Male. 20. Tabasco, Mexico. I'm actually more a drawing-maker than a writer :D ...by the way, Pinkie Pie is best pony ♥
Rainbow Dash has deep suspicions about Pinkie Pie. She does believe the party pony has a dark past which she tries to hide behind a curtain of laughter. And Rainbow Dash is out to find out that past.
Though they think Rainbow is kind of getting carried by the idea, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity and Twilight Sparkle soon get curious by it. Perhaps Rainbow Dash is right... Perhaps Pinkie Pie has some really dark stuff deep in her past...
...or maybe not.
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woah i like the idea
ill be waiting for more n.n
1519138 Thanks for reading, comenting, fav'ing and following :D
I'm glad you liked it ^w^
I'm tracking this sort of against my better guidance. I want to know what happens next.
Awesome! I can't wait to read more!
Then you must read Fluttershy discovers Gummy bears
This is starting to look like the opposite of everybody loves rainbow dash.
1520323 Thanks :D
1520868 Yes, you can. But thanks :D
1522016 I've read that one too
1522405 ...but haven't read that one...
Of course, if you want to be spooky, you could marvel at how Rarity dreams of Madame Le Flour, who I'm sure only Pinkie and RD know about... Ooooooh! *spooky face*
I'm just gonna take a shot in the dark and say that Rainbow's nightmare will be about Cupcakes...Sargent Sprinkles' Cupcakes that is.
This is cool! I wanna know more!!
yeah that dream was random,i was expecting a sister valuement dream ,like when rarity woke up,desperately going to hug sweetie but the plot is beggining :D
Ah! Plot goes forward in new way! Ah!
Ohhhh please post the next soon n.n finally the plot
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Nope, just Chuck Testa
Using - instead of " makes it really awkward to read.That's the only thing stopping me from liking this as much as I want to.
I've only read the first chapter so far, so I'll keep going and see if it's good enough to overcome that little annoyance.
EDIT: Well, it's good. Still awkward to read, though. Have a like.
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Yay, thanks ^w^ It was... awkward for me to write it
Since english is not my original language, there are some things I'm not actually sure how to write... But I'll keep trying! Thanks for reading 
Hahaha that end xd waiting for the final chapter
1772437 Here's a little tip, since english isn't your first language: "This is dialogue. It begins and ends with a quotation mark."
Hope that helps.
1773959 That's actually a rule?!
But... I thought that... BUT...! *does some research* Oh... It's an actual rule... That means I've been doing it all the wrong way.. :
Thanks, It helped 
Glad I could help.
Haha awesome story. And btw ignore the above comment, spam sucks.
A cute ending
for a history that could have been taken by a comedy fic.Loved it 
1879525 1859210 Thank you for reading and liking this :D
You wrote a great story. You should feel proud!
1998040 Thank you! ^^ It was funny to write it and I'm glad a lot of people here liked it
Great sorry 10 \10
Great sorry 10 \10
God, all of the girls besides Pinkie, wanna kill rbd. Yay! It's Kill Bill ponified!!!!!
2103879 Interesting idea... Kill Dash
2062139 Thanks for reading!
FTFY