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I am excited to see where this is going! So far it's pretty good.

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"How the universe got 404'd" by The Doctor.

LOL

This is very interesting.

no one ever convinces angel you are a god sir but now add reccess gang into it k?

>>110834110834

And here comes my lack of knowlege in the field of popular culture... Sorry, no recess gang here ;)

Thanks anyway

>>112117112117 i know as arequest after this storys wrapped up wana do a crossover with recess? for me "fluttershys eyes

>>112520112520

You see... I haven't watched 'Recess' and probably not going to since the amount of work I have to do.

Terribly sorry, maybe you should find a better author who would do it.

*presses 56 and sits in the chair*

Ok, now I have to ask... -what- -is- Angel Bunny anyway, I have to know?

>>115166115166

I'm currently considering if Angel should play a big role later, so I'd better not give away that information yet. ;)

i recon do a sad one a sorta water of mars one next if you ever saw it just where he gets to power hungry and stuff

One vote for a sad one... Got it!

Thanks for commenting.

I love the whole 'can't live life, but have to save the world' idea. Write now I'm writing a (Non-pony) novel about something similar. But I digress, and I would like to slot up another vote for a sad one.

>>123528123528

Thank you for your comment! The idea of saving others in spite of one's own desires appeals to me as well, and it will be seen in the story arc I'm beginning tomorrow (about the war)..

So... Two votes for a sad arc! Nice.

P.S. Would love to read your novel, btw.

*Inserts coin in the sad one*

>>123744123744

Haha, I love how you guys manage to vote for a sad story arc and have a Pinkie smiley at the same time!

Three votes for sad... Well, we still have plenty of time before I finish the 'war' story arc, then probably comes the sad one!

P.S.                                                                                                                                                                                        ^ See what I did here?

Twilight didn't know about Pinkie sence before Nightmare Moon. But I guess this is a AU story so ok.

>>123915123915

No, no, no! This is a very important matter! I can explain! You see... Um...  Huh... Yeah... Oh! She's just... And...

*sigh* I screwed up, so let's go with the AU theory, then...

By the way, you vote for a sad one, a philosophical one or a comedy/shipping one?

Banished Luna, and Discord stories sound more interesing.

>>124030124030

Okay... I guess it's one for a sadfic and one for Discord.

Four votes go to Luna, one vote to Discord... *sigh* and I still need to do 'The Traitor' arc...

Oh wait? The war story is not about the time war then? and did the doctor just do a banzai charge? and also what happend to the tardis he haven't mentioned her yet? btw is there anypony here who can change my notes to coins so i can put more in the sadfic and see if it makes it come out faster

>>125533125533

The situation around TARDIS will be explained in one of the interludes later.

And I get it - you guys want a sadfic

>>125562125562 yes do it i like your story none the less but i would like to see the doctor sad and what not sure hes happy most of the time but he brings out more emonatiosn when he acts sad and stuff :)

>>125664125664

Fair point. Don't you worry though - those 'sad' moments will definitely happen throughout the 'The Traitor' arc.

what TES reference? *Gets hit by an arrow to the knee* nvm....

>>127790127790

Get a cupcake! A rainbow cupcake

>>127876127876 A cupcake for me?!?! It better not be one of those cupcakes with raisins on them..... theres nothing more worst then making a cupcake with raisins on them. I would rather eat a horse then eat those abominations.

>>131669131669

Oh, why would I do that?

I hate raisins as well!

Raisins... destroying your food since... hm... I even don't know when...

"What now?.." Well you could continue making me say WOW each time I read a new chapter because  YOU.ARE.AMAZING , how do you come up with this stuff? because i want to try what ever your having. I also think this quote down here made by my friend T.S Eliot fits the end of equestria pretty well.    

"This is the way the world ends

not with a bang but a whimper"

>>134502134502

Well, you see, when the Sun reaches its zenith and the planet seems to have stopped in its tracks for a second - no, a shadow of a second - the skies open, and the magnificent voice calls upon me, telling me what to write. HE speaks through me, directing my thoughts in the way HE needs - to help you readers (and me as well) understand the Universe HE created.

... ... ... ... ...Just kidding. In reality, I just take a cup of special tea and let the demons in my head cooperate with the space fire monkeys living under my bed.

...And that's how I come up with this stuff.

P.S. Yes, I love Eliot, and the quote fits very well.

This fic is just... Mind-blowing. Can't find any other way to describe it.

Pardon my lack of words

>>147582147582

Heh, I suppose that it is the highest praise for such a story.

A healthy dose of time paradox I say

I prefer to the clever and somewhat light-hearted style you used  the Bad Moon arc over the deep, dark, and philisophical style you used in the Traitor arc. I have a feeling I'm going to love this arc.

>>225577225577

There is never too many time paradoxes :doctorwhoovesface: (no, really, we need a Doctor Whooves emoticon)

>>234437234437

I like Bad Moon more than The Traitor, too. So your feeling is somewhat justified. :doctorwink:

I really like it so far, I'm afraid to go on but know that I must! Allons-y

>>123915123915 Well, remember that The Doctor did that memory transfer on her, so maybe she does know. As for Pinkie, she's, well, Pinkie. Need I say more?

Braid? Maybe some other time. Right now, I wanna read this awesome story Doctor Whooves wrote

The Castle Of The Royal Pony Sisters? Sounds great!

I was going to make a background-characters-save-the-world-behind-the-scenes kind of story, and then I see this. You're making an alternate reality? Anyway it's really, really good. Seems that you made the whole thing by planning it form the start. Can't wait to go through the rest.

>>238203238203

Waiting for you here at the end.

>>250777250777

Oh, believe me, Braid is awesome - it was one of the main source of inspiration for this story.

>>250872250872

In fact, I haven't planned anything at all. I just let my space fire monkeys help me come up with an idea and leave the rest to them.

Not sure if Twilight is the type that would have it in her to stomp on others like an anime cartoon. The rest is great though

"The Charming And Disabling Time Lord's Smile [TM]"  I'm gonna remember that one (hell, I might use it myself )

I have a question. I get that the Doctor is capable of perceiving all of the possibilities and alternate realities, but why are you saying that he seems to be seeing them, as if they were happening right in front of him? I mean, there's a difference.

>>254789254789

Don't forget about the [TM] part, though!

>>254827254827

As a matter of fact, they are. If we look at Time as we would look at a lake, we'll see it flow. But for The Doctor, it doesn't flow, it circulates. Not only he feels the alternative realities, he can move between them freely, and it doesn't actually take him any time at all. So we can say that he's seen, felt, smelt etc all the alternative realities.

Hope I made it clear...

>>254847254847 yes, you made yourself perfectly clear. The idea of being a Time Lord would be to sense and, eventually, manipulate time; once he decides to stop going with the flow of time and change something, it does in fact create a different version of reality. He makes the change, but it doesn't matter because doing something is the equivalent of not doing anything at all (not considering the "doing things to have them done" thing you happened to mention earlier). words... they're so big... heh heh, train of thought crashed

Here I am, philosophising like I knew what i was doing, lol.

>>254847254847 also, I just noticed. You just tried to quote the 11th Doc, didn't you?

>>254901254901

Um... where? In fact, I've never watched the new series that came after David Tennant... Shame on me.

>>254936254936 with Matt Smith, it wasn't as touching, but I think the epicness and plot twists might've made up for it. He wasn't a bad actor, although I honestly can't compare him to Tennant (out of a more or less homosexual devotion to Tennant)

I hope that your Discord - Doctor chit-chat doesn't go too far... I'm still planning to make an "origins of Discord" chapter later on myself, and I'd feel bad if someone else did it before I had the chance to do it

>>255154255154

Oh, don't worry - even if I make it, it'll be a short arc - maybe even an interlude. But hey, competition is the cornerstone of good writing!

>>255208255208 okay, thanks for the reassurance then... although my story ain't much to look at right now, I need to tidy it up a bit eventually...

"what now?"

that hit me hard, man.

"Like Pinkie Pie didn't know I disliked cupcakes... for more than one reason."

Well played, my friend.

*sad face* I actually like TwiWhooves a lot, so yeah, when he said that he could not interfere, it made me somewhat disappointed. Great story though. ^____^

Where was Angel Bunny born exactly?

The meaning of life is TOTALLY 42. Just sayin.

Why does everyone the Doctor meets develop a crush on him? It even happened with Captain Jack Harkness!

>>420545420545

Thanks for the feedback!

>>420574420574

It's a secret. A dark, dreadful, horrible secret, revealing which could lead to the end of the Universe.

Honest answer: I don't know yet.

You ever just have one of those days?

>>423436423436

Beg your pardon?

Ah, the age old way of getting out of a relationship. "I am gay."

Now THERE'S a plot twist if I ever saw one! And I thought the Master showing up was as dramatic as it was going to get.

>>682649682649

Well, I had the shit and the fan at hand, and that's the result

it feels you repeated from the last time he saw anngel

>>763101763101

Well, it was a flashback, after all...

If the Master weren't immortal, the Doctor may have had come back for him...with a shovel.  

i assume the cupcakes line was a refrance to a certain fanfiction which shall not be named?

>>782640782640

Possible, quite possible

>>784220784220

Yes... Yes indeed.

Oh no.. He forgot about playing Chess with Luna...

>>833239833239

Yes, yes he did... And, as you know, every action has a repercussion...

I think I can see where this will go...

>>834943834943

O RLY?

We'll see if your assumptions are right

The Doctor needs to learn not to mess with mares. You'll just end up with migraines.

Much like all little sisters everywhere, I'm willing to bet that Luna has a crush on her older sister's coltfriend. Just saying.

>>841315841315

Sure thing, old chap!

>>842500842500

This... This may be true...

Sweet! An update

>>930470930470

I'll try to keep 'em coming at a faster pace

Doctor and Luna for the win!

And to the people about to say 'First', You're too late!

>>931115931115

Damn it, I was just about to say 'First'...

Awwww, poor woona

>>939382939382

Well, it was meant to be a sad story arc. The [strike]awful[/strike] comedy elements were only to set off the sad stuff.

I can't wait to see AU Twilight

>>944962944962

Be patient

I'm just working on her character

>>945713945713

You've been posting about 1 a day for about what, a week now? You've been posting consistently fast, and with consistently high quality. I will be patient. It's the least I can do for a story like this.

>>945797945797

I was on holiday so I had some time!

...Which I do not have now... *sigh*

>>945818945818

You and me both, brother. You and me both...

New arc, and the Doctor's already in trouble...

I luv it.

A wise way to live ones life.

It's the only one that makes any sense in the end.

>>986304986304

Well, maybe. Though, the Doctor's problem is that he's kind of immortal, you see...

nothing is everything

Haven't read this fic for a long time, so many bricks were shat

>>101545101545

But can you be sure that nothing remains everything? Maybe nothing is a value that shifts (or is shifted) every second? And what if those seconds last eternity? And what if they don't?

Happy ending... it's a win-win