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ONWARD_Conwardicus


Just a writer of MLP looking for some good feedback. Nothing like "Good job" But what others did and didn't like. Anyway, have a nice day!

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Lyra and Bonbon have been good friends since they met. They have been through thick and thin, and nothing has seemed to seperate them.

That is, until Lyra gets Twilight to transport her and Bonbon to modern America. There, they encounter human society of the likes not even Lyra could imagine. Lyra loves it, while Bonbon is still trying to adjust to walking on two legs. How will the pair endure being human?

Inspired by thinking opposite of what would happen if a brony was sent to Equestria. The first chapter is not the first thing that happens. It's an intro.

UNCANCELED! REJOICE!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

pretty good so far....i wanna c where this is going :pinkiesmile:

I like where this is going.

i wonder whats their reaction about neverending warfare and million deaths and stuff

1585714 because they're in america
Also, I'm impressed by the amount of thumbs ups you got on this!
I can write well but not that good.

Looks good, the intro was a nice look into the future :) Keep the chapters coming

Oh dear... It isn't all that bad Bon Bon.
Hands are plenty more useful than hooves you know....

Oh I can only imagine right now how they ended up in a police car:rainbowlaugh: on another not: Pants!:yay:

I can imagine a few scenarios that would be interesting/funny one of them finding out that their whole world is just a show in the human world, the other them finding out about the fandom. Lyra being more amazed and Bonbon being disturbed especially seeing the toy counter parts in a store.
Lyra: this is amazing! I never would have guessed!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
Bonbon: TV... WHY THEY SPYING ON EQUESTRIA?!:pinkiegasp:

1756323. that would be great. too bad this story was cancelled. THANKS A LOT EQUESTRIA GIRLS

Holy crap, I'd forgotten this story even existed. :twilightoops:

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Yeah. Two years is a long time :P. Glad to be back though.

2 years = 500 words.

okay then

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