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    NeuStrasbourg's Stories (13)

    • Got Milk?
      Rainbow Dash and Applejack have a little foal, and it's hungry

      1,039 words · 1,705 views · 112 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Rabbit Slayer's Day in Ponyville
      It's Rabbit Slayer's Day again, where ponies are eating candy eggs and fighting demonic invasions
      3,971 words · 326 views · 13 likes · 0 dislikes
    • While you were gone

      2,694 words · 588 views · 19 likes · 1 dislikes
    • MLP Laboratories- The Outbreak
      Twilight is going to discover what her world really is. And how to fight her way out.
      66,365 words · 2,347 views · 59 likes · 13 dislikes
    • Grossbucket
      3,388 words · 396 views · 21 likes · 3 dislikes
    • MLP Laboratories- Freak Show
      7,500 words · 1,329 views · 29 likes · 11 dislikes
    • Troll Hunters
      7,749 words · 471 views · 13 likes · 5 dislikes
    • The Firstborn
      2,722 words · 228 views · 13 likes · 6 dislikes
    • The suffering of Rainbow Dash
      3,881 words · 2,193 views · 10 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Mommy
      5,057 words · 551 views · 6 likes · 2 dislikes

    I decided to make this into a series after all.

    Summary of Episode One:

    A very short story in which Rainbow Dash reveals to her friends that she's been having nightmares involving Pinkie Pie's fameous cupcakes. Or were they really just nightmares? Rainbow wants to settle the issue once for all, confronting the baker's apprentice with her horrible... suspicions.

    Paranoia or premunition? Slightly disturbing or full-blow horseapplestorm? See for yourself...

    First Published
    6th Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    9th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 46 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ever read Rocket To Insanity? :ajsleepy:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    WHAT?! WHAT?! WHAT IN THE HAY?!

    THAT IT'S TERRIFIC. PSYCHO APPLEJACK! I can get used to that. :ajsmug:

    Can I has more? :pinkiecrazy:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That is*

    I love how I screw up in the first comment of the fanfic. :rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Please make a story about what happens next. I know you're giving it the classical horror genre ending that is meant to show how the terror isn't over, but still it just seems too good an opportunity. Besides, I've never read a cupcakes-style torture fic where they had AJ as the villain...

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>111863

    While I'm curious what exactly Applejack has in store for Dash I'm not sure that actually describing it would be as interesting as leaving it up to the readers' imaginations, along with all the guessing and dread that accompanies that.  This is particularly the case given how common place it is for horror movies to plunge full on into gore, making that which is most dreaded by our psyche utterly banal.

    Granted it only does this towards the end as a dark punchline to a rather light fic, but it does it well.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    AJ GOING TO RAPE RD SO HARD!!!!!

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    oh shit rape

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Then it turns out this was a dream too. INCEPTION.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    WHAT THE BUCK?! PINKIE WAS BAD ENOUGH, BUT APPLEJACK?!:pinkiesick::applejackconfused:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112040 No... It's something much worse. Applejack alone couldn't have done this. She had help. Help that could fuck over the world if he choses.

    She has help frm Chuck Norris. :pinkiegasp:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    FUCK THIS SHIT! I'M OUTTA HERE!:rainbowderp::applejackconfused::pinkiesick::flutterrage:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    For love of all that is fucking Good

    WHY CANT YOU PEOPLE JUST LET  CUPCAKES FUCKING DIE?!

    It was a Troll story meant to make the community look bad AND YOU ARE ALL EMBRACING IT.

    We look down on clopping BUT SHIT LIKE THIS GETS TO HAPPEN WITHOUT A COUNTER ARGUMENT?!

    * RAAAAGGEEE*   :twilightangry2: :flutterrage:

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112631 look at it this way... if "cupcakes" really was a troll fic, it backfired horribly (even causing substancial growth of the community). And isn't that the most wonderful thing of all? I'm feeling all heart-warming's again...

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Tracked and 5 stars.

    >>112631

    Cupcakes makes sense, My little WTF is a troll fic not that.

    Good day.:moustache:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112678

    IT dosent have to make sense to be a troll fic.

    So excuse me while i Rage some more.. *ahem*

    FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU    :flutterrage:

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112726 (my Kaiser said, I quote: "Cupcakes makes sense", while you seem to suggest the characteristic of trollfic was nonsense, ergo Cupcakes is not a trollfic- or where you trying to say "it doesn't have to make nonsense to be a troll fic"?)

    But nevermind, now I'm curious: What's YOUR definition of trollfic? :coolphoto:

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112726

    If it is poorly writtern, has miss named characters, has random sex and gore and is spelt 26% wrong then it is a troll fic.

    If not then it is a gore fic.

    Just becuase you don't like a certain type of story doesn't mean it's a troll fic.

    I don't like Romance that much, so by your reasoning I could call Romance's troll fics.

    See.

    Good day.:moustache:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112746>>112795

    A Troll : Someone who takes enjoyment from negative reactions from others on the internet. They cause mischief

    and all kinds of problems just so they can get a good laugh.

    Cupcakes : Cupcakes IMO was created for that very reason, to make people Upset and

    Make the creator Laugh, just cause something is well written And dosen't contain random acts of Sex

    Or incorrect information dosen't make it any less of a Troll fic To me.

    You guys Think what you want, Im still sitting by Cupcakes being a Troll Fic... Mainly cause it made Pinkie Look so bad.  :pinkiesad2:

    And also, thanks for Correcting me Strasbourg, that is what i meant  :trixieshiftleft:

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112827

    How does it make her look bad?

    She's doing her job and hanging out with her best friend.

    What more could you want?

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112827

    Also it wasn't created 'for a laugh' as you say but to explore what could happen.

    And before you say it could happen, most of the stories on his site are just idea's and plots that people have come up with.

    It's only negitive to people who don't like gore.

    People like myself, believe that it serves as a window into the mind.

    We all love Pinkie bean happy and hayper, but a mentalitly like that might get carried away and start thinking that more extreme 'parties' are ok.

    Just think for a second, normally they will get old and die or have arguments and go their sperate ways but this way every pony will be togethor forever as one and they will never leave her.

    Good day.:moustache:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>112882

    Okay just shutup, now i know your joking with me.

    :rainbowkiss: You did make me laugh though...

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>113121

    Stop using the :moustache: Emoticon

    Its getting old

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>113233

    I nearly always use it.

    It matches my picture.

    Good day.:moustache:

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    OH YEA?!

    Well my Mustache is a Fluttershy, your Mustache is invalid.

    *twiddles The Tail*  

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>113251>>113294 you guys are great. I'm honoured to host you on my humble story :pinkiehappy:

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>113294

    Ezio riding rainbowdash, your piont is invalid.

    Good day.:moustache:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 2d ago · · ·
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    DUN DUN DUUN.

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    3 words. Sweet. Apple. Massacre. EEEEEYUP!

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 4d ago · · ·
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    O_O OMG WHY

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Rainbow Dash in this fic is like Kenny from south park, she will be back to full health by the next episode.  Funny Part is the who is this pony thing when I typed this for me was Rarity.:pinkiecrazy:

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 4d ago · · ·
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    o_O

    oh gowd thats.... wasent rainbow awake when she started??

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>112631 FINALLY! A like minded person who thinks the same as I do about cupcakes!

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    thats it? srsly?

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>134869 there are probably other attempts ahead

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>--:raritywink:------->

    #37 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Question: How does Rarity pull RD's skin off if she has no fingers? Magic?

    Oh. Right. XD The tweezers

    #38 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>146369 "Piece by piece, snip by snip, Croup, dock, haunch, shoulders, hip"... Okay, sorry, that was just horrible, but I couldn't resist.

    #39 · Chapter 3 · 67w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>NeuStrasbourg "Rainbow won't look like a tank!"

    OBJECTION!

    #40 · Chapter 3 · 67w, 1d ago · · ·
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    all in all, brilliantly written.

    The first story was great, while the intermission gave brilliant exposition.

    The second was very disdurbing, though not for the whole 'Rarity rips skin off' that's just par for the course; it's the fact that she went insane, the 'loss of self' that I found disturbing.:pinkiesick:

    #41 · Chapter 0 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Right... that's really out of character for Rainbow Dash.

    But, then again, it's just a story being told by one of her friends.

    #43 · Chapter 0 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>221502 out of curiosity, was there any part that was especially off?

    #44 · Chapter 0 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>221760

    Okay, look. Rainbow dash is a braggart. She has an ego the size of mars. But there is one thing she does not do... leave her friends coasting in the wind. She would of have done EVERYTHING in her pover to bring her friends relief. She would of have destroyed her house and squeezed every last drop of rain out of it if it meant that she could help her friedns in any way. she may no of have liked it, but she would of. The parts where she gave every last peice of litreature to Twilight makes sense, and where she did everything in her power to help Fluttershy is also in character. But the parts where she was so insenitive to her friend's suffering was so way out of her personality it wasn't funny. Rainbow Dash is the Element of Loyalty, rerember. She would drop everything, and work herself to the bone when it is needed; you can always count on her when it matters.

    And I expected the town to do it, maybe Applejack, so desperate was her need. But Pinkie? Twilight? FLUTTERSHY? That was just way out of odds.

    Just get Australia to help out with the Gopher problem. Heck, we dropped Calicivirus on our rabbit populus when Mixamytosis failed.

    And Calicivirus? a real disease. It causes massive hemmoragin in the blood vessels of the rabbit. which, in itself, often causes rabbits to bleed from the more sesitive areas, like eyes, ears, and nose. Messy stuff, and it infects and kills in less than a week.

    #45 · Chapter 0 · 66w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>222285 Thanks. You are making some very important points there.

    And I assure you, should gophers ever raise their ugly heads in this part of the world, I will remember your advice :twilightangry2:

    #46 · Chapter 4 · 28w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I never read Cupcakes, can I have a link or something? I just want to know what it said. Also I like this.

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