Tis my first story that will be staying. I do enjoy hearing ways to improve my writing and I will take them to heart. Look for my new Fic "The Traitor" coming soon!

Short, simple, sweet, to the point, no clop. This is a winner in my book!

Needs paragraph breaks...

>>15268311526831 Noted

The story was fine. But this seriously needs a proof reader

>>15277501527750 Elaborate?

>>15268311526831 It's a pleasure to meet a fellow scientist.

How do you do?

>>16189761618976 Im very fine my good sir, and you?

>>16442711644271

My life is doing exquisitely. Thank you very much for asking.

Pretty nice, but definitely need paragraphs.