Now rewritten to suck 20% less! Or possibly be better than before. Greatly expanded dialogue between Rartiy and Spike and an altered ending. Rewrites designed to take in mind criticism received and make the story more appealing for the Sparity fans.
Wow holy crap, my rewrite it nearly twice as long as the original, and I hope its better for it.
Spike's been turned from a little baby dragon into a big baby dragon and now feels more keen to act on his desires.
Rarity won't like this.... will she?
Pointless one shot.