Twilight Sparkle has always been one for the occasional good and fun scare, but after Rainbow Dash dares her to get Slender and invite her friends over to see her play it, what will happen on the stormy night during the sleepover? Will Twilight show her friends that she's not afraid of Slenderman? Will Rarity like Slenderman's suit? Will Rainbow Dash loose her cool when Slenderman shows up? Can Applejack admit her fears? How will Pinkie react? And will Fluttershy die of shock? All questions will be answered eventually.
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Haha nice!
I loved the ending!
Here I thought the whole Slenderman fad had blown through...
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You got my attention at the title.
Dammit, Spike, I TOLD you about wifin' in tha club!
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(I'm so very sorry.)
I liked it. Well written, nice and short, good punch line. Pretty good I must say. Here, have a pinkie pie:
I knew this would end like that. Good job.
15-0 ain't a bad ratio.
Awesome. Funny ending too.
Dat ending.
Well done XD
Eh... this was the equivalent of a reaction video on Youtube of someone playing Slender. I was hoping for some pony-related twist to it, but nope. Plus the ending made me groan instead of laugh.
When the girls ran outside, I was hoping to see Derpy show up randomly dressed as Slender Man to scare them even more. Like she was trying on a suit for a friend when she got a bag stuck on her face and stumbled outside Twilight's house.
QHa! This is exactly how I pictured it would end! Quite funny! Leaving a like and a favorite.
Loved every bit of this!
If this gets featured, I'm going to scream. In anger.
Hell yes.
This game screwed me up.
1535212 Why is there an empty space in the middle section of that 20 dollar bill? Better call Doctor Whooves...
1539740 ha
My summary of my expressions throughout this fic:
Oh gosh, my sides!
And then Spike showed them all about the Slender Gun Mode. Suddenly, the game doesn't seem so scary.
Also, this story could've gone better had you fixed all of the dialogue errors, as well as the grammar ones.
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I must say thanks for your opinion on my story. That review you did was well written and it really helped me see the few niggles in my story. This really was just something I did for fun because I was bored and I've seen too many Slender crossovers on this site. What I wanted to do was something a little more unique and realistic. I will say however that this isn't my best written story, it was just something I wrote. If you want to see my full potential, then read any of the other stories I wrote.
Me: Hey, guess what?
Mane 6: What?
Me: Containment Breach in chamber 173.
Nice story I enjoyed it.
LOVE IT!!!
I died after reading that last sentence
I don't get the ending.
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There's a mode where you hear the $20 song instead of the music you hear when he gets close.
LOL funny! That was great! best humor/horror story ever!
Gimme 20 dollas!