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    • Gentle
      Fluttershy would never have thought that a stallion like Big Macintosh would be so gentle. She found it simply... adorable.

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    Fluttershy once saw a strong red stallion taking care of animals. Never had she been so amazed. The pegasus had been secretly watching him since that day, whenever Big Mac would take care of animals. It was secret, but fun.

    EDIT: OKAY. I AM SO SO SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING THIS in such a long time! AUGH. Let me explain:

    *I kind of lost my passion for my little pony

    *Writers block

    *School

    Yeah, yeah, i knoow i shouldn't make excuses and all but its true. Just let me thank you all for the wonderful comments and thumbs up!

    As a thank you for commenting, rating and favouriting I'll take my time to complete this story ASAP. But please give me more feedback, they really do mean a lot for me. And I want to know if my old readers are still out there!

    xoxo

    First Published
    5th Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Aug 2012

    Comments ( 24 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    inb4; SECRET BUTT FUN

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    quite a few mistakes in both spelling and grammar, but a pretty nice story overall :twilightsmile:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    D'awwwww!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I shall track with a might that matches Blood Beard himself! Also... I'm sorry, but you leave me NO choice... SECRET BUTT FUN! :trollestia:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    FUS RO D'AAAAAAW!!!

    Also, secret butt fun.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :facehoof: They're so adorkable when they're awkward

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ahhhhhhh Fluttermac. The best shipping couple

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    FlutterMac always makes me dawwwwwww.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    HNNNNNNNNNG!!!!

    BLAM

    Oi!:twilightoops: I think my heart exploded from the dangerous amounts of D'AAAWW!

    ALLONS-Y!!!

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    FlutterMac :twilightsmile:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 69w, 2d ago · · ·
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    OH GOD THE D'AWW INDICATORS A THROUGH THE ROOF

    I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH MORE SHE CAN TAKE... EJECT EJECT

    NOOOOOOOOOOO BRADLY NOOOOOOOOOO.  WHY DIDN'T HE EJECT, WHYYYYYYYYYYYY

    look at what you have done

    LOOK AT IT

    :trollestia::moustache::trollestia:

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wow!  First let me say that I haven't even gotten to read the chapter yet (I'm off to work in like 5 minutes) but I'm real excited to get home and read this!  It has been a one-shot in my mind for so long that every time I reread it I slowly began to accept that (it being a one-shot).  So happy you decided to continue it, I'll give the chapter an actual review when I get home!:pinkiehappy:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Took a while for this to be updated, but it's coming along well.

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice to know this fic is still kickin'. I know what you mean about losing the passion for this fandom. I kind of feel a little like that too. I guess what entices all of us is the wonderful characters we see in shows, video games, etc. It's like we just want to fill in the gaps, and this is how we do it. But in the end, these imaginary characters, maybe even friends, come and go, just like real friends. But if you really care about someone, you keep him or her close, real and fake.

    Now I'm starting to wonder why I said all of that. I just had to share it, I guess.

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yay its its finally here!  :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::yay::eeyup::moustache:

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Huh. I forgot about this one! Wow.

    Looks good. :eeyup:

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yes, yes.  The drama shall now begin!

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    OMC!!!!! WRITE MORE,FAST NOW!!!!!!!             :raritystarry:                  i feel bad for aj.:applecry:

    #20 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Nooooo!  You can't leave it like that!  What's going to happen?

    #21 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I liked it even it was short.:rainbowkiss:

    #22 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It made me so sad.  It was still great though!  

    #23 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    NOOOOOOOOOO! :fluttercry:

    #24 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Nooooooooooooooooooo :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

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