Yo faggot whats in the guitar case?.... Man what if this happened to me? O wait, I live in Texas and have a concealed handguns license. Gotta love texas the only state you can legally kill someone for trespassing on your property.

After reading "The God Particle", I couldn't enjoy this story as I thought I would. Probably because the other one has a deeper plot and long, descriptive scenarios. BUT, I'm give it a try since I'm a big fan of humans-in-equestria fics.

How the buck did I get a perfect 5 from 2 different readers?

>>127346127346make that two people and one emotionally fucked up 13 year old kid from Florida (hmmmmm...tmi maybe...nah just enough)

>>127483127483Make it Five!

Okay, really, formatting is an issue here. It's just big clumps of text.

An important rule of thumb: New character speaking, new line.

Also, a bit more description wouldn't hurt.

Just because rainbow dash has rainbow colored hair does not make her gay or bisexual.. just sayin

>>131915131915

True, though her personality doesn't help. Nor does the fact that she resembles a flying gay pride banner...

>>131652131652now 8 and one emotionally fucked up teen (I mean me) except one of them gave it a low rating

>>131952131952true

>>131915131915 from the moment I saw her I thought she was a lesbian, and my opinion hasn't changed in the 6 months that I have been a Brony.

This is definitely an interesting story far. I've been hesitant to read a fiction in which someone comes to Ponyville, considering they have rarely gotten good reviews, but it's not too bad ^.^

Excellent

This is a great fic and I want more of it.

"BACON!" Fail! Ponies are vegan!

>>149640149640 I wouldn't say that. They eat eggs, right? That's technically meat.

ha! good brony joke about dr. whooves and the tardis

>>149704149704 Well, you don't have to kill something to eat eggs.

While reading through this before I write the next update, I realized autocorrect changed some things. Ugh, why does it change real words sometimes?

Oh god I beg you to give him 4 feat of snow efectivly locking him away in his well provisioned house so he may write more

so far this is a great story.  just dont end it porlly

Nice Says I it so far

>>157722157722 I wish that happened, but no, nature enjoys mocking me.

Cannot wait to read more!

>>159061159061just like luna and firewall in TTEOAP "nature be trollin"

Going by the the multiverse theory he likely just ending up and a universe where she and AJ are lesbians I see nothing wrong with that.

>>149640149640 Vegetarian Bacon

From what it looks like no one noticed you updated.

I didn't think you were dead, not for one second.

You probably have school to think of just like the rest of us in America.

Oh and I don't believe I had a account photo last time I commented here. (If I ever did.)

Anyways glad to see you updating.

EDIT: I wasn't even registered when I first read this, I see no comments sent by me.

I saw this story with a name similar to mine and had to check it out.