That was fucking random... and I love it. Discolight is the OTP.

Seriously? The episode isn't even out yet and there's a shipfic?

"and the picture made by me" Yes i can see that

>>15293591529359

sorry I wanted some sort of honour

even if it was as dubious as "first poerson to write a sombra shipfic"

ARRRGH it's "Somber". I know it's not anyone's fault here, but why do people think it's "Sombra" in the first place?

>>15294941529494

Im just going by how TV tropes spells it

>>15294941529494

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2012/10/name-clarification-on-new-villian-from.html

Look up your facts before you speak up, Cutie.

Wait, wut? discord? Oh what a lovely chaos this is.

We need discord reaction pics goddamit

look please I dont want anymore comments about how sombra is spelt alright

or else you will make fluttershy cry

>>15295141529514

well thats just embarrasing. I actually did read it but i seemed to have seen it the other way around. I'm sorry. I'll just go wallow in whatever people are supposed to wallow in now.

Again, sorry. heh. heh.

>>15295311529531

Tss, we all make mistake.

Except I.

I'm the best there is.

Cheers.

>>15295281529528

... You had two comments on it?

>>15293591529359

There were shipfics of Somber right after the first image of him was discovered.

>>15295251529525:

Just saying...but like these?

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png

or

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png

XD

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

>>15299191529919

This. Just. This. Wow. That was fun. have a mustache

Their feared ruler king Sombra had returned from his icy prison, freed by a unicorn mare who was now his wife and co-ruler

King should be capitalized. You're also missing a period here.

Equestria had five years with the rulers in stone, they are in a state of chaos without the royals to lead them and they will be unprepared when we strike with our superior resources!

Comma splice?

“I would never help that tyrant King Sombra get released, I would never betray you, the princesses or our friends or turn them into stone, I would never brainwash my brother or my old foal-sitter, I would never get Spike to become my evil servant, I would never oppress a great empire and i would never in fifty thousand million year..............MARRY AN EVIL UNICORN LIKE KING SOMBRA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

More comma splices! I suggest you turn some of those commas to periods, capitalize 'i' in the last one, and it's 'fifty thousand million years' with an 's'.

Sorry couldn't help it.

That said, King SombraXAnypony is now my new OTP.

Omyfreakinggoodness I want to marry princess Twilight.... that's not weird... right?

Also

"fifty thousand million year"

You should change year to years to be grammatically nazi about it...

Doing this because you want the first SomberxTwilight fic? You sound like one of those people who buy a game on Midnight release, go home, and Let's Play it.

As well as Pinkie not grammatically making the best story, her logic is off too. (Sorry, don't know how to quote the story)

First, it talks about how Twilight instantly said yes to King Sombre's offer. That just seems silly thinking about it. Unless the story develops more, Twilight has no reason to hate her friends. And I don't think Spike would exactly be working for someone who just killed Rarity. Pinkie Pie should know her friends the best of all.

How do you even write a story about a character you know nothing about? Plus, if you're trying to make a Somber X Twilight fic (and it's progressing), then how come you're giving a Discord hook?

"Twilight nodded understanding now, and then she thought of an idea and asked in a sultry voice “you think we can go to our bedchambers to celebrate, and maybe try and produce a heir to the throne of our glorious empire!”

I DON'T LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING

...Well, that was messy, short, confusing, and contained poor grammar and spelling.

>>15295311529531 I thought the same thing.

>>15298521529852

wait where?

>1531102

your not alone my friend>>15315031531503

sorry it was just a bit of fun

I was also working with the clips I got and I have a nagging feeling Sombra wont really get a physical appearence

>>15311021531102

not at all my friend

after all your nto the only one

>>15327291532729

what is this?

Well... That was rather random.

More likely after being imprisoned a second time Sombra would  swear loyalty to the Burning Legion and after failing them they would punish him with eternal hellfire.

>>15328241532824

That, good sir or madam, is a spambot attempting to peddle its wares.

Why don't u countinue?

Sexual references in an E-rated fic...? You better fix that, buddy.

>>15336011533601

fixed it

sorry I forgotten this site has ratings

thanks for telling me

First official Sombre romance fic!

hazzah!

not sure if i'm going to read it though...

Oh you really had me going there for a moment.  I thought it felt just a bit too mediocre to be a genuine attempt.  Got a good laugh out of it so you have my thumb up.  

It would be interesting to see someone pull this off seriously though…  

Holy crap, there was a ship fic out before the episode even aired? I was just joking on derpibooru when i said there would be at least one ship fic of Twi with Sombra right after the episodes came out but before.... wow.

Gonna read that later when i find the time.

I did not just read that

I did not just read....

I didn't read....

I JUST READ THAT OMG!