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Well, this was interesting, though I have to question just a bit the relationship between Luna and Cadence.
Short, but a nice concept, and the writing style compliments it nicely.
[strike]Oh, look. As a sidenote, I have made the first comment.[/strike] Darnit slow-loading computer.
For some reason, I was in the mood for something melancholy, and this filled the bill.
I feel like bursting into tears. D: My heart aches for poor Cadence...very well-written. I love the unorthodox narration, and the raw emotion it allows you to convey as opposed to what you'd be able to do with a third person, traditional narrative.
Thumb up and fave. <3
HELP MY HEART EXPLODED!!!! Lol but this was sad and a very good fic. Poor cadence.![]()
That was...really deep. I'm glad I gave this a read. I really really like the core concept of that first wake up—basically that perfect moment where they hadn't had a chance to have anything go wrong and they were just starting out. It just really uses the marriage concept so well. I didn't know you thought about this stuff. Very cool. Easy thumbs up!







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