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    What exactly does Celestia do while she waits for Twilight and her friends to solve all the problems of the world?

    First Published
    14th Nov 2012
    Last Modified
    14th Nov 2012

    Comments ( 16 )

    #1 · 31w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Wow. That was... Interesting

    #2 · 31w, 11h ago · · ·
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    5/5, will laugh again. It all makes sense now.

    The only problem, this fic doesn't explain black book in the end of the episodes.

    #3 · 31w, 11h ago · · ·
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    There are no words. :raritystarry:

    I love this fic; so much. :pinkiecrazy:

    I wanna join that dance party. :rainbowdetermined2:

    They better be playing some killer tunes. :moustache:

    Anywho, fave and upvote! :yay:

    #4 · 31w, 10h ago · · ·
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    I can attest to the truth of all of this.

    Luna couldn't help but feel unsafe with a villain in the area.

    "Chrysalis, come here!" yelled Celestia over the music.

    Juxtaposition. You have it.

    The king grunted.  "Crystals, slaves, enemy, bad."

    Sombra is a little OOC, he talks too much. The way I remember how much dialogue to write for him is this: No more than Big Macintosh, no less than Angel Bunny.

    >>1614431

    This.

    #5 · 31w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Princesses have a massive party with excessive levels of bass?

    Vinyl Scratch approves.

    #6 · 31w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Is it me or Troll is writing fanfics better each time? :derpyderp2:

    Also, for some reason this looks almost as part of http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5229/Equestria%27s-Crazies- :trixieshiftright:

    #7 · 31w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Is this supposed to be incomplete?

    #8 · 31w, 5h ago · 1 · ·
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    Oh Troll you mad man you!!!:rainbowlaugh:

    Oh completely lost when Discord, Chrysalis,KIng Sombra  and Jesus where their.

    And love Luna's reactions poor girl.

    Very impressive how you twisted season 3 episode 1-2!!!!:rainbowlaugh:

    #9 · 31w, 1h ago · · ·
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    Mad dance party in an alternate dimension populated by ponies?

    Jesus approves.

    #10 · 31w, 6m ago · · ·
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    Not many stories do I literally laugh at. I applaud you.

    They said quick goodbyes and Jesus pushed himself off of the chair, disappearing into the crowd.

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #11 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That lazy bitch! I knew it all along.

    #12 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Party hardy Celestia. :pinkiehappy:

    #14 · 30w, 22h ago · · ·
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    I always pictured Sombra just saying

    BLARGH!

    but I guess I was wrong :fluttercry:

    #15 · 28w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hello, this is FeatherFoot of Story Reviewers United. I'd like to share my review of your story.

    This is going to stray completely off of my standard review because of the nature of your fic.

    Summary:

    This...story...made me laugh so much. The story took so many twists it made me laugh at each one XD. First Discord, then Chrysalis, then Sombra, then JESUS?! Freaking great random fic this is. :rainbowlaugh:

    Overall rating:

    10/10 for total randomness. Never stray from being yourself Troll :pinkiehappy:

    -FeatherFoot, Story Reviewers United

    #16 · 22w, 21h ago · · ·
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    party hard

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