From the point of view from Vinyl Scratch, this is a journey, meeting, falling in love with, and building a relationship with Octavia. The two are very different and have very different views, thus creating a lot of tension and heart break in which both Vinyl and Octavia must pick up the pieces and put them back together, for their love is endless.
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Dunno why this is getting downvoted so much. Seems a little rushed at points, but I sense the possibility of warm fuzzies and d'awws. Upvoted and favorited.
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I don't get it... And usually your image macros make perfect sense in my demented brain.
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Thank you very much!
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Maybe because Tavi is so many bronies' waifu.
Seriously though I am queuing this. :3
I like this.
Thank you all and chapter 3 should be done soon!
nice start i like where this is going continue righting like this and the story will defiantly gain popularity
It's rushed. The text has no emotion, and it just doesn't sound like Vinyl. When writing in first person you need to make sure your writing represents the protagonists thought processes. Also, it needs an editor. Favouriting simply for its potential.
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Ahh, that makes sense.
1656682 Thanks for your input and I'll try to add more personalities. It's always hard to develop at first, but I'll get it
This has indeed caught my attention.
But I will have to agree, that it seemed a little rushed at points. But all in all I love it. 
Eager to read chapter 3 
1657661 I wish I could write as well as you do. I can't write anything with character whatsoever. I'm only good with the little things like apostrophes and semicolons and grammar and spelling
That sentence was meant to be ironic.
1661461 thanks a bunch!
Thanks everyone!
Nice work.
I request that you write more good sir, so that I may better ascertain how good this story is going to be. It is commendable thus far and I simply must read more.
Aww can't wait to keep reading
... go on
Hey everyone sorry for the delay... im about half way finished, so thanks for your patience!
1990578 how long does it tank for someone to write a page of this goodness?