Short, but saccharine, if I do say so myself.  Play nicely.

  Secondarily,

             ~Plyxe

When I learned of her, I learned her name was Derpy. I say it not to insult her, but as an old friend I haven't seen for years. I love her crossed eyes, and would hurt any-one who hurts her. Why do people have to be so cruel?

My heart. It just broke....

And this is my new headcanon for Ditzy.

Short but sweet. I like Ditzy's mental declaration at the end.  You know she would do anything; brave any ridicule for her daughter.

Very touching.  Beautifully done.

OH MY GOD

I HAVE THE WORST SENSE OF DEJA VU

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Are you sure that you didn't upload this beforehand or something? Or that that illustration and/or part of the wording of the introduction here wasn't already used by someone? I'm so... almost tingly with deja vu right now...

Anyways, the fic itself is very nice. *upvote* I just wish I could be rid of the tingles.

Why not? *faved*

Now, the way I see it, there's two of them. They're twins (or triplets, if 'The Sisters Doo' is canon, which I doubt), and they are conveniently exactly the same. The only difference is their eyes.

=Ditzy

=Derpy

Looks interesting, will read later.

That was a wonderful story.

Short, but to the point and very moving.

I am quite sure I felt something stir inside me as I was reading this.

Excellent writing. I applaud you my dear author.

>>15264691526469  Aww, thanks!  That means things to me.

I didn't use any parts of this story before, or the illustration, but hey.  Free deja vu.

Oh, and the tingles typically last for a period of up to 12 hours.  If said tingles continue to be felt after this period, please contact your local entomologist.  If he can do jack-squat about it, for obvious reasons, then apply some foot cream.

   Graciously,

              ~Plyxe

>>15264681526468  I will now thank you in three different languages.

Շնորհակալություն:

ಧನ್ಯವಾದಗಳು.

謝謝。

Thanks for the comment!

   Trilingually,

               ~Plyxe

Tragically beautiful. Thank you.

You make both me and Fluttershy cry.... Not Rarity too! Luna damn it, this story was so beautiful!

You get an upvote, a fave and a review for your epic work... And I'll even throw in a mustache, I'm that awesome

Here ya go;

Goodness, Plyxe.  What a talent you are.  Hard to make something so short so emotional, but you nailed it.  A beautiful piece, this.  A beautiful dance.

...and don't be mad if you see some elements from this in "The Sisters Doo".  Like, soon.  

>>15283321528332  EEP!  It's Ponky, that guy that I stalk and respect and stuff!

That's awesome of you to say, and thank you very much.

And if you use any part of this in The Sisters Doo, then I will explode from gleefulizing-ness.

   Fanboyishly,

                 ~Plyxe

>>15271821527182

Can you assist me in applying said creams personally?

/ pervy

>>15361031536103  Haha, of course not, ya silly sausage!  That's creepy and also perverted!  Hahaha!

   Sdhsianjk,

              ~Plyxe

I haven't felt a tear slide down my cheek like that in a while.

Ditzy received her cutie mark that day, for she was able to see the the hidden beauty in things that others would miss.

Just as she's able to see that, I'm able to spot two of the same word: the.

And he leaned his head down, and she leaned up.

You're using "and" twice in the same sentence. Rewording that part is advised for better flow.

Those were the only errors I saw, however. This was a beautifully written one shot. It shows so much rather then tell, and the quality definitely makes up for the low quantity. I'll have to read other of your works, and stay updated on what you're doing lately. I have a feeling I won't regret clicking that follow button.

>>19587771958777 Thank you for pointing out those errors.

And thank you very much for the follow.  I am a fan of you, as well.  As I'm sure you know./squee

>>19600191960019 Of course. It's one of the reasons I went violating around in your stories. And I'm very glad with what I found. Such skill with words, and you've still not been recognized for your impressive talent at grammar, word play, originality and ideas? This is why we can't have nice things!

>>19603771960377 Aw, that's so nice!  Thank you.  I'm sure it'll happen eventually.  Doesn't make me more patient for it, but I can wait.