I've always wanted a cloud... but now I've new dreams
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Spin-off of "Who Makes the Wind Blow?", which is the only fic of mine my friend ever liked. Though this story is related, I'd like to believe they are two completely different stories. Already miss ya, bro.
Big thanks to Future, for editing and being that crazy person to talk to. Also, special thanks to bookplayer and Twifight Sparkill for reading and giving me their input. They are also crazy.
A big thank you to you, for reading.
I just wanna see a fic where there's this real long list of credits, and it goes on like this. That'd be funny.
Regards
Church
Simply beautiful.
Technically, only pegasi can walk on clouds. Earth and Unicorns just fall through them. (see: Sonic Rainbow)
Aside from that nitpick, very cute story. Nice to step into the mindset of an innocent child.
Just when I started to read this,this song came on. I don't think I have any song more fitting. Beautiful story, I like it even more than the first one.
Small error here.
1537182 Whoopsie, thank you
1537129 Actually, I know this fact. I wanted to do something with the cloud made of pegasus feathers to neutralize this. Unfortunately, I never got around to explaining that clearly. Call that "laziness" if you wish, or, rather, I wasn't really able to find a way to keep the main in character and describe this. But good note, I knew this would be caught...
I nearly cried manly tears when I saw this part. I too have experienced death in the family and I hope that special somepony can forgive me for what I did.
Simply beautiful
I love it, Church.
I love it so much.
So beautiful.
This story is so beautiful in so many ways. It's creatively complex, appealing to many emotional points and regards, whilst maintaining a placid innocence throughout. It's imaginative, and it lends to a time in our lives when exertion, acceptance and gratitude were plainly earned and remained firmly a parental worship.
Just a great read. As expected from our Church!
Also, this is a thing: Church's Official Group! Join, or accept mediocrity! Philistines! Paltry wastrels! HEED THY RECOMMEND, HEATHENS!
Churchy, you've done it again.
Another.
Beautiful.
Fanfiction.
I hope you know how much I love your stories...
Your satisfied reader,
Kiara.
Odin's beard... so many feels...
1868884 Oh dear. You've come to read what I've written? I thank you for doing so, even though I'm a tad embarrassed...
Thanks
That was gorgeous
Wonderful.
1537315 I understood what was going on, Course I have seen similar concepts in other stories "Special clouds made specifically for non-pegasus to sit/stand on" Yours was A unique way of doing it though that I rather appreciate.
also This story. It was beautiful and brilliant and then? I read this second chapter, and I cried. Literally 31 of the most powerful words I've ever read But they were made such by the beauty of the story before hand.
Thank you for sharing something that is obviously very important and personal to you with us.
Moments ago Fluttershy was cought by the kite and fell from heaven, but then she could help “me” like she didn't get hurt at all? That's a bit strange—
But it doesn't matter. Logic doesn't matter here. You created the purest piece I've ever read in a while now. It's really freshing, and touching, and heartwarming.
Thank you, sir, you've done a great job.