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A would be scientist who lurks in the shadows of The Land of Enchantment, too accustomed to desert life to withstand AC.

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A young, self proclaimed, Magician-Wizard attempts to summon himself a familiar and ends up pulled to the land it would have come from, becoming marked as his familiar. If he does not manage to find the rightful host for the runes he will find himself as a permanent resident in the land of Equestria.

/*He will be getting around and will feature many familiar faces but they may or may not remain in the story as such they are not listed */
//PS I don't think it will be too dark but he is from the "dark ages" so best to play it safe

//This is focused on plot development over scenery and character development at this time
//once the entire story has been told I might go back and beautify the story to make it more proper

/* To those of Author Support I have been told it is confusing so if you can aide me in resolving that issue that would be fantastic. */

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

I recognise that Image! It's from Doctor Who! More specifically, the first season of David Tennant as the 10th doctor, episode 8 'The Impossible Planet'.

Hey, I recognize that cover image!

"DON'T TURN AROUND, TOBY. IF YOU TURN AROUND, YOU WILL DIE."

This is confusing as fuck.

1519753
Can you point out the confusing aspects so that I might attempt to remedy such issues in future with possible chapter edit

1519753 Which is exactly why I'm tracking it. It's not often I find a story that's confusing to hell and back yet still remains enjoyable throughout it all.

Hac in hora sine mora corde pulsum tangite;
quod per sortem sternit fortem,
mecum omnes plangite!


HAH! Would you look at that.... Do you listen much to ''O Fortuna''?

1521646
Verum est, quod legitur

As Promised :moustache: :moustache:

and others by Carl Orff of course

My brain it hurts
I think I understand anyway.
P.s on a scale of 1 to 10.
How hipster do I feel for being the first person to like this story.

yay! misunderstandings are fun, as they can only mean shenanigans in the future

So... what? Why is Oren unconscious all the time with his evil vizier talking for him? :derpyderp2:

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All I am at liberty to say at this time is that Oren walked to the Throne room while Utim was talking as well as the fact that he continued to channel his Ultra-visibility spell during the encounter and as such was not unconscious. Not sure how long it will be until I share why he is acting the way he is.

P.S. I thank you for introducing me to the term "vizier"

I find this story confusing, I can't really figure out who's talking and exactly who they are in the first place. Interesting story though.

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