Believing that the essence of Harmony is threatened, Twilight plans to remedy that through a form of extraction. As her ambitions manifest, Twilight struggles through an internal war between her harmonious plan and the consequences of her acts.
>> LegionScavenger Hey, you're not a bad person for liking gory fics and such, it's why horror films and fics like Cupcakes are prpular as twisted as it may seem to some people.
I did like the picture joke though, putting captions to pictures is awesome
103477 Don't worry, I know. I was raised with horror movies and death metal, kinda weird that I found a liking in MLP:FiM but sometimes stuff is just weirdly put together. And yes captions to pictures are awesome!
This certainly looks interesting. Oddly enough, my only objection is against those plutonium shelves. Somehow I doubt Twilight would want her private collection of grimoires and unspeakable tomes to be constantly exposed to radiation. That stuff will drastically reduce the shelf life of a book. And, of course, there's the little matter of everything else getting a healthy dose of beta rads to boot...
Aside from that, this is a horribly intriguing a story. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
104254 Oh dear irony. I end up pretty much going over terminology and stuff to make things accurate (and next chapter has quite a bit), and I don't check the properties of the random metal I picked out for the bookshelf. The one thing I didn't look up. I think I'll give that a change before I post up chapter 2 (I'll put that chapter up tomorrow).
Glad you like it so far, though! Also, I really like that word "grimoires", it just sounds cool! *scurries off to Wikipedia to find a more proper metal to use*
I don't think that there's anything cooler than reading this awesome work by my best friend. For those of you who don't know much about the author, she's pretty much the most coolest person and the best friend anyone could ever have. My dear Knickerbocker you have always been so creative and had such a great mind for writing and such. I'm so proud of you and I can't wait to keep reading! Love you!
Whoops, forgot to add. Btwwwww really like your style of writing and so far I really love the story. You know I haven't followed the My Little Pony stuff so much like you and I wasn't sure if I'd be so interesting because I don't know so much about it but I totally loved it and caught onto everything quickly. Really great story!
After reading a fiction also catalogued under 'gore' and having to stop because it made no sense anymore, I have the lowest expectancies about this, specially with how this first chapter ends.
But we will see...
One book was particularly think, though this one wasn't a textbook
I think you mean 'thick'. Also, double space at the beginning of the sentence.
Damn it, why is it always Rainbow? Cupcakes, now this? Jesus Rainbow, for the strongest pony around, you sure do seem to get captured and slowly and brutally ripped apart a lot.
i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb461/LegionScavenger/Pinkietime.jpg
But still...
i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb461/LegionScavenger/BRILLIANT.png
can't wait to see how this this one turns out ^^p
good work, my dear sir.
I'm a girl actually, but thanks for the compliments!
And LegionScavenger, if you think you're shocked and disgusted by that first chapter, well... you're gonna feel even more so starting next chapter.
103436 Actually it was mostly meant as a joke. I love gory fics, and even more so when it's between the Mane Six. I know I'm a bad person...
>> LegionScavenger Hey, you're not a bad person for liking gory fics and such, it's why horror films and fics like Cupcakes are prpular as twisted as it may seem to some people.
I did like the picture joke though, putting captions to pictures is awesome
103477 Don't worry, I know. I was raised with horror movies and death metal, kinda weird that I found a liking in MLP:FiM but sometimes stuff is just weirdly put together. And yes captions to pictures are awesome!
My only fear: DON'T GIVE FLUTTERSHY A PAINFUL DEATH. I BEG YOU
This certainly looks interesting. Oddly enough, my only objection is against those plutonium shelves. Somehow I doubt Twilight would want her private collection of grimoires and unspeakable tomes to be constantly exposed to radiation. That stuff will drastically reduce the shelf life of a book. And, of course, there's the little matter of everything else getting a healthy dose of beta rads to boot...
Aside from that, this is a horribly intriguing a story. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
104254 Oh dear irony. I end up pretty much going over terminology and stuff to make things accurate (and next chapter has quite a bit), and I don't check the properties of the random metal I picked out for the bookshelf. The one thing I didn't look up. I think I'll give that a change before I post up chapter 2 (I'll put that chapter up tomorrow).
Glad you like it so far, though! Also, I really like that word "grimoires", it just sounds cool! *scurries off to Wikipedia to find a more proper metal to use*
I don't think that there's anything cooler than reading this awesome work by my best friend. For those of you who don't know much about the author, she's pretty much the most coolest person and the best friend anyone could ever have. My dear Knickerbocker you have always been so creative and had such a great mind for writing and such. I'm so proud of you and I can't wait to keep reading! Love you!
Whoops, forgot to add. Btwwwww really like your style of writing and so far I really love the story. You know I haven't followed the My Little Pony stuff so much like you and I wasn't sure if I'd be so interesting because I don't know so much about it but I totally loved it and caught onto everything quickly. Really great story!
So awesome
You know what? Never mind
Is It A Good Idea To Microwave This?
After reading a fiction also catalogued under 'gore' and having to stop because it made no sense anymore, I have the lowest expectancies about this, specially with how this first chapter ends.
But we will see...
I think you mean 'thick'. Also, double space at the beginning of the sentence.
Damn it, why is it always Rainbow? Cupcakes, now this? Jesus Rainbow, for the strongest pony around, you sure do seem to get captured and slowly and brutally ripped apart a lot.
what the fu is going on