...Alright, I avidely love Minecraft, and Ponies as well. But my reaction to this? What the buck? And when a story gets me to do that, I read it. And usally like it.

Chapters are a bit short but hey its your story after all

but for now im to tired to continue reading so ill check back tomorrow.

Less than 3 to you.

oooh fuck...

oh vinyl you fucker...

I must say that this story could become good if you put a "few" more hourse into each chapter.

You can easily expand each chapter to about 1000 words if you go a bit deeper into  what she does (such as building) and describe a bit more

At its current state it qualifies for the red thumb, but i wil hold it back and see where you take this

Thank you for the feedback everyone. I will try to make the chapters longer and such but I don't have much free time so i'll try my best

Oh crap I forgot bonus chest. Guess i'll change that to off xD

Are you guys happy now? I made the chapter longer and went into detail a little more. Is this better for you?

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>>14976721497672 What are you getting at?

>>14995551499555YEP

>>14995971499597 shiit, for a second i thought vinyl is herobrine.

>>15015081501508 Well she's not. Herobrine is CLEARLY Herobrine and not Vinyl.

Nice start!

Uh oh.... Herobrine......

Better! Oh shoot...Herobrine.....

Need... More!!!!! !

The song is by Tobuscus. I don't own any of that.

P.S. I'm 2 hours and 40 minutes into the ten hour version. I listened to it while I wrote this so that would explain why I included it. It's all some persons fault cause they had the song as a comment to a story, and I cant just listen to it once, so I went to the ten hour version. Sadly, I don't intend on backing out of the challenge, so i'm stuck listening to it. I'm surprised I don't know it by heart already.

Herobrine needs to meet Discord

>>15116951511695 He should..... *Has idea*

Still listening to that dumb I can swing my sword thing. I'm 6 hours 53 minutes in. So I figured while i'm listening to it, I may as well do a new chapter

I'm too lazy bored busy to read this right now, but I will! In a couple of years.

cool concept! But i'm kind of confused. does she follow basic Minecraft physics, Or can she fly?

GERONIMO!!!

woah, This chapter is HUGE

GERONIMO!!!

Sweet!!!

GERONIMO!!!

Global warming, thats why

GERONIMO!!!

NO NOT SQUISHY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

GERONIMO!!!

>>15157081515708 she can fly.

Who knows what song that is from?

I have 2 questions.

1) Is this involving the Mine Little Pony Mod?

2) Is there pie involved?

I haven't read the story yet to find the answer to these questions yet, but i would like to know.

thats kinda funny

Reference to screw the nether which is a fan-made song and animation uploaded on the yogscast channel.

"You know what? I'm sick of this place! It's too warm and nice and i'm all dirty and getting shot at, and I miss the mobs! I miss all the cows and Creepers and Skeletons n stuff. I didn't think I would but I do! Ya know what?  Screw the Aether! I'm going back to the normal world and i'm gonna hug some Creepers and kill some cows! SCREW THIS PLACE!" Vinyl said and jumped off of the island, falling to the normal world. She died and respawned in her house.  She went up to Rainbow.

screw the nether!

>>15328161532816 yep

>>15331181533118 you are also correct

>>15307921530792 umm no it does not involve the mine little pony mod though I do use that mod when I go on the hunger games server xD and no there is no pie involved yet but maybe if i involve the Halloween update there will be.

>>15339171533917

yay!

"CHARGE!" Rainbow screeched and flew at the closest Ghast.

GRAMMATICAL ERROR!!! It's not spelled 'charge' its spelled LLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

MMMMMMMMMJJJJJJJJJEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSS

you do know mycellium are just mushroom roots, right?

eh, who cares this fic is amazing! good job!

>>15360981536098

HAHAHA!!!

>>15374371537437 Face it, we all know it's true

GERONIMO!!!

......SHIT

>>15360981536098 Is that so?

>>15374011537401 No, I did not know that because I have only played in a shroom biome once and that was just a seed.

I bet its a level seed for minecraft.

need to try this theory with science

"I'm gonna get all twilight sparkle on this bitch... "

...will squishy come with them back to equestria????

PGBTEBHFWMAOBT

Get Wombo CRAP IT'S IMPOSSIBRU!!!

GERONIMO!!!

>>15498661549866 WRONG! But i'll tell you the first part.

Ponies Get Back To Equestria.

That would be the PGBTE

>>15495361549536 He died when rainbow fell out of the Aether. sorry if i forgot to mention that.

>>15503231550323

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

That wasn't cheesy at all...

GERONIMO!!!

>>15530771553077 I can tell you like the word geronimo

"I should play Minecraft..." She said and left for the computer store.

I can imagine what happens when that starts...

>>15572941557294 Oh yes, it will be wonderful.

>>15575591557559

That there just plain scares me

>>15575751557575 HEHEHE you should be scared. It is absolutely terrifying.

>>15576791557679 i mean the way you typed that. seriously. not even the story cupcakes scared me. but the way you typed that... meh lol btw moustache for a great story. wait. 2 more there :D

>>15577111557711 I hear you with the Cupcakes thing. But thanks for the mustaches

here....we go....again *facehoof*

Hey, does anyone want to make new cover art for this story? It would be much appreciated... New contest Idea...

Expect a sequal

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Looks like there in...*Put's on shades*...A LIVING HELL*awesome guitar riff plays* YYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH

ALONSY ALONZO!!!

>>15758911575891 Uh, YEA! What...?

*facehoof* herobrine is ultimate troll

>>15876801587680 Yup

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PGBTEBHFWMAOBT Ponies Get Back To Equestria But Herobrine Forgets ... That's all I got.

that's a very nice house you have there. be ashamed if anything happened to it. *pretend it's Honydew saying this*

>>15157181515718 GERONIMO?

Install the 'Robotic Mobs Mod' It makes the mobs about 200X stronger.

>>15116951511695 Discord is as strong as a baby with a stick compared to Herobrine.

>>15157661515766 what's with that last line?

>>15306191530619 What song?

Ponies

Get

Back

To

Equestria

But

Herobrine

Forgets

What

My

Ass

Owns

LOL

>>16047111604711 It's my sign-off I have a sign-off now... Sign-off's are cool.

ANDIAMO!!!

>>16046771604677 Only did mobs that I have tried before or know a lot about.

>>16050741605074 Well... It's the closest anyones gotten so far.

>>16049801604980 Screw the Nether by Yogscast

Almost 3,000 views??!!! OH SNAP! This calls for a Brohoof!

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I wish I was that creeper...

mmm... maybe make it a little more detailed

>>19109781910978 This was my second story in a year. Don't worry, I get better later.

I loved this. There are few stories that made me laugh, and I commend you. I needed to laugh after the last story I read. The last story I read was messed up. I loved this!

>>19816941981694 Thank you Comments like yours make me want to keep writing, and work harder on my stories

Hmmm... Is she a Pegasus from the Mine Little Pony mod with another mod allowing her to fly, or is she her show self? Or is the I can't fly freakout coming later?

>>19900511990051 Keep reading to find out

I love your story

>>15190191519019 since they're ponies, wouldn't it be "I kissed a mare"?

>>20208572020857 I didn't think of that...

Ohhhhhhh... Dammit. What did Herobrine do? I'll read the next chapter!

Image!!! :D

Imagine Herobrine read this... Damn you Herobrine! What'd you do to Rainbow Dash?! (I'm getting the feeling that Herobrine is actually Discord XD I will find out

i hope Herobrine comes in the story later!

"Screw the Nether." One of my favorite songs!

Screw the Aether!

LOL

If you've seen "Screw the Nether"... Have you seen BebopVox's song "I Found a Diamond"? Cuz it totally matches the scene that Vinyl and Dash found those diamonds after Herobrine nuked their world.

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'Nuff said.

there are 3 things I like and one i dont like about this.

things i like:

1:ponies

2:minecraft

3:rainbow dash

things i dont like:

i havent started reading yet.

If the herobrine mod is the one i think it is,she olny gets attacked if she makes the pillar......right?

>>24062492406249 Nope, Herobrine pretty much hacked the game she got stuck in

PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL!!!!!

>>25183252518325 Already made one. It's called the Ponyville Griefer.