In a stroke of luck, Rarity finds herself piled up to her neck in work. She tries to recruit the aid of her best friends, but they too have become highly preoccupied. All except for Ponyville's modest blonde-maned apple bucker. The two have never been really close, but who know what could happen over just a little bit of dirt?
(Inspired by HazuraSinner's artwork on deviantart, pictured above. Her link: http://hazurasinner.deviantart.com )
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This is very well done, and I'm glad I took the time to read this. Good job.
Also, I can preread for you if you want.
I like it so far, but it seems their feelings for each other sprang up out of the blue at the end there.
Looks like some quality RariJack here. I'ma keep an eye on this.
It's decent, but thanks to the picture, I was expecting a humanized fic.
Y'know, for a moment there I forgot that I was reading about Applejack and Rarity. That book Rarity was reading in the beginning was quite enthralling; I must find out what happens to Nightshade and Emerald Gust!
Anyways though, looking good so far, I find myself rather excited to read the updates.
SQUEEE! SO far it's so sweet!
Thanks for the criticism, guys. It's very much appreciated. I'll get working on it right away. A sidestory may or may not come along.
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Welcome to the world of slash fan fiction. Enjoy your stay,
Oh, I've done this before. I just deleted the story because I hated it. xD
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...I was talking to one of the people who commented.
Me seeing a new Rarijack fic posted:
After reading:
I must have more. MOAR!
Keep up the great work!
ScatMan
Awwwww! CUTE! I must have more!
I must. I must! I MUST!
Very sweet story, indeed. Would love to see a follow-up to it.
*country accent* Ahem...hint, hint.
Thumbs-up for you, keep up the great work!
1606500 The next chapter will be up in about 15 minutes!
This is shaping up to be one of the most enjoyable pieces I've read. Really nice job! Great pacing, dialogue and character interaction.
Keep up the great work!
That was a nice bit of friendly fluff. I love RariJack.
Rarijack is one of my OTPs, and this fanfiction is really sweet so far. It's awesome. Can't wait for more.
Thanks you guys! I really love hearing everyone's opinions. If there's anything I need to work on, don't be afraid to tell me. You guys are seriously huge inspirations to me. I'll get working on the next chapter ASAP.
..... There. Are no words.
I love this fic too much for say anything else; it's simply fab. 
Cannot wait for your next update!
Very very well done
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Hi, did you say anything to me? It says you did in my notifications but I do not see my comment or your reply anywhere... I hope I did not say anything offensive :p
Wow, the second chapter was even better than the first. This deserves a lot more press.
Holy moly, this is really shaping up to be an amazing fic. (Had trouble starting that without "wow").
Tracking this.
Is it okay if I do a review of this story on my user page?
Also, when's this updating? it's shaping up really well.
It's good to see you back
Another excellent chapter!
1996303 I'm glad to be back!
2003600 Thank you!
Another great chapter. I should have favorited this as soon as chapter one. I have been trying to read more Rarijack (forever my OTP) stories, but some of them just aren't my style or simply just aren't good. This, however, is different. I love the flow of the story and the simplicity of it all, yet the atmosphere is so calm and sweet. I also love how wonted the characters are to themselves, which is always a plus. Good to see this updated after a while; I was really excited to see this with a new chapter on my "read it later" list.
I'm glad you continued this. Also, still wondering if I can do the review. I always like to ask permission first; sometimes people don't want to be reviewed.
One of the best RariJack fanfictions I've ever read so far
This is one of those stories where I always hope it updates.
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I really do try my best to update this as often as I can. :c </3 I usually end up with the chapter not being completely finished or perfect for a while until I have the time to finish it. But ahhhh you make me feel good about myself. <3333
I was smiling like a fool reading this.
Please please please update this story.
Good chapter though, but the italics don't belong.
2886094 Sorry about that. There was a formatting error. Glad you enjoyed it, though!
A fun little story, though that whole RD mane thing almost made me want to quit the story, no offense. It's just that it's like saying that since a stallion is pink or something that they're gay.
I actually know a place just like that. Always seems to be spring there.
Not quite a magical clearing, but it does have a waterfall, and a little stream.
I put a bench there years ago.
Did you know that the story still says "on hiatus"?
Just thought you'd like to know.
Oh yeah, before I forget.....
HOLY BUCK IT UPDATED!
2886323 I'm sorry if that offended you. I'll be sure to consider that next time. I have a little more to say about this, so message me if you'd like to hear the rest c:
2889276 Yes, I'm aware. That's due to the fact that my updating hasn't been very speedy. Funny story, I had a good chunk of this chapter written like ages ago, but I got stuck on where to go from one point to the next. I don't know when the next update will be :c
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Using a net book, can't message anything with a screen this small. If you want to send something, go right ahead.
2886933 I know a place like that too! I love it there. I always run to it when I'm sad or angry or just in the mood for it. I thought adding it to the story would be a chill idea.
2895349 Good point
Pretty bucking good. ~Sir ass hat
Nice chapter!