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    • My Little Pony Express
      Friendship is Magic in the Old West

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    The year is 1875. Even ten years after its conclusion, the United States of Amareica are still reeling from the effects of the Civil War. In these troubling times, Chief Justice Celestia has elected to hold the annual Independence Day Festival in the frontier town of Ponyville, Neighvada. Twilight Sparkle, the Justice's personal student, has been sent ahead of her to supervise preparations. But all may not be well. Twilight may have uncovered the truth behind a millenium-old buffalo legend that, if true, could thrust the newly reunited nation into eternal night...

    A re-interpretation of the pilot episodes of Friendship is Magic, transplanted into a Western setting. Therefore, rated T for Western-themed action.

    First Published
    27th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    27th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 2 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 10h ago · · ·
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    I like it. You kept the essential portions of the original episode, yet added in a new setting with a new myth that doesn't seem forced. A bit slow here and there, but overall it was good. Only thing i can see becoming a problem is later on in the episode, when everything is in town, trying to keep giving it that western feel.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I am intrigued and bid you to continue.  I hope to see more of this.  Also, I agree with Prez above me on all his points.

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