Aww. No one has replied to your story yet. I woulda earlier if I woulda read the revised version. I keep trying but every time I turn around something comes up. I'm either reading something else or I have to do something such as chores. Anyways I like the revision so far.

>>17464311746431 Thanks!

I see some difference from last time. One such one is that no one woke up in the morning and i think last time everyone was missing and mark wasn't there originally. Right?

>>17601661760166 Well you are definitely not WRONG...