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MallaJong1


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Innocent Spike plays a dating simulator...starring the ponies of Equestria. Though as he delves further into the game, his attitude towards it begins to take a dramatic turn. Because for Spike it will no longer be just a game. It will become his new way of life.

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Comments ( 210 )

I am very experienced with visual novels/dating sims, especially Japanese VNs. I believe out of all the stories I have written thus far, I had the most fun with this one. :) Happy Thanksgiving, everyone!
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Thanks for the 'likes'!

Finally! :rainbowkiss:
Ahhh that ending! :rainbowlaugh:

Spike was enthralled by the whole experience. The game was romantic, comedic, thrilling and unreservedly thought-provoking.

Praising your previous fics? Very modest? I won't deny the truth though :raritywink:

4 views, 7 likes, lol :)

I see this name of this chapter is a reference to The World Only God Knows?

You are a genius and the Seth McFarlane of all pony-fiction.

I BOW BEFORE YOU!!

Also, could someone PLEASE make a dating sim with Spike happen? Now I really wanna play as him and... "conquer" all the mares.

SOMEONE MAKE THIS HAPPEN!!!

Adding to read later
+ in b4 feature.

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Haha. No need to bow, my friend! You feedback is definitely enough! Thanks so much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Oh, yeah! I am playing like six at the same time right now. Hahaha! :)
Thanks for the awesome comment! Spongebob is a complete 'g'!

1650651 If you don't mind me asking, what might be those games be?

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Let's see if I can list them off the top of my head:
Tsukihime (still need to finish all routes)
G-Senjou no Maou (Devil on the G String)
Conquering The Queen
Hoshizora no Memoria - whishing upon a distant star
Eien no Aselia
Koihime Musuou
Katawa Shoujo (American)

Liked, favorited, subscribed, upvoted, downvoted, leftvoted, 5 star.... oh wait.
Spike gets 7/7 asses and all dem hoes.
Also, you do know that you have to do 'Spike's Apple Bloom' now, don't you?
Otherwise....
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1650691 Anything good in those games? Also, are they patched and translated? (Besides Katawa shoujo. I know that game was made in America)

Please tell me I'm not the only one who feels as if dating sim is the only way one could get a girlfriend

Seems like you had a blast writing this. I love your combination of complicated wording and brilliant comedy (especially fourth-wall jokes). Well done, good sir!

“S-Spike…” Apple Bloom trembled in fear as Spike stopped in front of her.

He looked her up and down and nodded. “You’re next.”

Sequel? Get to it, Malla :raritywink:

You won me with the chapter title alone. Otashigami bless you.

This was definitely interesting i applaud the good fic as always you continue to amaze me with your excellent writing.

Before reading: given the title, I think you may like a TWGOK crossover featuring Spike I'm working on:moustache: After all, he's a pretty cool guy.

EDIT: read. That was funny as hell, specially the frustrating Applejack's route. Also, dat ending:rainbowderp:

Spike found himself in a love bet during Rainbow Dash’s route, while during Pinkie Pie’s he was sucked into a sudden relationship. For Vinyl Scratch he was forced to be her assistant, and as the plot developed the baby dragon discovered that the deejay pony started to harbor sentiments of attraction towards him. Princess Luna’s route was possibly the most engrossing, however. If the player smoothed-talked his way onto the balcony of Canterlot Castle with the alicorn at his side, he’d be able to make-out with her under a sheet of glimmering stars.

I c wut u did tar.

1650693 So overdone. We need "Spike's Scootaloo", though. Ultimate battle of coolness besides RD's one.

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Well, love is such a sweet illusion.

Ohai. Let's see where this takes us.

Very well done as usual good sir. Very... Meta. I like that.

Also, as you have now referenced a "Spike's Apple Bloom," go forth and let it be so!

1650790 ...Is this really real?

I SHALL AWAIT ITS RELEASE SO I MAY BASK IN ITS GLORY!!!

:rainbowlaugh: That was great! You should continue this.

Sorry, your story got approved during onling famous author panels that were live streamed. NOW THEN!

After read: pacing was pitch perfect, it made me giggle at times and I think good old Mallajong's still got it!

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Thanks, my friend. I am happy you enjoyed it! :)
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Hopefully you like it, man. :)
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DarkPhoenix, how are you doing, my friend? Thanks for the comment, dude. I am excited that you liked it! Oh, and...
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1651403 All in all: This story was decent. 7.5/10. :rainbowkiss:
My face most of the time:
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Okay so now one the list is

Spike's Applejack and Spike's Derpy, make it so please. I shall await the epic of it.


I love you long time!

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Yeah, baby! Thanks, Art! You've always been a great fellow reader! :)
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I am doing quite well. You've been busy since EQLA. We need to hang out sometime after the holiday.

I lol'd! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Good job, bro! :pinkiehappy:

*brohoof*

I refuse for this to stay a one-shot :pinkiecrazy:

:rainbowlaugh:
Malla, that was hilarious.
:rainbowderp:
Let's watch Spike do that to Luna!!

1650651 I just read this story again and I found something wrong with it. The scene at the very beginning with Spike standing in front of a mirror never happened, so why is it there?

Awesome sauce. Yeah those type of games make no sense.

Don't know what I just read, BUT I LIKED IT.
That ending, lol poor AppleBloom.

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I repeated the line with Spike laughing manically, instead I made no mention of the mirror because I felt it was implied. :) You liked it enough to read it twice?! Awesome, bro! Haha!

1651609 Dude, it's a great story, and I may just read it again and again later today.

Sorry, I just couldn't help myself :unsuresweetie:

Spike gets all the bitches >.<

1650691 Wont you agree that those games can be a pain in the flank sometimes?

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