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Empyreal Danseuse 101

Joined November 2012
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    Empyreal Danseuse's Stories (1)

    • Pirouette Lovely
      Petite Lace dreamed of joining the Empyreal Danseuse ever since she was a filly... Will she make it?
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    Pirouette Lovely by Empyreal Danseuse

    Romance Sad Dark

    Petite Lace, the daughter of Canterlot's elite Fleur De Lis and Fancy Pants has been drawn in by the art of dance ever since she was a filly. When she was accepted to the Academie de Danse in Canterlot, she never imagined that the journey to the Empyreal Danseuse Company of Canterlot could be so difficult. Through the hardships of pointe ballet, torn ligaments, scandal, disorder, and grace, Petite Lace really begins to figure out what it really means to be a dancer.

    Rated Teen for dance related injuries and possible sexual themes.

    *This is not a clopfic*

    First Published
    2nd Nov 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Nov 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    NocturneD85
    #1 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    a cute story, faving

    Empyreal Danseuse
    #2 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1548767

    Thank you so much! c: I'm glad you like it!

    rosebug
    #3 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is cute!  I'd love to see where it goes.  :pinkiehappy:

    My only problem is the dialogue, every time a different pony speaks, put it on a separate line.  The way it is now looks a bit confusing.

    Empyreal Danseuse
    #4 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1549899

    Sounds great, thank's for the tip! :DD I'm glad you like it!

    Ponaygurl
    #5 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Would you like me to send you some fanart of Petite? I have an image in my mind.

    Empyreal Danseuse
    #6 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1550834

    Ohmygosh I would LOVE That. :DD

    She's really thin, built like her mother (Fleur De Lis) with a light purple/lavender mane and tail put up into buns and she's a unicorn and her body is white. :DDD <3 Thank you so much.

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