Many, many heartfelt thanks go to Chengar Qordath, Comma-Kazie, and Ponibius for allowing me to make my own contribution to their shared setting. In addition, more thanks go to them and Aegis Exemplar for helping me with plot development and correcting my atrocious grammar

Ah, Cheerliee. So many shenanigans to suffer through, so little time for us to enjoy them.

Definitely looking forward to more.

It's off to a nice start, and I'm curious to see where things go from here. Cheerilee is always fun.

Haha, fantastically victorious. Fitting addition to the Winning Pony stories.

Nice work so far, and I am really wondering what you plan to do with this.  Cheerilee does not really play much of a roll in CK's life outside the sleepover disaster, so you have a lot of freedom to work in your own direction without running into that plot or Twilight's research.

Wow... yeah I'm totally digging this story. Great job, and man I feel so sorry for Cheerilee. I know the feels she has all too well. The terrors of babysitting small children like that could be classified along side waterboard torture.

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Looks promising, I'm curious to see where this is going to go. Faved and thumbed up

A Pinkie Sense for the exact location of Dashie, I love it. Especially the bit with her ear.

Huh, so CheeriMac. Works for me, as much as I like some other Mac ships, this is the one that really seems most likely to eventually become canon, if any ship ever does that is.

I had totally forgotten about Cheerilee and the sleepover at the beginning of Winning Pony, hilarious to see her side of it. The Young Daring Do book is a nice touch.

The Winningverse is fast becoming my favorite alternate Ponyverse.  This looks like it'll fit in nicely.

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You silly, silly pony.  You've created a monster, mate.

The Winningverse is awesome

Well written, funny, good characterization, thumbed and tracked. Though I am curious how you will tie the rest of your story into the winningverse. I may just be forgetting swathes of literature, but I don't recall Cheerilee having a major role beyond this sleepover. Great job with

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>>15499311549931 Well that's just what interested me. She didn't have a role in Cloud Kicker's interactions and misadventures, but Ponyville's a big town, and the pegasi aren't the only ponies living there. So their internal behavior is going to ripple through the town, and I wanted to try exploring that from a non-pegasus angle. Plus, Cheerilee is awesome and I'd always wanted to write something involving her in a leading role.

I know i usually say Cloudy gives me too much credit, but he really did this time

>>15493211549321 Thanks I'd always wanted to see more of the story that got skipped by necessity, since Cloud Kicker wasn't there for it. So, here I am

Also, I feel terrible and silly for it, but I keep reading the "How did this happen?" line in the Heavy's voice

Let the games begin.

awesome story another story from the main story I love it I wonder how this story will go for Ms Cheerilee  

oh, this is awesome! Really well written so far, I'm really interested on how you'll continue! Nice!

It's always nice to get another addition to the Winningverse.

Faving now on the premise of it involving the 'Winningverse', will edit after reading

Edit: A most enjoyable read, I will be interested to see where you take this, seeing as you are tackling not only a secondary character, but one that holds very little place in the original story besides this scene. Keep up the great work, and have a cookie!

Awesome so far! Can't wait for more!

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I look forward to seeing where this story goes. It looks like it has potential, and I hope to see good things from it.

This could be the start of something magical.

Have  

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>>15522641552264 I second this motion, and add these disgruntled Cheerilees to your own:

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Rise up, teacher pony! Rise up and verse us in Winning! For Winningverse!

Ah the joys of a teacher, trying to avoid the Birds and Bees lecture.  Just remember the rural students tend to know all about such things far in advance of the urban ones.

Oh my Celestia this was the perfect chapter! It was hilarious and made me squee at all the little tidbits: I like the idea of Sweetie and Silver being the smart girls, I love Dinky being the firefighter (like her costume!) and her hugging the fire extinguisher at the end? Heee! Love it! Ah, I sooo need to write something for Winningverse.

This was awesome! Insta-fave!!!

Awesome story

Well then Mr. Hammer. I believe the game for the featured box ha begun.

HAVE AT YE!

I guess I can read another great fic from the Winningverse while I wait for every single other one to update.

Oh dear bucking god Sweetie Belle is cooking.

RUN FOR THE HILLS!

The Winning-verse sure is growing.  It's no Fallout: Equestria yet, but it's gaining a pretty decent spread of side-stories, considering Life and Times of a Winning Pony is itself technically a side story.

I really want to read this right now, but I have to work on my own writing at some point and maybe I should try and hunt down some kind of nourishment this week...  To the Read Later list!

I'm loving Dinky as the unofficial (and highly necessary) CMC firefilly. :)

I think we can guess what her cutiemark is going to be!  I'm thinking flames in one of those red circles with a line through it.  She is destined to be Dinky Hooves, firemare exraordinairre!

Momma will be SO PROUD of her muffinette!

I'm in on this.  I'm always up for Cheerilee.

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I love seeing more people add to this universe.

Fav'd, tracking, can't wait to see more from all of you.

Someone for the love of god teach sweetie how to cook awesome story so far

"Winning pony" is a growing thing now isn't it?

>>15544041554404

Seems to be.

I'm a little torn. Up until Cloud Kicker shows up this is bland and boring like a blank fresco, but after “I got tricked into foalsitting the Cutie Mark Crusaders.” everything gets enormously better and more interesting. I know the first half has something to do with the main plot arc or something, but I'm positive you could've made it feel less like filler without sacrificing anything (unless Chekhov's guns everywhere, but I doubt it).

I'm gonna see what happens.

Why was I expecting to see tentacles emerging from the oven?

Oldguy Cloud takes on WV

What could possibly go wrong

Edit: Read because prints apparently liked it and he is the allmaster of Cheerilee. It was nice, lol.

Sweetie Belle's Cooking....

Good luck Cheerilee.

And then Dinky's cutie mark was a fire extinguisher!

Brilliant, simply brilliant. Good to see that Sweetie Bell's uncanny ability to burn cereal remains constant.

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MY....GOD

These children need to be beaten black and blue. Are they that thick headed not to realize what they doing is wrong?!

2 homes destroyed! 2 very innocent ovens massacred, nay slain for simply existing!

I would of tossed their asses out the door and not look back.

Cheerilee....W'ere is my sista?

Yes, Darling, where is Sweetiebell?

I threw their crazy flanks this morning!

WHAT!?

THEY DESTROYED MY HOME!

Well, this looks both entertaining and promising. I look forward to more of this installment of the Winningverse.

Heh heh. Trials and tribulations.

Wow, who knew the winning pony would give way to such an universe. And hey, cheerintosh! That's definitely something I wanna see

Good, funny, start, gonna check out how it keeps going

Blossom's "swords"...

That cracked me up! (For some reason, all I could picture was Twilight running around the house with one of them yelling in Stiffler's voice, "FILLYFOOLER ARTIFACTS!!!")

“I don’ think those were swords, swords are supposed to be hard and made of metal, aren’t they? Your sister’s were all made of that weird rubbery stuff,” Applebloom said, her eyebrows narrowed in thought.

“Maybe they were training swords, what do you think, Miss Cheerilee?”

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Ah its Featured. Good story too.

lolololololololololololololololloolololololllolololollololololollollolollollollolololololololololololololololololoklllolololollllololloollololololololollollolollolololololololololololololololollolollollollollollolollollollollolollollollol I lol'd so much

It is definatly cute, will be keeping up with it. Ought to be interesting to see how Mac is played out in this part of the Winning Ponyverse.

You know, judging by CMC's appearances in MLP:FIM, I always figured that Applebloom was a bright student, maybe top of her class (despite her.....background) and Sweetie Bell right up there along with her fellow CMC; Scootaloo might be above average but still gets low marks often. But that's just my opinion.

other than that.......

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Have some staches:

I welcome this great addition to the Winningverse, may great things come from you.

Poor Dinky.

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So the part where Alula is arguing her point that Cloudkicker is the best sister wasn't enough?

Why is it the moment the girls asked about the facts of life...I immeaditly thought of azumanga Daioh?

First because is it must be done and she is the best pony ever created: DERPY!!!!!!!!!

Second: Hold up, hold up, HOLD UP!!!!! Pinkie Dash? Dinky as part of the CMC, though I don't know who the forth filly is and Cheerlie/Big Macintosh? I think I'm going to cry You have my vote,l 100%. You need any help, ideas or advice, I got your back, by the gods this is going to be great, any other pairings? And Pinkie Dash is my third favortie pairing I can't wait to see MORE!!!

Mister Cloudhammer, you have earned a like and favorite from me.

>>15655551565555 Ach, don't call me Mister, makes me feel old Glad you liked it, it was a blast to write

>>15547271554727 Because they brought one of Blossom's "swords" with them...

Good job Chengar updated their timeline, or else I'd have missed this...!

Great start, looking foward to seeing where this is going.

>>15636731563673

Actually Dinky and Cloud Kicker's Sister Alula were the original Foalsat ponies. The CMC were a happy accident.

Give Chengar Qordath's fics a read for more information!

Oh, the chapter was good, but I'm just waiting for a fic where somepony snaps and tells Sweetie that her cooking is terrible. Sweetie telling Blossomforth that she was doing it wrong because nothing was burning just sealed it for me, and I hope that doesn't become canon.

Seriously though, This chapter was great, and I can't wait for the next.

Ohh that ending!! I have to admit I had my doubts about this fic but giving it a chance this is pretty good, this fic will go far and I can't wait for the next update.

Poor Cheerilee. It's hard to be a teacher, I admire that even with all the crap she has to deal with she doesn't flip out on the kids. I'm really wondering when someone will tell sweetie that her cooking is a weapon of mass destruction?

Oh, poor Cheerilee.

Looking forward to more of this. XD

OH SHIT why'd it have to end there!

Great story, loving it and definitely gonna fave and up vote does any1 know when chapter two'll be I'm soooooo exited for it and hope its here soon

The story itself had a great plot and I really ended up feeling sorry for cheerilee she was definitely empathised with well and the idea of the adult side of ponyville really brung it to life.

I found myself laughing at some points and at others clenching my fingers.

Utterly super

theviper1999

>>15671011567101 Huh, thank you, I might have to give that a chance when able.

Oh dear... Sweetie is trying to summon the Smooze...

congrats on making the feature box. I read this back when if first posted, and thought I had forgotten to fave it. when it showed up in the feature box without giving me a new fav icon. Disappointed it hasn't updated, but I am happy for you that you made feature. So grats

Was overall a quite good story imo.

A tad bit too tired to give a decent review, but it was good as said. Still hoping to see more norm breaking from this story timeline, like a mention of a "sword with a hole in it" or such. Especially in terms of "derogatory terms", "stereotype/norm breaking" (applies to both others) and ... "endowment wise, but for both genders" I'd guess to call it. But yeah, I think you did a good Cheerilee, and it had a good flow. (not sure ponies would eat fish though)

Any pony know when the next part is I CAN'T WAIT!!!

As always, many thanks go to Chengar Qordath, Comma-Kazie, Ponibius, and AegisExemplar for their tireless work in forging my ramblings into a story worthy of publication

Couldn't do it without you guys

Yay, more Winningverse content!

Also, I quite like the little hints about the Lunar Rebellion. I really need to Finish up on My Little Denarians so I can get started on that.

All right! An update!

Post-Brainwashing angst. Right.

Is this technically PTSD?

“Well, as I explained earlier, the election for the office of Chancellor was coming up, and the candidate the earth ponies put forward was beginning to gain popularity due to the rising tensions between the tribes...”

*****

But I wanted the rest of the history lesson!

I swear you're all conspiring against me to put up another Winningverse story everytime I check FimFiction.

Not that I mind, the workload can wait, this is always a nice escape

Love the Winningverse series of stories!

>>16132891613289 That'd be my vote. I'd say tyhe love potion was likely rather traumatic.

also yay more winningverse!

CHEERILEE IS BEST PONEH. Im in love with this story.

I freaking love Archer though I have no clue why, we see her in one episode alone and I love how she is created, the buck is up with that? And DERPY!!!!!!!!! My favorite pony in all the MLP series, I freaking love her, though I don't know much about Cloud Kicker.

Poor Cheerlie, having to stand up to Applejack in order to be with Big Mac, hope she can pervil. I was expecting to see Rarity and Fluttershy at the Spa as well but was a bit disappointed when they were not....oh well. I love Rarishy though but it's whatever, it's your story brother.

I'm very impressed by the amount of history you added I never read that story, don't got the time but if I ever do I got to give it a read, Luna is best Princess

ONTO THE NEXT ONE!!!! Please

Oh AJ, you sly cockblocker you!

>>16132891613289

Similar psychological mechanisms I guess - association, etc.

>>16130961613096

Wait, are you saying that that whole Lunar Rebellion thing is gonna have it's own story? Interesting...

>>16134371613437

Yeah, that's the plan.

>>16130961613096

yes, this

also, the other thing you mentioned

and yay

I tilted my head and peered closer at my reflection. Something just felt... off. I glanced out to my little window garden [lol bad jokes], and smiled as I saw some of my daisies blooming proudly. “That’s it!”

Is this supposed to be there? It just seems...out of place.

>>16134751613475 You sir, win a cookie, to be delivered by Derpy Mail.

>>16135001613500 Can it be chocolate chip?

While I'm more of a Cheerilight fan by a mile, I can still appreciate the odd Cheerimac story.

But even more so I can always enjoy a Cheerilee story in general. And I am doing just that.

Looking forward to more. =3

>>16136131613613 *puts it in the mail* You can expect it to come hurtling through your window any day now

Omg more

>>16134751613475 Heh, a prereader note slipped through. What's this bad joke though... Oh Celestia, Cheerilee's Garden. Why?

>>16138681613868 Well, that was my own joke, actually. I read the first half of Cheerilee's Garden chapter 1, put it down due to it's lack of substance and anything aside from shock value, in my opinion

Fun little chapter here. I'm interested in seeing where you take this story. I'm liking how the love potion has left its own traumas.

Sweet. Saw the spa scene. I'm done here.

...wait. what is this? Huh. This is...kinda interesting actually. Guess I'll keep reading.

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The word is cuntblock.She isn't stopping Big Mac, she's stopping the various horned harlots and winged wenches and just plain whorses that just want a taste of Big Mac without buying the whole pie. Not even a whole slice. When you're at a buffet and you see the awesome desert that your mom made special and some idiot kid takes the biggest piece, takes a bite and throws the rest away...its 9 kinds of wrong.

Ack, poor Cheerilee. Well, I guess if anypony could give somepony PTSD it would be the CMC.

Can't wait to see AJ's reaction.

CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER THREE!!!!!

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>>16147081614708 Either way, there is a cock being blocked.

Orange juice? What is this madness?