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    • Selection initiated
      Evolution is a curious thing.. How will the mane six adapt in this new harsh environment?

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    • SMITTEN
      A God. A being with power beyond imagination. But what happens when they are stranded?
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    A god. A being of ludicrous power. Worshiped by, "Lower" Beings. Currently in an eternal battleground, Gods must fight each-other

    For many a quarrel. In the midst of these eternal struggles, some rivalries form that are stronger than that. They blossom into hatred, violence. And sometimes, they unleash Unbelievable amounts of power. An acidic combination when clashed with similar energy. Let's just leave it that these quarrels have Created a rift of time and space, sucking in anything around. Crates, bricks, weapons, and Dieties alike.  Such is why some are stranded to the land of Equestria. And this is the tale of five of these so called, "Gods" And their struggle to cope with the new surroundings that have been un-graciously forced upon them.  

    My first, "REAL" Story here on good ol' Fim Fiction... Please, Tell me what you think!


    Rated teen for language and gore.

    First Published
    26th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    30th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 8 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Grammar and sentence organization needs work. Other than that, it's...interesting.:twilightsheepish:

    Shout out to Anubis! XD

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Just noticed how many errors there are. They shall be rectified by tomorrow night. I swear.

    >>1506961 Thanks! And the comment above applies as an answer to your statement as well.:trollestia:

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    SMITTEN.

    IT IS SMITTEN.

    GET THEE TO A DICTIONARY. :unsuresweetie:

    I smite, he smote, he was smitten.

    Calming down now... Thou struck a nerve with thy contrived word.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1507416 Your issues have been rectified. Please proceed in pointing out any major Fails :twilightsheepish:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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    What's this a crossover with? :applejackunsure:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1527825 the action RPG, SMITE by Hi Rez studios.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1530050 Thank you :yay:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1530201 Anyday, My friend. By the way, you should try it. I for one, have found it quite enjoyable. It's invite only though. if you want to try it, i can send you one through e-mail. :twilightsmile: Also, Chapter 3 in the works for anyone else reading this comment~! :raritywink:

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