Just a story I wrote and fixed but deleted by accident due to not understanding how this website does things. Anyway its a first person romance human X Pinkie. No clop
Tis my first story that will be staying. I do enjoy hearing ways to improve my writing and I will take them to heart. Look for my new Fic "The Traitor" coming soon!
Short, simple, sweet, to the point, no clop. This is a winner in my book!
Needs paragraph breaks...
The story was fine. But this seriously needs a proof reader
>>15268311526831 It's a pleasure to meet a fellow scientist.
How do you do?
>>16189761618976 Im very fine my good sir, and you?
My life is doing exquisitely. Thank you very much for asking.
Pretty nice, but definitely need paragraphs.