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Jet Cannon 548391

Joined June 2012
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    Jet Cannon's Stories (5)

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    Twilight writes a letter to her parents, telling them about her great new friends and her wonderful new job!

    First Published
    29th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 16 )

    #1 · 29w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
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    Hey anybody who reads this! :twilightsmile:

    Just a little note: this is my first short little oneshot, and also my first "story" not involving some form of darker or more serious undertones. This kind of thing has probably been done already, but hey, now I've done it and there's nothing you could have done to stop me! :pinkiecrazy:

    It may strike you as somewhat disjointed, but I reckon that's what Twilight, clever though she is, would probably be like if she's just phrasing a family letter off the top of her head, without the same care for structure etc. that she may put into a friendship report. Just my thoughts on the matter.

    To Kirakina, if you read this: I'm sorry! I'm sorry! :fluttershyouch:

    #2 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well, I liked it. It was nice and it sounded like somthing Twilight would write. Well done, sir!

    #3 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·
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    If a foal wants to read the latest adventure novel by Anthony Horseowitz...

    And that's what gave you a fav :pinkiehappy:

    But seriously, well done! A good story that I enjoyed immensely!

    #4 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very sweet, and very much in Season One character.  :twilightsmile:

    #5 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #7 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This made me all warm and fuzzy inside.

    #8 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·
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    loved this, it was really sweet, and not difficult at all to imagine in Twilight's voice.

    #9 · 3w, 20h ago · · ·
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    This was really sweet.  The one line that got me laughing out loud was

    If another Unicorn wants to read about Starswirl the Bearded’s magical theorems… well, it hasn’t happened yet, but if they did then they can come to me and my library!

    I can't wait to see more stories like this! :twilightsmile:

    #10 · 3w, 17h ago · · ·
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    >>2506830 I was picturing her excitedly rambling on at this point, then suddenly deflating a bit as she remembered that she's the only pony in Ponyville likely to be interested in them! :facehoof:

    Thank you for your kind words, but as to whether any more sweet little nothings are on the way... well, we'll see. :twilightsheepish:

    #11 · 3w, 15h ago · · ·
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    After all the shipping-stories-with-detailed-sex-and-implausible-pairings, after all the dark and violent alternate universe fics, after all the human-in-Equestria with uninteresting OCs, I was finding fanfiction in this fanbase depressing. Nice to see someone hasn't forgotten the shows roots! :twilightsmile:

    I don't mind darker undertones, but some of the stories I've read are so out of character it might as well be a different show, and they seem violent simply for the sake of violence, so something short and sweet toned like this is appreciated :yay:

    #12 · 3w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>2508061 [All his other stories can probably be summed up by that first paragraph's complaints] Yup! Important to remember where we came from, after all! :twilightblush:

    #13 · 3w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Cute. :twilightsmile:

    #14 · 3w, 13h ago · · ·
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    #15 · 3w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Sweet, fun and, more importantly, believeable. Twilight is clever, indeed, but also really emotional at times, so a little bit scatter-brained syle is what is actually expected, seing as it's dictated by her, not written by horn. And indeed, that seems to be exactly the kind of thing in-the-show Twilight projects about her status and current whereabouts. Which makes this amazingly close to canon characterisation. Bravo.

    #16 · 3w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>2509136 Wai thenk yew. :moustache:

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