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Mr. Grimm
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Mr. Grimm
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FIRST!
Anyway, candy is boss unless you eat too much of it.
And before this gets featured, get a thumbs...
Brilliantly done!
Well that was an interesting twist. I was half expecting you to send Trixie to a rather grisly end. Glad to see that you didn't, would have been depressing even if she might have deserved it.
Very well done. I love Trixie and this is a wonderful fit for her. Ty so very much/
I can't think of anything good or bad to say about this... I guess I liked it, but it was very weird... I guess I'll thumbs-up it.
Good work, that man. And quite unique, due to containing a usage of the "it was all a dream" plot device that actually worked pretty well!
I can actually see Trixie doing this, despite her spiteful nature. That *incoming spoiler*
dream sequence really threw me for a loop. However, I must admit I don't understand why Trixie manipulated the kids like that in the beginning, that part seemed -to me- a bit out of character. I figured she would have resorted to some sort of parlour trick or scary phantasm. However, that is merely my opinion and it doesn't retract from the story. Good work, easily a thumbs up.
Cheers
~Cosmic
I love this! i.ytimg.com/vi/uNxUOA-vUBk/0.jpg
I would've like it if her stomache had actually exploded.
Jk, but seriously, this ever so slightly reminded me of Umineko. Great story.
Great job!!
Her candy chaos dream was hilarious, especially slipping on the gumballs. That whole sequence reminded me of a scene from Young Sherlock Holmes where Watson hallucinates a mausoleum full of living pastries. I like to think she's a much nicer pony behind her flashy stage persona, but it's always nice to see her contend with those imagined flaws the fandom has given her.
Shouldn't it be "It would have all gone to Trixie's hips anyway", since she talks in the third person.
Other than that, I enjoyed the story :D
Love it! This deserves a feature!