Oh my god, a story with both Rainbow Dash AND Soarin THAT ISN'T ROMANCE?!

*Read Later*

>>15259891525989

Haha, this is just going to be a nice little story with some suggestions towards deeper feelings at most. I might do a Soarin x Ranbow story later on.

I could do without the suggestions, thank you very much. Why does every story with these two have to suggest some deep feelings between these two? I feel it's so goddamn out of character for Rainbow. Is it so much to ask for a story with these two that doesn't leave me revolting in disgust? *le sigh*

Oh well, that's my opinion. If that is one of your favorite pairings, more power to you. I'll still read this.

>>15265641526564

Haha, like I said, no romance in this. This is pure innocence without the mush. I just know that people like the much, so i might write it. Test out my writing ability. Haha

>>15266381526638

That is a very healthy attitude to have. Keep that up.

Anyway, I'll give my opinion when I read this.

Looks good so far.

-Shadow

I thought I needed a longer chapter...

It's good, and i look forward to the next chapter. Keep it up

-Shadow

yay! An update!

Thankyou so much for updating - and, might I say, a fantastic update at that!

That was great!

Lol this is good.

>>15270761527076

Haha, why thank you! This is my first story, so I'm trying to keep it short and sweet. I'll update as much as I can.

She's hardworking, honest, strong, and most importantly, she's loyal

Honest, Really? BWAHAHAHAHA

GERONIMO!!!

WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!!! THAT WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME!!!you're a very good author and the first person to write a rainbow becomes a wonderbolt fanfiction WITHOUT any sex!!!

GERONIMO!!!

>>15298481529848

xD Well take into mind Spitfire doesn't really know Rainbow Dash.

ANd thank you so much! And I know! I'm going to get writing the next chapter right away!