As Princess Celestia's school for gifted unicorns closes for the summer, one pony finds it hard to see the bright side of leaving something she loves so much. Princess Celestia has a plan that will help her student find a new friend, as well as helping another in the process.
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Cute little story. Just one thing right now.
This part of the sentence doesn't make sense.
Right in the feels.
Pure gold! Not everyone has heard that Lauren Faust's canon had Spike being raised by the Princess, who taught him to use his fire for messaging, then given to Twilight when they were both old enough. I love your interpretation of this event, especially the origin of Spike's new skill, Twilight's eventful departure from her dorm, and especially the emphasis on Spike's importance to both Twilight and Celestia.
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That part of the sentence makes sense to me. It means that Twilight often gets sidetracked on her way somewhere. Perhaps you haven’t seen the word “wont” before? It really is meant to be “wont”, not “won’t” or “want”.
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*sniff* you bastard you made me feel for them *cries in fetal position*.
Very good
A well done little one-shot that offers a scenario that i haven't seen much of, glad that this fic was mentioned to me.
2800353 It was mentioned? Wow, I feel honoured.
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A loyal reader and good friend by the name of Swashbucklist mentioned your story when I asked if anyone knew any good Spike fics that they would recommend to me.
A good recommendation indeed
2801716 Well, thanks to both you and Swashbucklist for your praise.
OH COME ON!!! YOU BEAT ME TO IT!!!
Dear author. Thank you.
Another great story drawing to a close (or at least a cliff-hanger) If I could ask Twilight to cast any spell, I'd ask her to make it so that these stories never ended (or at the very least kept going until the cannon departure of Twilight to Ponyville). Great job.