwith!
Is it forthwith yet? Because I am very excited to see where this goes.
Loving your style. Your OC ponies are believable and relatable... and the concept of cthulu (or something very much like it) in the pony universe is, while not entirely a brand new idea, original and difficult to do well. You have done it well, sir.
Good on you.
Very gripping. I liked the description of the victims. Descriptive without being gratuitous. Just enough details to get us in the right mind set, but not enough to sicken us. Is there a timeline for releases? I'm also excited to keep reading!
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Probably 3-4 more days (from Jan 18).
P.S. "Miss" =^_^=
Very awesome. But kinda...rushed, I guess. This could easily been a few chapters longer. I felt like we missed most of the action. But, I really liked it!
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Glad you liked it!
I'm not really sure if I could manage to make it longer without making it a plodding exercise in tedium. Not that I won't think about it, of course. No story is ever completed, merely set aside 'till the muse returns.
Could use more details, and I think the word adorkable was used a bit too often in this relatively short chapter.
Keep up your writing, it's the only way to get better 
297799 Blasphemy! "Adorkable" can not be overused. Ever.
Great little action fic! The ending was a bit... strange, but it somehow made sense. ...I think. Ugh, I need to read more Lovecraft to make sense of this.
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Thankies!