happy November! show your spirit with mustaches!

yup

god damn it

This is awesome....

Oh, what the hell have I stumbled across...

>>15487831548783

Hay, I remember you!

You had that super sad pinky story!

I liked that one

Keep doing those! I came dangeously close to tears on that and i need some kind of resolution!

Hope you liked the story

>>15488241548824 I certainly did, and I most certainly will! Glad for the recognition!

Ok....  I'm curious...  I'm gonna probably regret this but....  Fave and Tracked....

~Skeeter TL

I feel your pain Big Mac.  

>>15488351548835

Oh... Didnt consider the creepy factor...

Sorry...

I just remembered the story and the avatar was memorable for some reason or anouther...

(sigh)

Im bored...

Gunna go read somemore now... Have a good one

>>15488611548861

Hey now...  I didn't mean it like that.  This is gonna be an awkward kinda awesome.

I'm actually looking forward to the insanity.

~Skeeter (Participating in No Shave) T L.

>>15488751548875

Oh

Oh

Buck sorry i thought it was a comment on the one comment i left with the other author... Sorry im a bit of a moron

i rarely get positive feedback, so i guess i just assumed the worst... Sorry...

...

Thanks i hope it lives up to expectations

This is awesome. I love your writing style, but maybe get a pre-reader or editor? Just a few grammar mistakes that kinda took me outta the moment

>>15489201548920

S'all good.  I know the feeling.

~Skeeter T L

Most enjoyable...The next installment...

I WANT IT NOW!!!!

Image: http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/ABTALK2.gif

Hooray for No Shave November!

...

Even if, as a proud beard owner, for me is always a no shave day!

Holy Bucking Celestias Shiney Flank Hole Rutting BATMAN!

Im in the side thing! The side thing where they put the stories that people like!

(from lack of any other way to express the joy i feel i shout like a lunatic, scaring the shit out of my roommate and his cat)

Veiws aside this makes this my best story ever! Buck sleep, writing more now!

Thank you everyone!

"I thought of this story after cutting myself really, really badly--" "--While shaving last night."

gotta learn to read sentences more carefully.

Some nitpicks to grouse over a bit: "were" not "where" for past tense of "was", lavender is not a proper noun and should not be all caps, regardless of whether Twi's awesomness is deserving of putting her adjectives in all caps. Names however are proper nouns and as such Spike and Twilight should always be capitalized.

Like the idea however, have some Movember Mustaches

That description. It actually hurt my eyes.

Hooray for John Travolta-resembling Spike!

hmm, I feel as though this will get really entertaining.

WATCHING!

I have no facial hair for I have no face

But I shall commit to this, so have a few

FOR NOVEMBER!!!!

I shall read this later.

I am currently in Health Class.

Hm. It looks like you have an interesting concept, but this needs work.

"But Twilight was not in the main room…where she had been only seconds before… no… wait…  spike looked up to the ceiling and saw his Lavender legal guardian hanging from the ceiling by her horn, her eyes open wide in shock, her body curled in a little ball, shaking like Fluttershy.

The loud bang of the dragon’s entrance had startled Twilight so much that she had jumped right to the ceiling and imbedded her horn into it. "

The second part of that quote is completely unneeded. You basically told me that Spike had scared Twi and she launched herself horn-first into the ceiling twice. It slows down the story and takes the reader out of the otherwise pretty funny scene. There's a lot of excess wording as well, extra fat as it were, and in 1750 words, not a whole lot actually happens. Filling your paragraph with ellipses (...) isn't ideal, and you've got quite a few mechanical errors as well, but I'm not going to hold those too much against you.

This isn't the worst I've ever read, and you managed to keep me engaged through the errors until the end, so that's good, but you need to tighten things up a bit.

This ... this is awesome!

Can't wait for more.

I don't....what in the....oh for the love of....oh forget it

*walks out*

"Oh look at what we've got here brother of mine, it's the same in every town.

Ponies with bare chins and not a lock of facial around.

Maybe they don't know that there's really no need for this weary despair."

"That the key they need to solve this failed follicle fad you and I will share."

>>15515911551591

I tried to get that to fit for like an hour!

Good one...

Anyways i know this one is kind of poor, but there is alot of nessisary set up for the next lot here so please please please just stick with it, it gets better!

>>15516091551609  I'm not criticizing you, I love this so far, I just thought it was funny.

>>15516331551633

So, why doesn't twilight sell magic created beards and mustaches? I mean, she could definitely get ALLOT of money it seams.

YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE!

I'm intrigued, I shall see where this goes;

Ciao

"Lunas presents had that" presents should be presence. The chapter was good though, I feel like those with vivid imaginations will have fun with this one.

Please continue darling

>>15514371551437 Did you... Did you make a custom meme just for this???

>>15524171552417 Nope. I found it on the webs as usual. Apparently, someone else did.

>>15523341552334

Its only suggestive if you know what its suggesting, besides its funny...people like that

>>15522581552258

Im not stopping, i'll update very soon, im in editing for 3 now (yes i do proofread this stuff, i just suck at it)

Hope you all enjoyed, updates coming...

I smell beards coming up...

Besides, DAT COVER IMAGE!

No matter how the story goes...  It would be.... Amusing to end it on November 30.  And end it epically.

A few grammar problems, but otherwise I'm liking it.  A lot.

~Skeeter T L

I only looked because of the cover image, and I'm very happy I did.

can't wait for more!

>>15538401553840

To be honest im not sure... I know for fact that the story will end with november, but 3 is taking longer than expected (patching afew plot holes).  But yes, this story will end with this mounth... I guess the epicness really depends on how much build up i can do, which should be a fair bit as there are a lot of things happening all at once.  

Thanks for reading, more to come

Also, with the new season starting up agian in like what? A week? We may find some more epicness!

Dat cover image indeed.

Nice to know Celestia liked hookers in the past, makes her seem a little more normal.

Luna has a thing for beards huh?

Who wants to bet that she goes on a rampage through ponyville after every stallion gets epic facial hair?

Oh come ON!  No song?  

Sing!  Sing!  Sing!

Entertaining, but there are some grammatical problems that get rather jarring. I would pay close attention to capitalization if I were you, and there are several places where you confused some homophones (for instance, waist/waste and where/were). Those are usually missed by the spellcheck, so they need to be watched for particularly carefully. ...Now that my bout of grammar nazism is over, my compliments to you for a truly entertaining premise that looks to have excellent further potential. I eagerly await the next chapter!

>>15692201569220

Sorry about that, i actually did most of this chapter and the next on a word processor without any correction stuff to catch that... And dislexics are jews to grammer nazis, but im here to get better, and have been, really.

Thanks for the cc, it helps keep me motivated

Hope you like the next chapter

Funny stuff.

Although the lack of capitalization throughout the chapter was pretty annoying.

"kneaded more doe" Dough is what you're looking for, there were a few others. A good pre-reader would be able to catch a lot of these for you. Also a name like Twilight should always be capitalized.

Ignoring these little grammar snafus, you've got an interesting little premise here; can't wait to see where it goes.

Ciao darling   

>>15697801569780

I just now got one, and i will ad that to my list...

Thanks

More coming soon

i think i got everything... editing wise, sorry

The elderly mare squinted her eyes at her two grandchildren for a second or two... There was Applejack in her Stetson... And there was Macintosh with a brand new, and snazzy looking...

APPLEJACK IS NOT WORTHY OF A STETSON. It's a fedora. Stetson's don't have the open cut at the begging of the hat and ONLY THE DOCTOR CAN WEAR A STETSON AND PULL IT OFF. MY GOD "TIME TURNER" THE LOCAL CLOCK'S COLT, WILL FUCK YOU UP BITCH.YOU WILL SUFFER. HE'S FOUGHT WEEPING ANGELS, DALEK'S, GAS MASK ZOMBIES, FRENCH CLOCK ROBOTS, MARTIAN'S, SLYTHIN, ABSORBALOAF'S, SHADOW'S, UNDERWATER ASTRONAUTS, AND A MONKEY ON A SEGWAY. HE SURE AS HELL CAN TAKE DOWN A PONY WEARING A HAT.

GERONIMO!!!

>>15705411570541

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Here's a comment, hope you like it!

Another great chapter, can't wait to see where this is going, especially since I'm trying for a 'stache of my own Once again though, I gotta recommend you find a pre-reader, it would likely make this fic a whole lot more accessible. I know there are readers out there who won't even touch a story if they find a grammar mistakes, and that's a shame since this story has been really fun so far!

BEARDS FOR EVERYONE!

YOU GET A BEARD!

AND YOU GET A BEARD!

AND YOU!

AND YOU!

AND YOU GET A DOUBLE BEARD!

.....BBBEEAAARRRDDDSSSS!!!!!!

Oh shit...tracking!

>>15601871560187  Oh dear lord...

Wonder what the heck was in that beard foam (can I have some for my balding dad?)

Great story but I can't help but read Applejack's words in a Scottish accent due to the "Aye/ay" in place of an "I" or "ah".

YOUGETAMOUSTACHEEVERYOTHERWORDBECAUSETHEYAREAWESOME!ILOVETHEM!

dtlux1

>>15601871560187

Nope... Better...

Next chapters should be up Before thanksgiving.

>>16453841645384Next chapter pleez! It is thanksgiving and itis still not here.

dtlux1

Posted from phone...

Sorry there is no web here to upload to editor!

It will be up asap!>>16657421665742 sorry!

>>16661721666172 ok thank you

Falm: Forget beads, mustaches are the way to go!

holy crud sorry!!! i didn't hit the publish button!

>>16900971690097

i respect your opinion, but beards hold the true power...

in any event the story takes a turn for the goofy now, but then again we all entered this on the premise of Yar! and kept going expecting a Luna rampage... so... yeah.

it should be funny though

note: got featured for two minuets before i was pushed off... got 3 favs and was happy as a pink mare with pancakes.

Smoke this comment of crack.

Luna and Celestia with beards, make it happen.

>>16931381693138

A few grammar issues aside this is hilarious.

I have a bearded dragon and hes cute I always rub behind the head

Immortal Bearded Dragon...?

That...  I....  F--- it.  WIN.

I am glad to see you didn't just quit on this story.  Only thing that pisses me off is an unfinished story.  Even more if it's a GOOD one...  Like this one.

KEEP IT UP.

~Skeeter T L

Bearded Dragons are best dragons.

And this story continues to make be lol heartily.

"enough to make every apple as far away as sweet apple as far away as Manehatten quiver in fear" I think you forget to delete something.

"Big mac throughout his chest and braced himself for the spell."  You might've missed a word here or something else, I can't tell.

"Cranky opened his eyes and saw that he was now utterly balled." You probably meant bald.

Just trying to help. I'm sorry if this comment isn't quite the crack you were looking for.

You have a wonderful story and I want to help make as good as possible, please continue

Ciao darling

>>16942251694225

Thank you, didnt have much time to edit, i will fix...

Sorry about the trouble, this isnt your job, its mine

Hope you laughed, i like making readers laugh.  

Anyways, honestly quip or hate or anything else... That

Ittle veiw number is kindof inpersonal... A comment shows not only that someone is reading, but that the reading has some sort of effect.  If its possitive im motivated,vif its negitive I take it to heart and work to fix...

Either way its flipping awsome

Ah, spongebob reference

That was the best of all showdowns.  All hail the Immortal Bearded Dragon!  All hail!

FINALLY!

The day I see Twilight with a beard has come!

Some grammatical issues, but a great chapter, my friend!

>>17008981700898

the next chapter should come out soon... very soon.

and it will feature Luna, the mane six, and princess Celestia... along with a super time laps.  get ready for   

I actually was going to shave, but now forget it. its only like 3 more days

Get a proofreader, and I'll be a fan.

Classic Twilight.  Freaks out at such stuff.  Nice job, dude.

~Skeeter T L

>>17010511701051

I have a proofreader but I have been doing edits post publish, a consequence of oporating on a deadline, story is over in 3 days.

Well.  Now things are gonna pick up.

>>17009141700914 I haven't shaved in weeks

LMAO

Oh my sides!

"Spike glared for a moment, unaware that his innocents had just been saved. "

"Innocence".

Noticed you said ut hasn't been proofread! Heh heh heh. Heh.

>>17012251701225

same had to get hair cut

>>17068661706866

If this goes TwiLuna...

>>17115891711589

well you gave it your all sooooo i say finish it for great justice and beards.... well mostly beards but you get the point

CONTINUE!!!!! please sorry for yelling

Finish it.

That's all I can say.

Do not fear the mail.  Do not fear the hate.

Plow through it and FINISH IT OFF.

You owe it to you and this excellent story.

~Skeeter T L

Continue! We all love you and will not begrudge you such a minor thing!

(This sums up my feelings)

And I haven't given up on you.

Keep it coming.

Oh it's alright! You did it for the good of all of us! Well, except the ones who are dead...

But there's no sense crying over every mistake! You just keep on trying till you run out of cake!

NO! STOP CRYING AND START WRITING.

Finish it!

FInish it! Missed deadlines happen all the time in fanfiction and aren't a big deal, but unfinished stories are a tragedy, especially ones as fun as this one. I've been enjoying each and every chapter of this story, and I don't mind waiting at all. Take all the time you like.