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  • E Diary of a Pliant Tyrant

    When Fluttershy finds out that Discord used to keep a mental diary while imprisoned in stone, she begs him to continue it. Grudgingly, he promises to document his thoughts about his new life among old enemies  · xjuggernaughtx
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  • Monday
    Overly-Long Thoughts on Brave and Frozen

    As I’ve said before, I’m a very slow consumer of media.  You know that song you’re sick of?  I’ve probably never heard it.  Your favorite video game?  I probably haven’t played it.  All those movies at the Oscars?  I’ve never seen any of them.  I tend to live in my own brain because I’m too poor (cheap) to afford easy access to these things, and I don’t have the motivation to figure out torrents and the like.

    What happens because of this is that I see just a few movies a year, and they tend to be older.  Something my wife and I can pick up at the store on sale.  A few weeks ago, she picked up Frozen and Brave.  I watched both last night, and kinda wished I hadn’t by the end of things.

    Spoilers ahead

    Brave was firmly okay.  Not great, but not actively bad.  I was caught a little off-guard by the thrust of the film.  I was fully on board up until the bearification, and from that point on, the film became a baffling series of weird decisions by the characters.  

    One of the things this movie does that I detest is that it highjacks Merida’s character for the sake of convenient plot.  When meeting with the witch, she makes sure to give her a very vague idea of what she wants.  The movie tries to set this up with earlier snippets of dialogue, but I don’t buy it at all.  Merida is a headstrong teenage girl who knows exactly what is bothering her: She doesn’t want to get married. Yes, I know it’s deeper than that, but the marriage is the primary concern.  But she doesn’t ask the witch to make is so that she doesn’t have to get married.  She asks her for the very broad “I want a spell that will change my mom.  That will change my fate.”

    This does not sound to me like natural phrasing.  It feels like the script’s author is trying to be clever about things.  Contrast this with the wish Geppetto is granted at the beginning of Pinocchio.  Geppetto is a lonely man, and when granted a wish, he knows exactly what he wants.  He doesn’t ask for something vague.  He wants his creation to be a real boy, not for his creation “to experience life.”  Aladdin doesn’t as the genie to “change my life somehow.”  He wishes to be a prince.  Ursula tempts Ariel by saying she can transform her into a human, not that she could give her something the prince might like.  She’s very direct about it.

    So when Merida meets a weird stranger in the woods, doesn’t worry at all that the witch might not have the best intentions or if she even knows what she’s doing, then gives her an obviously vague set of instructions, it makes me roll my eyes. It’s established early on that Merida is at least somewhat enamored with magic, but come on.  With that kind of set up, you either make me question the writers of the character herself.  Either the writer is being lazy or the character is kind of dumb.  I don’t like either of those options.  It think it would have been better to introduce the witch a little earlier.  Merida could have heard her offer and refused, then caved when things were looking bad for her.  It would have felt a lot more natural to me than just taking the word of some bizarre stranger that she just met all of a sudden.

    The mother is shockingly okay with becoming a bear.  I mean, she’s obviously concerned, but they kind of play it mostly like, “Gosh! Isn’t this very awkward?” rather than “Holy shit, my daughter just completely ruined my life!” Not that I wanted it to fully swing in that direction, but it felt odd to me.

    Then when it’s found out that they have two days, they basically spend the first one bonding.  That’s nice and all, but, um, your… your mom’s a bear, Merida.  Like, she’s going to be permanently a bear really soon.  Some urgency in the solving the bear problem would be nice.

    This film also has a pet peeve of mine going on: People not listening to extremely shocking news.  Merida tells her father repeated that the bear is her mother.  She’s in a room in the castle… with a bear… that is not mauling her… telling her father that it is her enchanted mother… and he never stops and says, “Wait, what?”  I know that they said he doesn’t believe in magic, but that’s just defying any level of rational curiosity.

    My last real gripe with the film is the mending the tapestry thing.  The idea of that is fine, but why on earth would they try and get back into the castle?  Have Merida go in and get it.  They can mend it outside!  Have the boys sneak it out!  Yes, I know they were bearified at the time, but Merida didn’t know that.  Not that it impeded them in any way.  Tell a guard to go and get it.  She’s still the princess.  Anything other than “Let’s drag a huge bear through a castle filled with people that like to kill bears.”

    Besides story structure, there was a lot to like about the film.  The voice acting was top notch.  Character design was appealing.  The humor was generally good.  I loved Merida’s hair, especially when she was a little girl.  I was deeply enchanted by the way she said, “I missed” right at the beginning of the story.

    Overall, I liked this film, but I liked it less than I expected.  I was completely caught off guard by the bear thing.  I was expecting a heroic journey kind of thing.  I don’t really mind that they went in another direction, but it was surprising.  My quibbles with the movie are more based in details than the overall plot.  

    If you haven’t seen this film, I think it’s worth checking out, but it isn’t Pixar’s best.

    On the other hand, I thought Frozen was actively bad.  It seems like this movie needs a director’s cut or something, because there seemed to be whole swatches of information missing.  The trolls just, um, keep Kristoff?  And no one cares?  Anna never gets to see her sister, and her parents don’t have some kind of rationale for that?  How does Anna know where Elsa is when she flees the city?  How did the snowman get into the castle to free Anna?  Just on and on.  I kept watching and thinking, “Wait, how…?”

    I didn’t particularly care for any of the songs except for Let It Go.  I just found the music in the whole thing to be generally lackluster.

    Lots and lots of plothole and contrivance in Frozen. Way too many to just wave off as “Well, no film is perfect.”  For example, Elsa wants solitude and can control ice in cold to such a degree that she can make a pretty fantastic castle up on a mountain.  A castle with a huge friggin’ door that everyone can come in through.  All the people that she doesn’t want to see.  Just a parade of people coming through those doors…

    Or, um, isn’t there a regent or a chancellor or something in the kingdom?  The parents died pretty early on, and it’s pretty obvious that the girls weren’t running things, so why is control giving to some random dude that showed up all of a sudden.  Granted, he’s apparently a prince from some neighboring place, so I guess he has cred(?), but that’s just a bizarre thing for everyone else to accept.

    But mostly I felt like Frozen was a collection of good scenes that weren’t held together very well.  Watching any scene by itself, I’m sure I’d like it, but it rarely felt to me that one scene was a logical progression from the one before it.

    Also on display here was some writer contrivance that I can’t stand.  For example, Kristoff and Anna show up to meet the trolls, and this whole scene is a nightmare to me, but what I gritted my teeth at is that the trolls are in rock mode when they show up and stay that was for no good reason other to allow Olaf and Anna to have a joke-y scene where Kristoff is talking to rocks.  Exactly why are they just standing stock still and not responding?  I don’t know, I have no good explanation other than “Well, it wouldn’t be funny if they didn’t.”  Then we get into a song about marriage that doesn’t really serve any purpose.  

    Now, I’ve always said that I don’t mind if a story meanders off from the main plot for a while, and I stick by that, but the caveat is that it must be entertaining.  Douglas Adams is the master of that, in my opinion.  He can write things that are basically totally irrelevant to the plot of the story, but are wildly fun to read about.  Probably a quarter of the Hitchhiker books are useless errata, but we love them for it.

    That’s the problem here for me.  We go off on this marriage song and dance, but it didn’t entertain me at all.  That’s just a personal opinion, of course.  Given this movie’s success, I’m probably in the minority about that scene, but it was like nails on a chalkboard to me.

    I could go on and on about the storytelling problems in that movie, but I’m sure you get the gist of it by now.  There is a school of writing where the author moves the plot along by what seems to be the first thing that comes to mind.  In MLP terms, this is kind of what Merriweather Williams seems to do.  Bats! relentlessly moves forward, ignoring much better, completely obvious solutions.  Frozen suffers from this, though it’s considerably better than Bats!  Much, much better.  However, I still got the feeling that someone would say, “But why didn’t the parents have some explanation as to why their eldest daughter is a recluse” and the room would go quiet for a moment, then someone would finally say, “Oh, whatever. It’s just a kid’s movie.”  

    And if you don’t think that happens, think again.  I have a friend that works for Hasbro, and he has lots of stories about execs using the “Whatever, it’s just for kids” line. Tangentially related to that is his many stories he has about how dumb they think that kids are.  Lots of decisions and discussions where he has to argue not to assume kids don’t understand a single thing.

    Back to Frozen.  It’s not all bad.  The character designs were nice.  The animation was pretty good, though at certain points it had this kind of bizarre stop motion feel.  I happen to love stop motion, so I was good with that, but it was a little strange to get that stuttering effect all of a sudden.  I kept wondering if my blu-ray copy was messed up somehow.  It felt very Rankin Bass at times.  And like I said, the individual scenes themselves often were satisfying to watch.

    Overall, I just can’t recommend Frozen.  I enjoy lots of flawed movies, but this one just had too many of the things that specifically irritate me.  It’s a smash-hit, though, so my opinion should be taken with a huge grain of salt.  I’m definitely not the target audience, it would seem.

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  • 6d, 12h
    Shut Up, Brain!

    It's really annoying when you have what should be a passing idea that becomes a permanent, insistent idea. I was talking with Steel Resolve the other day, and he was lamenting the dearth of Fluttershy/Rarity romance stories. Mostly joking, I told him that I'm going to write him one some day, and that it would suck, but I'd write it for him all the same.

    Strange thing is, I can't quit thinking about it!

    Now let's break down why this is ridiculous:

    1)  I don't have any freakin' time.  Seriously, I just semi-retired because I can't get three seconds together to write.

    2)  Fluttershy is not a favorite of mine.  I don't particularly care for writing her.

    3)  I've tried to write romance several times. It's never really come together, besides what I write with Steel.  I'm going to have to give him most of the credit on that one.

    4)  Every idea that I have for it is miserably sad.

    All of this points to it being a horrible idea, but my mind is fixated on it for some reason. I should probably just bang out a chapter so that I can look at it and say, "Oh, yeah. That's bad. Let's throw that in a drawer where no one will see it again."

    But it's something about challenge. I have all these great ideas that I think people will like and that I know I'll enjoy writing, but they aren't as challenging as writing a miserable romance about a character that I don't like in a genre that is my weakest. So my interest is all piqued. It crowds out all the thoughts that I need, and I find my imagination playing out scenes of a story I don't want to be working on.

    Why, brain? Why?!


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  • 1w, 3d
    It's My Cheeri-versary!

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  • 1w, 6d
    Story Recommendation #3

    Wow.  It's been a long time since I've read a story that I liked well enough to recommend.  Yeesh.

    So let's discuss Spring is Dumb by HoofbitingActionOverload.  As is the case with these things, I'm going to try to avoid spoilers, but what is below this might contain them.  Consider yourself warned!  Warned, I say!

    This is a romantic comedy, and romance really isn't my genre.  I like the idea of it, but I find most stories to be generally overwrought, and no category has more offenders in that department than romance.  And that's precisely what makes this story nice.  The romance in it felt very natural to me.

    Less natural was the comedy. Now don't get me wrong. This story is funny enough to get a couple of actual laughs out of me. I almost never actually laugh out loud. It's more of a mental registry that something is, indeed, funny. My mind makes a little mental checkmark, but it doesn't usually translate into a smile or a chuckle. This story did a time or two, and for that, I applaud it.

    However, that didn't stop it from feeling like it was clubbing me on the head with the premise from time to time. There is a certain repetition that is going on in the story for comedic effect, but there is a fine line between 'still funny' and 'getting old.' Toward the middle of the story, I was starting to get pretty tired of the schtick, but the great thing is that the story also mostly does away with it at that point, too.  Not quite quickly enough for me, but I'm prickly and easily irritated, so for most readers, it will probably be right in the sweet spot.

    One thing that I really liked here is that this is a comedy with romantic elements, and that really lets the romance at the end have greater impact. It sets up the conclusion well, then delivers because you're ready for that change of pace. I think the instinct on it was good.

    Occasionally, the narrative voicing falls off track, but it's a rare problem.  Once or twice, HBAO has Rainbow think things that are humorous, but not really something that Rainbow would think. Then he kind of has Rainbow point that out to herself, but that's a false joke in my book. You can't have someone think about how they'd never actually think like that. But like I said, it's a nit-pick, not a recurrent thing.

    I was left wondering why it was divided up into two chapters. I didn't see the need to break up the flow.

    In the end, I found myself really enjoying this one. It's not perfect, but who knows more about Not Perfect fics than me? Eh? Eh?!

    No one, that's who.

    But the comedy hit its marks quite a bit of the time, and the romance was heartwarming. That seems like a win in my book.

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  • 2w, 3d
    So BABSCon...

    I know it's kind of a ways off, but I was curious to know who among you are planning to go to BABSCon. I'm not very confident about the fanfic side of things this year, so I figure if we want to represent, we will probably need to get on top of things.

    Are any of you planning on trying to host a panel of some sort? Do people want to meet up in a hotel room like we did last year? Should we get a group together and go get some food? Should we stage a coup and storm the main stage, taking the Goldies for ourselves?

    It's kind of a strange thing, these cons.  Everyone is always waiting for everyone else to get on top of things. I figured I'd try and get the ball rolling. We have a lot of creative, interesting people with informed opinions. It'd be a shame if we couldn't get some great panels out of all that experience.

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  • ...

Discord has been turned to stone by the power of the Elements of Harmony, but his consciousness has been left uneffected.  Now powerless, he can only observe the events around him and think on his past life.

(Want more Discord?  This story has a sequel!  Diary of a Pliant Tyrant)

First Published
26th Oct 2012
Last Modified
26th Oct 2012
#1 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·


Discord's coming back in Season 3. Seriously. He is.

Anyway, favoriting. :pinkiehappy:

#2 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1506759  Thank you so much for the favorite!  It's so rewarding when people like the story and comment on it.  I love Discord, so I'm happy that he's back.  I kinda hope they don't do too much with him, though.  I like that MLP doesn't have a main villain that shows up all the time.  Some Discord=awesome.  A lot of Discord will be tiring.

#3 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

Adler Approves of this well written fic

And so.... Favorited :pinkiesmile:

#4 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1506883  Your approval is appreciated!  It was my pleasure to write it for you!

#5 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

Fav, and thanks for a new story to read:twilightsmile:. Wonder were you'll take it from here.:pinkiehappy:

#6 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507028  Thank you so much!  I'm not sure.  The diary format worked because he couldn't do anything else.  I don't think he would continue it, but maybe I'll follow up with a new story.  I have a lot to do on Out of Fashion, though.  It's my neglected child!:twilightsmile:

#7 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

Out of fashion? Another story of yours I'm assuming. I don't know any of your other stories I meant another story to read in relation to other stories I'm reading in general. But I'll check it out.:moustache:

#8 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507150  Yeah, it's a long term project and it's been sorta draining to write.  I've been drawing a lot more and I've put my writing on the back burner, unfortunately.:fluttershysad:

#9 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·


Lol the best I can draw is a stick figure. But if I have a reference I am a demi-god. Just last year I had to draw something for my 3-D animation class and I copied it so perfectly I got an F for tracing :facehoof:, I fixed that problem though. I hope to one day be able to draw ponies on a whim. (Fuck hands, hooves are where it's at!)

#10 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507289  Come join me at the Reddit MLP drawing school!  I went from not being able to draw at all to being fairly competent now.  I still have a way to go, but I've improved more than I ever thought possible!  The brony support is incredible!

Check it out my gallery you want.  This has most of my progression, though my early, really terrible stuff isn't there.:twilightsmile:

#11 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

Awesome :pinkiecrazy:

#12 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507396Thank you very much!  It's nice that people like it!:pinkiehappy:

#13 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

Would love to see a sequel where Pinkie and him join forces!!!!!!!

#14 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507488  Hmmmm....That may be a fun thing to write!  It would be interest to see if Pinkie becomes more like Discord or Discord becomes more like Pinkie.:pinkiegasp:

#15 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·


Holy shit dude your colored boop is the background of mlp drawing school!!!! :pinkiegasp: I am not worthy of your presence!:fluttershbad:

#16 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·


I have joined and you are added. How you have so much karma is beyond me. I have only drawn one thing without a reference and that is my OC pony with no name.

#17 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507696:ajsleepy:  Aw, shucks.  It ain't that good of a drawin'.  Ah did put a lotta time into it, though.  

Honestly, I was shocked that it became the background.  It shifts based on some popularity formula.

#18 · 108w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1507855  The secret is to always use references.  I started by just straight up copying images.  Now I'm moving on to more original stuff.  But no pony artist that I know works totally reference free.  It's just like people that draw scenery.  They go out into the scenery and draw it.  They don't sit at home and imagine it.  Well, most of them don't anyway.  Ponies are the same.  It's a lot easier to draw if you have a model.:pinkiesmile:

#19 · 108w, 4d ago · · ·


Check my first drawing out! And comment to tell me how I did!:pinkiehappy:

#20 · 107w, 3d ago · · ·


That made my hour. I should give writing Discord a shot.

#21 · 107w, 3d ago · · ·

>>1555212  Thanks so much!  It was fun writing for Discord.  He's mentally bent and it's fun to get into that head.

#22 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

Congrats on getting on EPD! It's 3:00 am here so I'll be reading this in the morning but it is looking like a fantastic fic, always love a bit o' Discord :pinkiehappy:

#23 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

me gusta. :twilightsmile:

#24 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

Thoroughly enjoyed this!  Besides one or two grammatical mistakes, it was great!  I'm looking forward to seeing the next part!  :rainbowkiss:

#25 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh, this is goood. I totally read that in John de Lancie's voice. :pinkiesmile:

#26 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1607425  Thank you very much!  I hope you enjoy it!

#27 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1607576  It's awesome you enjoyed it!  I love that!

#29 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1607899  Thank you so much for reading it and I'm glad you liked it, even with it's mistakes.  Would you mind telling me what you saw?  It's so hard to get every mistake out of a story.  After a while, everything just looks correct because you are so used to seeing it that way.:applejackunsure:

#30 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1607915  And I wrote it in his voice!  Funny how clearly you can hear it.  Thanks so much for reading this!

#31 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·


Oh, just little things like tense changes,

"She seems enchantingly distressed and the slack-jawed onlookers gasped as she bounced from task to task."

I think there was one other small thing but I can't seem to find it.  Nothing major, though :twilightsmile:

#32 · 106w, 1d ago · · ·

I loved this so much, best fic I've read in a long while. Thanks for doing this! :D

#33 · 106w, 23h ago · · ·

Favourited:ajsmug: :eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

#34 · 106w, 21h ago · · ·

Not bad. I recently read something that had a similar format. Going from day to day and explaining what has been seen. I noticed once that you had him reflect on how order can breed from prolonged chaos and whatnot. I actually would have been more intrigued if there were more moments like this throughout.

That aside, I had a bit of difficulty getting into the sense of Discord's character at first but it got there soon enough.

Small errors here and there, but they don't bug me as much (unless its my own writing). Here is one:

"but I certainly don’t seem to hearing anything about the mighty Celestia crushing Queen Chrysalis under hoof."

#35 · 106w, 20h ago · · ·

I LOVE THIS :raritystarry:

It keeps Discord's personality perfect, and not turning him in some clichee pussy that sees the wrongness in his ways and turns good... and makes him keep the title of Master of Chaos.

Well done, good fic and can't wait for chapter two :D

I rarely favorite a fic since i like all, but this goes in my special book :D

#36 · 106w, 20h ago · · ·

I can't say I'm too surprised by the ending.

Geez, Celestia, it's almost like you WANT him to escape.  The garden was at least isolated most of the time.  Except no, you had to ruin that by allowing field trips in.

What I'm saying is this:

Dammit Celestia.  Just PROPOSE already!

#37 · 106w, 19h ago · · ·

Discord is the best pony draconequus and we know it! I appreciate your points about Pinkie Pie and Twilight. The language and style is very fitting for Discord. I hope you will continue in this matter to comment from Discord's point of view the events of Season 3. I know his return will be my favourite episode!

Again, good job and good luck with your other projects. You sure have the writing skills for it.

#38 · 106w, 17h ago · · ·

>>>Where is the passion?  The spice for life, liberty, and the pursuit of revenge? >>>

*Alondro stands before the statue, with a sadistic smile on his face*  That'd be me.  Unfortunately for you, you're the object of it all.  *pulls Vorpal Sword off his back*  Draconequus.  Jabberwocky.  The sword really can't tell the difference.  *begins slicing and dicing Discord*

#39 · 106w, 17h ago · · ·

Discord is a bit of a hypocrite.  If he were truly chaos, he'd never think at all.  Those who know nothing of neurology cannot comprehend the irreducible complexity of the carefully regulated series of synaptic activations via numerous ion channels, voltage-gated and neurotransmitter-activated, and several types of varied-term potentiated, involved in each and every thought.

If I, as a scientist, were to describe the intense order going on in his mind at every moment, he'd likely destroy himself in frustration or become utterly random in action by banishing all conscious thought from his head, meaning he'd have no capacity to think about such things as stopping the Bearers from retrieving the Elements and sealing him again.

But even then, he would still have a physical form.  And such a form must always contain order, lest it'd be unstable and fly apart.

And so, you see that he exists in spite of his supposed nature.  It's the single greatest weakness of any chaos god, that they can never fully exercise the extent of their power or they will cease to be.  

#40 · 106w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1608485  Oops!  Good catch.  Yes, that is the kind of mistake I make a lot and it's super-hard for me to see them for some reason.  I sort of naturally speed read, so I tend to skip over the actual words and just absorb the favor of what I'm reading.  It takes me four or five reads of a book to really say I have read it.

#41 · 106w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

>>1608607  Thank you for taking the time to read it!  Check out my other stuff if you enjoyed this one.  I'll have a new Pinkie Pie story up pretty soon, as well.  I'm about halfway done writing it.

#42 · 106w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1608918  The beginning is definitely the weakest part of that story.  I totally understand not getting his character until later.  It's like I had to warm up to writing him.  I wrote that beginning several times, but for some reason he just wasn't very Discordish until the 5th or 6th entry.

#43 · 106w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1608981  Aww, thanks so much!  That means a lot.

When it comes to Discord, or any villain, I hate two-dimensional, evil-for-the-sake-of-evil type characters.  I think most people have motives for their bad behavior, so the key is just to look at it from their perspective.  It doesn't have to be the right choices, but it should be an understandable choice.

#44 · 106w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1609043  I'm not sure Celestia is the best decision maker.  A lot of weird crap happens on her watch.

#45 · 106w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1609424  I see Discord as having an over-inflated opinion of his own power.  Like a child who is good at video games thinks they are the best player ever, Discord sees himself as the MASTER OF CHAOS, when he's just very proficient.  He doesn't see that he needs order to play chaos into or it wouldn't be fun.  

#46 · 106w, 13h ago · · ·

This is so awesomly chaotic and Discord-y that I think I'll celebrate by burning down an orphanage or maybe running through the street yelling "UPSIDE DOWN LEMONS". Who know what I'll do, thats the fun.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

#47 · 106w, 13h ago · · ·

>>1609702  Exactly!  And thus, why I SHALL BECOME LIKE UNTO THE MOST HIGH!!!  MUWAH HA HA HA!!

*Alondro is banished to Earth with 1/3 of the angels who were deceived by his cunning evil evilness.  He runs for President.. and wins!*

All I had to do was promise free Gak for everyone!  *Thus proving Discord is trying to hard, when plastic containers of goo are all it really takes.*

(PS: I'm having some mountain whole leaf darjeerling tea.  Would you care for some?)

And this is how we do chaos right.  If yer goals don't change every 30 seconds at least, YOU'RE DOING IT WRONG!!!  :pinkiecrazy:

#48 · 106w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1610012  Well, I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story, but don't burn down that orphanage unless they have had time to read it as well!:rainbowlaugh:

#49 · 106w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1609095  Thank you so much for your compliments.  I'm considering a follow up story focusing on Discord and Pinkie struggle to win the other to their way of thinking.  It's something I'm tossing around in my head, but I have to get through this Pinkie story I'm writing right now, first.

#50 · 106w, 12h ago · · ·

Interesting, very interesting indeed. i'd like to see where you take this from here.

I'd like to see Discord and Pinky face off in a Chaos battle.


Pinky is best pony!

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