Source
<

emp 1018

Joined October 2012
2 followers

    Groups

    emp's Stories (1)

    • There's Always Tomorrow
      Twilight's feeling a little nervous after her wedding, can a talk with a friend calm her down?

      4,156 words · 1,083 views · 33 likes · 14 dislikes

    Twilight's feeling a little nervous after her wedding, can a talk with a friend calm her down?

    +Warning+  Probably as close to a mature rating as teen can get.

    First Published
    29th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 23 )

    emp
    #1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Oh. I, um-

    I'M SORRY!  PLEASE DON'T HATE ME!

    I mean, um if that's all right with you.

    #2 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    This was confusing to say the least. But what gets me REALLY ANGRY, is that you have a fucking period in the chapter title. THAT DOESN'T BELONG!

    #3 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Not a big fan of polygamy, but this was a very cute and touching story. Have an upvote.

    #4 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Wait... what just happened? I think I get it, Twilight is married to Big Mac and somehow Fluttershy is both their lover... and I... Epona and Gaea I'm confused

    #5 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Can't say I enjoyed it. Sorry.:fluttershysad:

    #6 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1528669

    you mean the I'll? it is in fact correct grammar, and means I will :twilightsmile:

    Wait, we got a Macintwishy going on here? That's the first time i have seen one :rainbowlaugh:

    #7 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    This...What.

    I don't even know what to say! :fluttershbad:

    #8 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1528698

    That's an apostrophe. The title, has a period in it. This is a period " . " and this is an apostrophe " ' ". See the difference?

    #9 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Full of DAWWWWW!

    :yay::twilightsmile::eeyup:

    #10 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1528785 oops. my bad :twilightoops:

    I ain't native englsh speaker, so most expresisons when it comes to grammar is... well lacking.

    Let's just enjoy the story, shall we :pinkiehappy:

    #11 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    I understood things. Then again I head-cannon the herd structure of pony society ever since reading Xenophilia. :twilightblush: It just makes too much sense given their species and population disparity between genders. :moustache:

    #12 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Weeeeeeeeell... :unsuresweetie:

    It was quite well-written! :pinkiehappy:

    #13 · 33w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
    Reply 

    Wow... I can't get to the kitchen now... my wings won't let me through the doorway!

    #14 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Confusing at some bits. But i enjoyed it

    #15 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1528940

    Du kommer fra Norge?

    #16 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    I was confused for a moment, then oooohhhhhhhh!!!!! :twilightoops:

    it's still weird. :rainbowwild:

    #18 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1531037KA faen? Kossen fant du ut det?

    Profilen min ja :facehoof:

    temmer nok det :yay:

    #19 · 33w, 19h ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1532486

    Ja, din profil ;) Jeg bodde i Norge i ett år. Sør for Oslo i en by som heter Moss.

    #20 · 33w, 9h ago · · ·
    Reply 

    that title

    :P

    #21 · 23w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Confusing.  Odd twist you couldn't guess unless you know that about animals.

    yet strangely well done.

    Kudos

    #22 · 14w, 2d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1528040 I'm not a fan of polygamy, but this was well written and pretty cute. I know horses have a herd mentality and therefor multiple mates, buuuuuut I can't help but think about how the characters of this show have a more human like personality that would make me think they would do the one partner thing. But again, well written and tasteful. I'm assuming Fluttershy called Big Macintosh "Mr. Macintosh" to be cute.

    #23 · 1w, 14h ago · · ·
    Reply 

    A Twilight/Fluttershy/Macintosh threesome :rainbowhuh:

    I can't say I disapprove, Twimac and Twishy are my two favorite pairings :rainbowlaugh:

    Also, I'm not really against Fluttermac, I just wish people had more appreciation for Twimac and Twishy :applejackunsure:

    0 60098 187588
    Anonymous comments currently disabled. Please register to make comments