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ATTENTION: Hey guys, thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed! Originally this story was going to be longer, but I realized it would make more sense if broken up into a one-shot series. I won't give away spoilers but the plan I have involves a certain pony ----->
<----- co-starring aside Rarity and an insane story that still revolves around this roller coaster. At the same time, this story seems to do well as an enjoyable one-time thing. Just want your input.
Would you, as the reader, be interested in reading the adventure that takes place after Rarity discovers this "new form of relaxation"? (It won't get anywhere close to cloppy, I promise)
Pinkie: Rarity, they just opened up a new roller coaster if you want to come.
Erm...that's not the kind of fun you're supposed to have on a rollercoaster ![]()
And I guess obligatory:
It's official.
Rarity x Roller Coaster. RariCoaster?
Either way, they are fuck buddies now.
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Well that was... interesting? ![]()
Nicely written though, so well done on that front.
The next one must feature an epic duel to the death between the Mustang and Tom for Rarity's affections. ![]()
reminds me of a vid i once saw, except that the ride was one of the slingshot rides and the guy was fully aware of what just happened![]()
I guess you could say that her friends convinced her to cum on the roller coaster.
Well played sir...................
oh LAWL. That... that That was one HELL OF A RIDE!
God, how is a guy supposed to compete with a rollercoaster like THAT? Im amazed no one noticed her mess in the cart or the smell that would grow over time on her coat and tail as she made her way home xD (may have stopped at the little fillies room to freshen up I suppose) oh man that was an exciting read lol the descriptions of what she went through were all too well detailed lol seriously, wings were sprung during this read lol
I can't help but laugh at the description of that brown colt with the noodle like mane as being a ponified version of your avatar :P
Wow. I'm actually kind of sad that I'm not a girl if that's what THEY get out of roller coasters.![]()
Seanessy, I HAVE to thank you for what you have done.
After I read this Roller coaster fan-fic I somehow started thinking about
the Final Destination movie series, probably because the movie with the Roller coaster.
So after about two hours of brain storming I have got to say I probably just came
up with the BEST Final Destination fan fiction ever! I'm writing it right now and I
have to say that the 'Big Accident' I have planned is going to blow yours and everyone
else's minds.![]()







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