When Rarity finds Rainbow Dash needing a talk about colts, she decides to help her friend in the dating department, she decides to make her friend four socks,tailor made,sexy and fitted for rainbow colour!. now, all Dash needs to do is follow Raritys advice, be smart and be sexy?. YEAH...good luck with that. told in Rarity first person POV and contains spell check
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BWAHAHAHA
Lol so far so good, can't wait for more
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not english:/
i suppose thats the answer, got a spellcheck.
thanks for pointing the errors out:)
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Russian and German, but i can read it thanks:)
i have a few books and a rough idea of what to do.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3244630/ thats my fanfiction profile, (31 stories and i still fail at grammer
1598809
no dont worry, i can get through these things on my own, just need critism!
1598831
Excuse me while I fall off my chair and laugh
1598766
Trying out for TWE? Your long description of this story's problems seem familiar. Not that I have a problem with that; I want to see if I could give it a try, but obviously you beat me here.
SOCKS
MY MORTAL ENEMY
Socks make ponies about 20% hotter.
After reading that long list of errors I wasn't expecting to enjoy this. (I read comments before I read a story. I like to know if errors have been pointed out, that way I don't have to go to the trouble of noting them in my mind only to find they've already been adressed) I was slightly supprised. Yea, I liked it.
But, the description thingy (Don't know specific name) was really off putting, I have to say.
When I'm going to buy a book, I do what lots of people do, read the plot summary. If the plot isn't interesting, I move on.
Something as obvious as letters not being capatalised in a description just screams to me that this story is going to be bloody difficult to read and it's not worth my time.
My correction of sorts would be:
"When rarity finds Rainbow Dash needing a talk about colts, she decides to help her friend in the dating department, she decides to make her friend four socks, tailor made, sexy and fitted for rainbow colour! Now all Dash needs to do is follow Rarity’s advice, be smart and be sexy?. YEAH... good luck with that. Told in Rarity first person POV and contains spellcheck.
Could be regarded as humorous in a way but not enough to be a comedy."
(Someone correct me if I'm wrong. That'd be real embarrasing."
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Gah. Team effort.
Seriously though OP, listen to this guy.
I know you have but, he knows what he's on about.
And why the hell did I put a damned quotation mark instead of a close bracket? The damned buttons aren't even close to eachother!
TH3 4UTISM IS SO STRONG IN THIS IM DYING
1600056
Thats not a very nice thing to say
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I agree, this is what I think of my final chapter.
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I like this chapter...