- Member Since 18th Mar, 2012
- offline last seen 20 minutes ago
GaryOak
Writing graduate who loves cartoon horses and all manner of silly things. Occasionally writes serious stories. A divine Swedish woman drew this avatar.
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Hipster Pony Raven Horn · 1.4k words · 40 3 · 1.2k views
- Art Inspired · 19k words · 39 11 · 1.4k views
- ForestPony · 7k words · 488 26 · 17k views
- redspark · 3.8k words · 20 9 · 1.3k views
- Art Inspired · 2.3k words · 119 15 · 1.9k views
- Darkswirl · 1.9k words · 261 18 · 5.7k views
- JujubeLand · 2.2k words · 100 9 · 3.8k views
Featured In11
Shipping 💖11,669 stories ·9,737 members
Clopfics11,545 stories ·15,811 members
The Writers' Group56,384 stories ·9,291 members
One-Shots18,903 stories ·2,369 members
Transformations5,227 stories ·5,793 members
Equestria After Dark511 stories ·2,102 members
- warning: cum inflation, belly bulging, huge insertion, gangbanging, etc. ahead3,885 stories ·3,601 members
TF/TG813 stories ·2,245 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.129 seconds
Total duration
669 users online
987,654 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
OOHH SHIT!
http://iambrony.com/gif/1633
After looking at it again I don't know how could I misread it like that, but on my first look at the description I somehow understood that unbeknown to Twilight she was conceived in a chaotic evening set up by Discord, so when I reached the end, even if I knew I misinterpreted the description, I pictured another "interesting" magical event taking place after that that would lead to Twilight calling Discord Mommy and Chrysalis Papa.
Anyway, while I'm not a fan of clop and I read this because I though it contained something different, it seems like a good story, have a thumb up.
OH
MAH
GAWD
wat
I mean, upvote from me, but still
wat
1579539
Ha ha, thank you for that! Actually, maybe she was conceived that night, and just has very weird parents. Given this is a Discord story, it would be ultimately terrible if it made sense. What fun is there in making sense?
This story...it...must be a product of a perverted mind.
More!
1579594
At least I didn't write about mosquito sex.
FIRST. Amazing. Wow. I like.
Spoiler: That Twilight Velvet Discord knocked out was actually Nightmare Moon in disguise.
1579670
Well, there goes the sequel.
As I said before http://iambrony.com/gif/1633
At first glance, I thought that somebody else in tlponies wrote this and you put it on your account, but then I read
And then I knew.
Great twist!
media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m2vtbusvLA1rnl2pl.jpg
1579785
>puts in gif twice
>still doesn't know how to use it
>button for it above comment box.
i.imgur.com/6T5st.gif
1579594 It IS the product of a perverted mind . . . a BRILLIANT perverted mind!
iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/131641403736.gif
1580177
>Knows how to use it
>Doesn't use it
>Makes Mister Fluttershy mad
>Laughs hard.
1580222
>no one cares about your gif
>probably sucks
also
>thinks I'm mad
>is wrong
>profit?
also
>uses wrong color
>lol
1580243
>Decides to use his fave color
>Is a troll
>Loves the fact Azurus used the gif
>Thanks Azurus
1580189
Thank you! I knew that one of you would check out the gif and post it in correct format.
1580266
>is proven wrong about no one looking at gif
>accepts defeat
25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_md599fEISt1rxz2y5o1_500.jpg
1580311
>Is deciding if he should respond with picture
>Decides not to
>Would use ajsmug emoticon but isn't going to
>Thanks you for admiting
1580326
reddipedia.com/images/thumb/5/5e/GoodGuyGreg.jpg/250px-GoodGuyGreg.jpg
1580332
>Responds by incorrectly using gif
>http://iambrony.com/gif/1633
1580425
[banana]>not sure if lol[/banana]
I guess this wouldn't be a true Discord story if there wasn't a storm of chaos in the comments...
So Discord is Twilight's Mommy and Chrysalis is her Daddy....
I've never been one for clop, or porn of any kind....
But I'm liking this.
Holy Fuck, Dat Plot Twist outta left field! M. Night Shyamalan is having a fucking seizure right now.
Gary fucking Oak.
There are eight badges to earn in Kanto. He got ten of them.
There is no way this could get any weirder. Mind fuck.
1581149
I actually have Pokemon TCG League badges. Kind of a shitty mirror picture, but yeah.
If this story is true, then it means that Twilight comes from a fractured home and just had fought with her parents reciently... first with her male mother and doesn't help that she have some kind of brother complex and she fought her soon to be sister in law that was actually her female father in disguise to have an affair with her own son... if it doesn't make sense it means that I am right on the track
damn I was sure he was going to take the place of Night and that was how Twilight was conceived!
Explains her overly magic power.
Delicious
That is all
MOAR
1580641 i would think that later discord and Chrystalis leaves and twilghts real parent's get out and does it on there own.
10/10 would clop to again
1579677
cdn.derpiboo.ru/thumbs/1200/1100/2012/08/12/13_29_17_540_72754__UNOPT__
I was expecting discord to actually be chrysalis, because he took Twilight Velvet's form to feed off of her husband's love...
Did...did Chrysalis just out-troll Discord?
It's kind of hard to keep up with who is doing what, with Discord changing his form and being in the middle of Twilight's parents. I feel like it's like a puzzle I'm having to go back and fit the pieces together just to figure out what's actually going on.
Still, welcome to the erotic side of MLP. We hope you enjoy your stay here.
1604917
I tried to make it as clear as possible by switching his pronoun after he transformed, and breaking a rule of narrative by saying, "Hey, from now on, I'll be doing this to avoid confusion."
Found on Equestria after dark. Pre read comment: 9(?) months later Twilight Sparkle was born. Now on to checking if I was right.
Edit: Nevermind... That twist! o.O
Yes, that's the joke. Discord interfered with the night of Twilight's conception, hence the attempt at a clever title for this.
images.cheezburger.com/completestore/2010/5/9/129179025705178350.jpg
3.bp.blogspot.com/-eVOASv9qw0A/TrWyrk41fnI/AAAAAAAABRg/jsWUtjd9uc8/s1600/mlp+my+little+pony+meme+bronies+rape+pinkie.jpg
Been a while since I read this one, kinda skimmed it before. Was confused by how Discord could escape suddenly, if this is pre-show, as I thought. And then, almost expected (as again, forgot) Discord to be the mother/father of Twilight, which'd be... weird. Oddly, was wondering if Discord was gay, since he took the role of the female in this, though dunno if that says the same for Chrysalis... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Queen_Chrysalis.png And assuming she knew it was Discord, cause why else would she have revealed herself, unless was supposed to be like troll ending (well, I think it was anyways, but eh, still serious about wondering why else Chryssy would've done that)?
Anyway, hot little story with steamy scenes, even if was VERY weird and confusing with some plotholes.
But still, good job!
Edit: Also had some interesting choice words for ponies' genitalia and orgasms, etc. Certainly a... unique way to do it.
1582643
Surprised no one's corrected, but if Discord and Chrysalis were her parents, then Shining Armor isn't even RELATED to her, and would be adopted brother unless you mean to imply that Shining was conceived in same way or something (though confusing as to how they'd have Twilight and Shining's parents believe that they are the parents, unless placed the foals in Twilight Velvet's womb with his chaotic powers or something). Eh, maybe I should shut up now.
1717624
I should add the disclaimer that trying to make sense of this fic may melt your brain. The theory of Discord being able to break out of his prison is, because, well... he's Discord. He does what he wants. I made the story contain so many confusing points because I figured that is the only true way to capture the spirit of that character, since he is the embodiment of Chaos.
I'm also glad you appreciated my diction. I coined most of those terms myself, and will probably use it in any subsequent clopfics I decide to write.
While this and my other clopfic aren't "troll fics" per se, they definitely have significant troll elements. The entire concept for this story was a troll, kind of, except I endeavored to write it as well as I could, and try to create legitimately good clop. It came to me while cooking breakfast one fateful day. I felt depressed at how relatively poorly my legitimate story fared at the time (and still does), despite how well-written it was and the effort I had put in. So the idea hit me. And then the punchline. That is when I knew I had to write it.
1717677
Have read a few here and there, though not as many as with Mane 6/other ponies. Even though he's not among my tops of MLP: FIM characters, for corrupting ponies I had grown to love just before Season 2 started, when started watching the show and all, I still will read one if it catches attention, like this one did. 
Ah, I see. Well, didn't mean to nitpick and overanalyze seemingly, just... don't read too many Discord-centered fics, I guess?
And ah, haven't read your other clopfic as of yet at all, compared to this one that I at least skimmed before, but it IS on my Read It Later list, cause it sounded funny! And... somewhat interesting.
I would read it now, but I have other things to do before bed involving a couple different stories on this site, one involving something before tomorrow's episode and before a new chapter of another story have yet to review, as normally updates every other day.
Well... That was... An unexpected ending. Thumbs up! I liked it a lot.